What a chapter! There are a lot of threads coming together. So much double-talk too, whether intentional or unknowingly. With Marin leading Jasper to a meeting with his friends thinking they were just getting to know one another. Rhys and Anthix pointing out strangeness in Jasper's taking to pet life and a very believable interpretation of why for Rhys given neither knows of the meddling with Jasper's mind. Every time Rhys considers that Jasper could be using him - that we know isn't the case - my heart hurts just like his does. If only he could have seen that interaction in the roof garden. But could he believe it wasn't all an act with the crew in on it. That's the trouble with trust, isn't it? I am both excited by and dreading the plan to discover and prove that Jasper has had his mind altered. It's true but he's just so happy and I fear Rhys is going to get the blame from Anthix, the crew, and Jasper. Not only that but Rhys fearing that Jasper only loves him because he was programmed to and not because there was genuine affection there even before the memory machine and subsequent training. Hopefully he can remember their early interactions before the training took hold. I think that's my biggest apprehension. Naturally, conflict is where drama happens but I just want them all to be happy and get along. So, again, excited and dreading the tension and aching hearts of what I imagine may happen. The crew infiltrating the school labs will be interesting too. Can they pull it off? Jasper's plan was great if only Rhys hadn't recognised him so it should work even better with these unknowns. Except Iskios, since they met in the slums. But then, what are the chances Rhys is visiting the campus again when a heist is going down. I really love that Jasper can feel happy where he is and still feel he's doing good with Rhys for the place he came from. Julian being the one most pissed off is deliciously amusing to me given it was his appearance that helped train Jasper into this mindset in the first place. That must be a little confusing for Jasper even though he consciously knows it wasn't really Julian. There's so much more to talk about but it's just gushing. Sex scenes with bonding, acceptance, exhibitionism, tenderness. Then there's all the delicious character stuff to enjoy. So good. Thank you both for another chapter. Loved it.

I am curious about a few things. One, when is this story coming back for another chapter and will it have an ending? Two, what is the ratio of straight to bi to gay now? I feel like there is almost no straight people but the changes I thought made 30% of people gay, but maybe I remembered wrong. Three, I know this is probably the wrong site to ask this, but with the sexercise edit, can we see how more of the women are getting buff as well? Finally, is Sam going to end up gay/bi or is he always going to be this "straight" person with a heavily altered conception of straight? Great work as always, though I can't wait for the next chapter.

I know nobody read this piece but… I submitted this play to a competition in Maryland and won 2nd place!! Bitter is getting produced! It’s just shouting into the void at this point, but I’m so proud of myself. This site may have not been the best place for a work like this, but I’m still grateful anyway that I had somewhere to put it so others could enjoy. Thanks ❤️

Loved this chapter. It is truly becoming a guilty pleasure. I have enjoyed the mind control and the sex gets better with each chapter. Who knew our childhood stories held such deeper meanings. 😂 I can’t wait till I see the next update.

Himbo 4 life. This was enjoyable. Can't as for the next update.

I'm not into slow burns. This story is like my candles. I am enjoying the time with your characters. I hope you continue. This chapter was not that long. I felt it helped give me a perspective of where this story is headed. Loved it.

Absolutely stellar. So well paced and so much heart in the sexiness. Already impatient for the next installment. Thank you for this gift of a story

This becomes more intriguing and mystical with every chapter, keep up the excellent work!

Not to rush you or anything but I DESPERATELY NEED MORE INSTALLMENTS OF THIS HOT, SILLY SERIES!!!!! That's all.

I’m really digging the slow burn! It has me curious what’s happening mentally in Jack and Finn, and I’m also curious about the parallels between the MMO Jack plays and what Rada plays. I’m sure you’re drawing out something fiendishly clever and I’m looking forward to it!