Recent Comments

10/23/22, 8:24 AM
The worst thing about this story is that I have to wait to read the next chapter lol XD I am so invested in Nick and Darius's story at this point. It was hard getting to know more about Nick's family and what Darius's opinion on them and then not having the next chapter to look forward to! I'm getting so much more detail about these characters and I'm loving their relationship. Additionally, I loved learning how much Nick and his parents have golden retriever energy! I can't wait to have golden retriever Nick back :D My favorite parts are when Nick subconsciously craves Darius's attention. Whether it's asking him what's so funny with the whipped cream on his nose, or touching him all over in the middle of the cafe, or resting his head in his lap on the car ride home or wanting him to sleep next to him on his bed. I loved reading every single moment! I already want them to just be a lovey dovey couple with a D/s dynamic but I guess I'm enjoying this slow burn :') Also as a dominant bottom myself it's so heartwarming to see a character that I can identify with...I feel seen :) I really enjoyed learning more about the zone. I can't wait to find out what it truly is and how it completely works. I do hope that you don't choose to remove it from Nick! Really really enjoying your story! I check your profile almost every other day for an update! I hope we get to see another one soon!
10/23/22, 4:14 AM
He's excellently written I'll give you that. That does make my desire for him to be run over by a bus any less valid.
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10/22/22, 7:45 PM
An interesting and very, very hot story(as usual), one that I don't think I've seen much like before. Looking forward to the next chapter! Can't wait to see what comes next

10/22/22, 8:07 PM
@[Wishful Thinking](/user/show/958307) Whatever it is, I'll try make it sexy and lewd
10/22/22, 7:44 PM
Very creative! Perverse wholesomeness is a favourite of mine! I'm glad to see another story from you.
10/22/22, 6:51 PM
Wonderful!

10/22/22, 6:56 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) Thank you!
10/22/22, 5:44 PM
Mmmmm, yummy!

10/22/22, 6:56 PM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) Thank you!
10/22/22, 3:49 AM
Such an interesting, complicated mess of a story. I am waiting with bated breath for more! 😛😛😛
10/12/22, 5:24 PM
I think about this story everyday, I can’t wait for the sequel!! Please post soon!!

10/12/22, 9:16 PM
@[Elmara](/user/show/910352) Hi! Thank you so much! It seems as though there won't be more published about these characters after all as sadly the other author and I have had a falling out! If you like, you can message me and I can share the unedited drafts of where we did get to for this.

10/15/22, 1:59 AM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) Oh my God this is such a bummer, I can’t believe it ;( was so excited for the sequel! Would you maybe consider continue the story on your own? This is super special to me and I’d really love to see more of it. But I understand if you don’t want to write it anymore. And yes, I’d love to see the drafts you had for chapter 2, thank you so much! You can send them to me at aumar_e@gmail.com. Thanks! And please, consider continuing this on your own! All the love

10/21/22, 10:33 PM
@[Elmara](/user/show/910352) Thanks for the comment! I'm sorry to have to give you that news. I tried to email the address you gave me with the draft but it bounced. Let me know if there's another address that I should send it to.

10/21/22, 10:45 PM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) I’m so sorry - it’s aumar_e@hotmail.com Thank you so much! Well, I’d be looking out for stories from you nonetheless :)
10/18/22, 2:31 PM
Amazing as always. So many great moments and exciting new directions to take the story. I had a feeling Tanner would somehow tempt Jiang with his powers and make an ally of him but I had not guessed he would actually give Jiang powers himself. I love that even though Jiang goes into this agreement head first and fully aware of Tanners powers and perversion, he is still mostly blind to just how much Tanner is actually influencing him. He is genuinely surprised in the end that Tanner does not give him any orders he has to obey when in fact the very things he has just done to his school mates and the things he is about to do to his own Dad is exactly the orders that Tanner would have given him. I also love these small tidbits of Tanner playing with various other people. Like the judge at the start of the story whom I presume is going to have a very different appreciation for his nephew now, even though Tanner barely spent any time with him.

10/21/22, 7:14 PM
@[Lytcom](/user/show/602531) > I also love these small tidbits of Tanner playing with various other people. Like the judge at the start of the story whom I presume is going to have a very different appreciation for his nephew now, even though Tanner barely spent any time with him. I loved that too! Tanner's certainly not the kind that misses a chance of perverting someone into incestuous fervor :grin: And man I love him for that.