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Anonymous
10/24/22, 8:35 AM
That was a great conclusion to this series... I imagined it taking place around 2011 from the beginning of this story, and so Jake singing 'The Story of Us' by Taylor Swift (released 2010) confirms my headcanon and also it's just a banger song tbh
10/23/22, 12:10 PM
Loved it! A nice variation on the theme with a more mischievous forest spirit or fey to have fun with the boys and brig them closer together. Hot and fun!

10/23/22, 2:26 PM
@[Essex](/user/show/909447) Thank you! And there's still lots of mischief to be had!
10/23/22, 12:20 PM
Brilliant story. Please write more. Love adult baby, scat etc
10/23/22, 8:24 AM
The worst thing about this story is that I have to wait to read the next chapter lol XD I am so invested in Nick and Darius's story at this point. It was hard getting to know more about Nick's family and what Darius's opinion on them and then not having the next chapter to look forward to! I'm getting so much more detail about these characters and I'm loving their relationship. Additionally, I loved learning how much Nick and his parents have golden retriever energy! I can't wait to have golden retriever Nick back :D My favorite parts are when Nick subconsciously craves Darius's attention. Whether it's asking him what's so funny with the whipped cream on his nose, or touching him all over in the middle of the cafe, or resting his head in his lap on the car ride home or wanting him to sleep next to him on his bed. I loved reading every single moment! I already want them to just be a lovey dovey couple with a D/s dynamic but I guess I'm enjoying this slow burn :') Also as a dominant bottom myself it's so heartwarming to see a character that I can identify with...I feel seen :) I really enjoyed learning more about the zone. I can't wait to find out what it truly is and how it completely works. I do hope that you don't choose to remove it from Nick! Really really enjoying your story! I check your profile almost every other day for an update! I hope we get to see another one soon!
10/23/22, 4:14 AM
He's excellently written I'll give you that. That does make my desire for him to be run over by a bus any less valid.
CampletelyCrazy
10/22/22, 7:45 PM
An interesting and very, very hot story(as usual), one that I don't think I've seen much like before. Looking forward to the next chapter! Can't wait to see what comes next

10/22/22, 8:07 PM
@[Wishful Thinking](/user/show/958307) Whatever it is, I'll try make it sexy and lewd
10/22/22, 7:44 PM
Very creative! Perverse wholesomeness is a favourite of mine! I'm glad to see another story from you.
10/22/22, 6:51 PM
Wonderful!

10/22/22, 6:56 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) Thank you!
10/22/22, 5:44 PM
Mmmmm, yummy!

10/22/22, 6:56 PM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) Thank you!
10/22/22, 3:49 AM
Such an interesting, complicated mess of a story. I am waiting with bated breath for more! 😛😛😛
10/12/22, 5:24 PM
I think about this story everyday, I can’t wait for the sequel!! Please post soon!!

10/12/22, 9:16 PM
@[Elmara](/user/show/910352) Hi! Thank you so much! It seems as though there won't be more published about these characters after all as sadly the other author and I have had a falling out! If you like, you can message me and I can share the unedited drafts of where we did get to for this.

10/15/22, 1:59 AM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) Oh my God this is such a bummer, I can’t believe it ;( was so excited for the sequel! Would you maybe consider continue the story on your own? This is super special to me and I’d really love to see more of it. But I understand if you don’t want to write it anymore. And yes, I’d love to see the drafts you had for chapter 2, thank you so much! You can send them to me at aumar_e@gmail.com. Thanks! And please, consider continuing this on your own! All the love

10/21/22, 10:33 PM
@[Elmara](/user/show/910352) Thanks for the comment! I'm sorry to have to give you that news. I tried to email the address you gave me with the draft but it bounced. Let me know if there's another address that I should send it to.

10/21/22, 10:45 PM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) I’m so sorry - it’s aumar_e@hotmail.com Thank you so much! Well, I’d be looking out for stories from you nonetheless :)
10/18/22, 2:31 PM
Amazing as always. So many great moments and exciting new directions to take the story. I had a feeling Tanner would somehow tempt Jiang with his powers and make an ally of him but I had not guessed he would actually give Jiang powers himself. I love that even though Jiang goes into this agreement head first and fully aware of Tanners powers and perversion, he is still mostly blind to just how much Tanner is actually influencing him. He is genuinely surprised in the end that Tanner does not give him any orders he has to obey when in fact the very things he has just done to his school mates and the things he is about to do to his own Dad is exactly the orders that Tanner would have given him. I also love these small tidbits of Tanner playing with various other people. Like the judge at the start of the story whom I presume is going to have a very different appreciation for his nephew now, even though Tanner barely spent any time with him.

10/21/22, 7:14 PM
@[Lytcom](/user/show/602531) > I also love these small tidbits of Tanner playing with various other people. Like the judge at the start of the story whom I presume is going to have a very different appreciation for his nephew now, even though Tanner barely spent any time with him. I loved that too! Tanner's certainly not the kind that misses a chance of perverting someone into incestuous fervor :grin: And man I love him for that.
10/21/22, 7:06 PM
Oh, loved it! :heart: If anyone had to become something close to a sidekick, that was definitely Jiang! It's been clear from the very start that all he craves in life is power, so of course he was tempted! And what a demon-like thing to do, alluring men into the darkness using their deepest desires. Classic, yet so hot. Also, I can't believe how much that kiss must have hurt! Like keeping a sea urchin in your mouth. So painful! But that makes sense as well, after all Tanner's gift comes from his own mouth. Jiang's always wanted power, sure, but he is also constantly trying to prove that he's better than everybody else. And part of that may steam from the pressure he's always received from his parents, specially his father. Being the best gymnast, being the best debate speaker, carrying along the family's good name... No wonder he wants to just become his own person (and maybe shove it in his father's face). So yeah, I'm really excited to see how his story unravels :blush: P.S. That lovely kitty cat there is famous for shifting things towards a very different directions. I wonder what he's up to this time :smiley_cat:
10/21/22, 7:28 AM
This story is just wonderful, each character is developed so well, every fairy tale element fits in flawlessly. I'll be here for the next 50 chapters and beyond :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

10/21/22, 3:15 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) Thank you, Norismo! I'm so glad you're enjoying it still. Hopefully I can keep you entertained and feeling good for a while longer.
10/20/22, 8:59 PM
Sam is just hot. I’m enjoying this story. It is funny and has a wittiness, I find enjoyable. Keep up the good work. :)

10/21/22, 4:18 AM
@[Steve Jones](/user/show/10023070) Thank you, Steve! I'm glad you're still enjoying the story and the craziness within. More to come!
10/21/22, 3:40 AM
Ready for the next chapter!!! Nice work so far!!!
10/21/22, 1:32 AM
A very exciting turn with Jiang and he certainly took to it like water. Really looking forward to him talking to his father.
10/20/22, 4:26 PM
As usual, another sweet, wholesome chapter, excellently well-written as always!

10/20/22, 4:36 PM
@[Twan Andersen](/user/show/10018149) Thank you, Twan, great praise coming from you!
10/20/22, 11:01 AM
Jiang is great. Each of the characters remains really distinct and it's so much fun to read.
10/20/22, 1:18 AM
I cannot describe how hot this whole story thread is. I never want it to end.
10/19/22, 9:08 PM
This was a fun and cute story. Thanks for posting it.

Sebastián Apollo
10/20/22, 12:00 AM
@[BlindSeer0](/user/show/381024) Thank you for the kind words! That's exactly what I was going for - short and sweet, to the point!
10/19/22, 10:19 PM
Now this is the kind of content I’ve been coming here for! Hot, horny jocks getting it on with wild fervour, a pinch of force, and a heaping helping of roughness, I can never get enough. I dug the description of the blowjob—sloppy, gagging blowjobs are my favourite kind to read and write. The laissez-faire nature of these jocks’ perspective on gay sex-adjacent activities is another favourite theme. I wonder if you might use italics a bit too much—a maxim repeatedly beaten into me was that “too much emphasis is no emphasis at all”, and it’s hard to appreciate a moment of emphasis if you see three others coming close on its heels. Regardless, your descriptions are very good and enthralling on their own. At risk of an overly lengthy comment, I’m also very happy with the representation—I find a dearth of minority representation in gay erotica at large and there’s only a few authors I know of that bring it in (thinking of blobbyblobfish, who has a significant amount of disability rep). All in all, I’m looking forward to more! Glad to have another _great_ writer here on Cupid.

Sebastián Apollo
10/19/22, 11:59 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thank you so much for the kind words, I appreciate it. I know I overuse the italics, it's a bad habit! So I'll keep a mental note of that for my next and current works. _Especially appreciative of your noticing of my minority representation_ - I talk about this in my profile, but I do try to make a conscientious effort to include Hispanic/Latino representation in my stories, considering I'm one myself and I find folks who look like to be underrepresented in porn and sex work. So you pointing that out kinda confirmed it for me, haha! I don't consider myself "great", but thank you for the gracious comment!
10/19/22, 2:37 PM
I loved this very much! I appreciated the close look into both the personalities and the sexualities of Mark and Tim and I thought you built them up quite nicely as characters. Their family had personality, too, and it was a lot of sweet interaction, slowly building into character development for the whole family. Stories that are semi-pornographic, semi-story-focused are my bread and butter. I love writing them and I love reading them, and this very much scratched that itch! Thanks for this beautiful story.

10/19/22, 2:41 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thank you very much, Soren! Your feedback means a lot! I was apprehensive it wasn't naughty enough for a story in a kinky site, but it seems it is good enough :-)

10/19/22, 5:22 PM
@[topdog](/user/show/913845) Maybe not for all current readers—but for future readership I’m sure it’s naughty enough! The way I see this site is as a place for original gay fiction that has mature elements (and, sometimes, no sex—see Brad Yetts). I write tons of porn-with-plot—a lot of plot. And there’s an audience for that, even if not all of them have found their way here. Stick with it and let’s keep populating the site with this kind of writing!
10/18/22, 9:42 PM
This literally gets better and better. AMAZING work.
Jonanator
10/17/22, 7:35 PM
Very interesting

10/18/22, 12:58 PM
@[Jonanator ](/user/show/863971) Thank you! I am excited for what I have planned.
10/17/22, 4:39 PM
I’m curious about what this story will entail! I like the little threads you’ve set up, and I’ll certainly be following future chapters to see what happens.

10/18/22, 12:58 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thank You! I am going to try to have at least one chapter a week out. I have a good idea timeline going.
10/18/22, 12:26 PM
One of the best stories on this site
10/18/22, 1:49 AM
This is the best story! Thank you
Strppdinchgo
10/18/22, 12:55 AM
Just read the entire series, up through this one - straight through. Fucking amazing. You're a terrific writer and I can't wait for the next one!