Recent Comments

11/6/22, 12:13 AM
Oh wow. A nice Hollywood-type ending, most appropriate for this saga. Bravo for a wonderfully hot and romantic story!!
11/5/22, 1:39 PM
Hey Darby!! Thanks so much for the positive comments (& suggestion)!! Happy to hear that you're continuing to enjoy the storyline!! ENJOY your weekend!:innocent:

11/5/22, 6:34 PM
It’s so hot ! @[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379)

11/5/22, 9:22 PM
@[Marcus](/user/show/10024751) Thanks, Marcus!! Glad you are enjoying it!! ENJOY your weekend!! :innocent:
11/5/22, 12:22 PM
Another great chapter., would love to see Superman forced to perform his homosexual song and dance for the people of metropolis and have them turn on their defeated, degraded, saviour. Would really had to the humiliation of the cock crazy faggot supaslut boi. But I trust whatever else you have in store would be amazing.
11/4/22, 6:53 PM
Ciao ZAI!! Your praise & positive comments continue to humble me...:innocent: I will keep your clothing fetish in mind when outlining the upcoming chapters-- I think I have a HOT SURPRISE coming that you'll REALLY ENJOY (Chapter 11)!! In the meantime, hopefully Chapter 8 will go up sometime today & I'm happy to hear that keep surprising you (and of course, ROCK HARD)!!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: Wishing U a FUN, relaxing weekend!:smiling_imp:
11/4/22, 2:05 PM
Ciao ZAI!! Thank YOU 4 your excitement about the upcoming chapters-- I hope to please you & the other readers with the direction(s) of the story!! P.S. With respect to your question-- Chapter 8 is uploaded already & its currently being reviewed for approval, which I hope will happen soon, so that you & others are able to satiate your/their "kink appetitites" for the upcoming weekend!!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: This is honestly "my first go" at writing gay erotica/kink, although I've been a HUGE fan of other writers work on this site/other sources, e.g., Jack Parker, Cicero, Hector Oppenheimer, Oliverclaudiusdarcy and others, so I encourage you to follow your inspiration and "put pen to paper" (as the saying goes)!! Ciao Bello & ENJOY the weekend!!:innocent:
11/4/22, 5:33 AM
Hey ZAI!! Thanks again for your continued inspiring comments!! They fuel/energize me to be MORE creative, brainstorm new twists & turns for Superman, which allows me to really get "my kink on"-- BTW...I'm awaiting approval for PART 8 to launch, but I already have Parts 9 & 10 uploaded!! Hope you will ENJOY them thoroughly over the weekend!!:wink:

Zai
11/4/22, 8:48 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) Oh Wow! 3 new up-cumming h🔥t new chapters. Yahoo! Just a quick query - why do you need approval to upload chapter 8? Is that just standard for gayspiralstories? Eventually, I'd like to write some gay fiction/fanfiction and publish it on this site. Thanks for the informing me about the treat I and my fellow readers get to enjoy soon! Ciao, Dude! 😀😁😛😜
11/3/22, 1:10 PM
Ciao ZAI!! LMAO....you sure know how to INSPIRE me!!! I assure you...your vivid curiosities will hopefully be satiated soon enough!!! DEF Feeling your exciting kink ENERGY through your positive words, praise & suggestions-- it fuels me to only sharpen my creative mind to execute a better story 4U & the other readers!! THANK YOU from the depths of my kinky mind-- U have yourself an AWESOME day!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

Zai
11/4/22, 5:13 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) Yo! Dude! Thanks for your positivity! It's very refreshing and adds more smiles to my day! Yes, I do love me some studs in various articles of clothing. Especially really tight and finely tailored items. Skintight Speedos & jocks. Suits. Chinos & jeans. Wrestling, baseball, football, etc uniforms. Cop, military, etc uniforms... Especially motorcycle cops 👅. Etc, etc, etc. I'm excited to read how you develop this fine, kinky story. You have definitely surprised me more than once and yes, you via this erotic adventure have left me... ummmm... errrr... well, rock hard from hot dreams... ... ... lol... 🛏😴😲 Adios, Dude!
11/3/22, 1:20 PM
Ciao ZAI!! THANK YOU (again), Sir-- I'm humbled by your multiple messages of positivity this AM!!! I really enjoyed writing this chapter (if you can't tell!), especially cuckolding Supes & Jimmy's multiple confrontations w/the hero during the sensual massaging of Luthor-- most of what's occurring with Jimmy is drug-induced, but he certainly seems to be enjoying the sexual aspects of his newfound kink and I hope you approve of the upcoming clothing (or lack thereof) in the forthcoming installments!! Happy WET Dreams, kind Sir!!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

Zai
11/4/22, 4:59 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) I'm quite certain I'll enjoy the series as you progress the story. It's like a multiple course meal at a 5 st☆r restraunt, with several tasty 'Cock'tails before the meal. And let's not forget dessert and the afters then a glass of port. Of course, like Jimmy, Supes newly acquired desire (bad pun, lol) for cock & cum is mainly drug induced. PLUS, both have the main ingredient changing them; this being the villainous genius of Lex Luther... and his huge cock which he uses like a pendulum/watch to hypnotize his bois. 🖤💙💚👅👅👅👅👅👅💚💙🖤
Zai
11/3/22, 10:17 AM
Yup! All three dudes, Superman, Python, and Jimmy are 100% Lex' enthralled cock and cum slaves. So it seems at this point, Jimmy will be the lucky hunk to pop SuperFaggot's virgin Kryptonian Kunt! Lucky, lucky boi, indeed! I hope you dress Superman in some sexy clothes... a skintight Speedo or Wrestling gear, maybe a jockstrap as he wrestles his once loved buddy. Jimmy definitely took to cock and cum. That little red-headed Slut has been Bitched quite well. Thanks and I'll send you the dry cleaning bill for the wet dreams I'm certain to have, lol!
11/2/22, 1:35 PM
This was such a joy to read! And super hot, too, enough that it helped me to read it over multiple sessions. It definitely hit a whole ton of my buttons—demons with wild transformations, obscenely huge cocks, _tons_ of cum? As hot as the whole thing was I swear my favourite part was Jesús cumming in the shower. The sheer amount gets me going so bad, and this was an instant favourite click for that. I think you accomplished the slower burn really well. Intense homoeroticism can be accomplished as much with literal boning as with many other elements of sexual tension and you definitely captured some of those other ways to hotness! Also, I feel like you used italics to much better effect in this one. As usual, great writing, great descriptions, and I’m looking forward to more!

Sebastián Apollo
11/2/22, 8:16 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thank you so much, I always enjoy your comments. It was definitely a lot of fun to write; a lot of my stories are more "grounded", if that makes any sense, so it was fun to let loose. I am a fan of the slow burn as well as the hot boning, so I'm glad it wasn't too long as I tried to leave those traces of homoeroticism sprinkled throughout the work. And yes, thank you for your advice on the italics, I took it to heart on this one haha!

11/3/22, 4:57 AM
@[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736) I think I get what you're saying about your stories being more grounded! I guess there's two ways to think about it: whether it could be happening in real life, in a certain sense, or whether it's logically consistent and followable in a way that doesn't demand very strong suspension of disbelief. I personally prefer the latter--I think a story can be really grounded in that sense as long as you knit everything together and don't make crazy jumps, even if there's fantastical shit going on. Besides, the desire to "ground" something that's fantastical tends to lead to a lot of cool ideas and conclusions you can make within the context of your stories. Asking myself the question "how do I make cool hot thing make sense?" usually makes it cooler and hotter. Anyway, looking forward to seeing more from you!
11/2/22, 1:31 PM
Hey ZAI....You JUST made my day--THANKS a MILLION for your positive comments (& suggestions)!! YES, I do plan to bring Batman into the storyline, as well as some of the Titans (as I'm primed UP 4 the Season 4 tomorrow)!!! I appreciate ALL of your thoughts/suggestions/insights & will do my BEST to incorporate some of them into the upcoming storyline-- in fact, as I read your comments, it's provided me an inspirational brainstorm to pivot from a forthcoming scene which could introduce the Caped Crusader, although my focus will still be DEFINITELY concentrating on the ongoing degradation, subjugation & humilation of the Supabitch-- but THANK YOU, Sir-- I'm humbled-- Have an AWESOME day!!:innocent:

Zai
11/3/22, 4:50 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) You deserve positive praise and thanks for creating, writing & sharing this wonderful AU! Yay! Batman will eventually make an appearance and hopefully become part of Luthor's Lascivious Superhero Harem! Where nothing but muscled pretty boi studly men are always at the ready to service their Master's multitude of carnal needs! I'm excited to read who officially will be popping Superman's virgin Suppa-ass-pussy! Will it be Python, wearing a reptile print Speedo as he plows that Super-cunt? Jimmy, shoving his newly enlarged, angry red cock-rocket up his one-time pals twat? Or his true Master? His only real Master? Lex Luthor! The hottest bald hunk ever? With his humongous cock of death? Ramming and pulverizing the supremely tight, virgin Superman-honey-hole as he has the Kryptonian in a white jockstrap while he's wearing a scarlet, sheer Speedo?! Can you tell I've got a ripe and vivid clothing fetish/kink!?!? Ciao!
11/3/22, 12:54 AM
Hey Darby!! Glad you're enjoying the successive chapters & ongoing storyline!! Also, pleased you're saving this chapter for bedtime-- Hope that you thoroughly ENJOY it!! BTW...I can ASSURE you that this is NOT the end....I already several chapters "waiting in the wings"... I'm just doing "some fine tuning" before I publish them!! Sleep well, my friend!!:innocent:
11/2/22, 8:06 AM
Excellent story!

11/2/22, 10:30 PM
Thank you! @[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380)
Sebastián Apollo
11/1/22, 8:34 PM
Very well done! From the beginning hook to the effects taking place to the aftermath, everything kept my attention throughout. You even gave me a couple of interesting new names for me to look up - so extra points coming from a name nerd. Good work, and a very worthy contender!

11/2/22, 10:29 PM
Thank you so much! I’m really happy that you enjoyed the story: I was straight-up rushing to finish it since I decided to go for it like a week before the deadline, and reading it now there’s some parts that I definitely could have changed or shortened, but I’m overall very happy with and proud of it as my first ever explicit work, and I’m even happier that people can be entertained by it. (Also glad I was able to do something cool in the names part of things, haha.) @[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736)
11/2/22, 8:41 PM
Saving this chapter for bed time but definitely hoping this isn’t the final chapter, .
11/1/22, 12:51 AM
You did such a good job of worldbuilding and kicking this off with a wonderful, immersive atmosphere. The creation of the question game had such an element of fae creatures and fairytales, like Rumpelstiltskin and what have you. I’ll be honest and say that those fantastical, immersive elements came and went for me — I think they could have been carried through the action a little more thoroughly to elevate the sex scene beyond the already high level it reached. Regardless, this story is an accomplishment! You swung for the fences, and your love of the craft of writing shines through. Excellent work!

11/2/22, 5:51 PM
@[Noam de Pluma](/user/show/1403470) Yeah, I felt like the question game would really add to the mystique and I’m glad you liked it! I really wanted to get that immersive vibe and have that carry people through the story—it’s only that last sex scene that I didn’t have time to perfect or even spiritualise. But I appreciate you noticing my love for “the craft of writing”—I wanted to make this something that was really truly good _work_, and I think for the time I had I knit together something that let my skill shine through. Thanks for reading! And may the following chapters contain much more spiritual sex…
11/2/22, 11:45 AM
Simultaneously sublime and ridiculous.
Zai
11/2/22, 10:26 AM
Holy Butt Fuck'in & Cock Suck'in, Dude! This is one H🔥T and 'Sin'tillating tale of debauchery and hidden lust revealed! The way you've written Superman's dive into the world of wicked passions since chapter one for me reveals his truest, innermost self concerning his sexuality. Superman, aka Clark Kent is a natural born cock craving, cum guzzling bottom boi. Lex has brought out the Superhero stud's need to be dominated; both with words and actions. The once clean cut Kryptonian hero is now a dirty, turned out slut whore submissive, a true BITCH! Superman, aka SuppaFag, aka SuperQueer, aka Supercocksuker, etc, etc, etc, is now and will always be Lex Luthor's prime, grade A turned out Slave! I cannot wait for more of this orgasmic AU! Are you planning on bringing Batman into the story? I'd love read about Lex capturing the Caped Crusader as the superhero is snooping about. Then, oh then, the bald, supervillainous stud makes Batman his next hero to Be Bitched! I sooooooo imagine Batman in his classic physique hugging body suit with those Skin Tight briefs! And Lex eventually fucks Batman's mouth and ass with wild abandon. Unlike stripping the Superman out of his costume, Lex slits Batman's Speedo-like briefs right over his hole and then plows the sexy hunk hero into Neverland. Forever! As the hot villain bitch's Batman, he uses Batman's penchant for calling items Bat-? Like Bat-mobile or Bat-arang, etc. But as he's conquering another hero ass, Lex uses terms such as Bat-pussy/Bat-cunt, etc, further cementing his new, dominating hold on the Caped Crusader. Plus, Lex will then be able to gain access and control of Bruce Wayne's companies, holdings and monies. Thanks for sharing, Dude! You Rock!
11/2/22, 8:35 AM
It was an interesting concept, without a doubt and well-written as always, but the sexy part of it felt like an afterthought and rushed, as if making sure you fulfilled a checklist. Honestly would have been better had it not been specifically featured, but implied.
Flamefox23
11/2/22, 4:52 AM
Kinda wish he kept the double peen but o well. Good story, fun read.
11/2/22, 2:55 AM
THANK YOU, Darby!! Appreciate your comments & encouragement!! I am humbled to deliver a storyline that you & the other readers/group members can/will ENJOY!! Believe me, I've got MORE in store for SUPERMAN!!:wink:
Chriscam
11/1/22, 11:35 PM
Congrats and THANKS!! For your work. I'm a big fan. Just hope see the chapter 4 in the Halloween party today or so... ;)
11/1/22, 9:07 PM
Thanks, Darby!! Appreciate your positive comments & encouragement-- I've been a HUGE Superman fan since I was a kid, but when seeing some of the original films & he was "matched up against a villain", I've always wanted some of the movies/storylines to "push the envelope", i.e., withh him being feeling more dominated & humiliated --so I hope I'm satisfying you/the other readers with this series!! :innocent:
11/1/22, 5:59 AM
What a pleasure! May these two dorks be very happy. And if one day the Price-Milagros household happens to have a poolboy with a whiff of sulfur...well, I'm sure a cum price can be negotiated. Seriously, though, tremendous work! It's remarkable how light you kept it while still bringing all the fun of demon magic.

Sebastián Apollo
11/1/22, 5:38 PM
@[Ganymede and Co.](/user/show/956270) Thank you so much! It was fun to try something a lil' different, so I'm glad others enjoyed!
PotatoSlices
11/1/22, 3:00 PM
Take a shot every time someone says "fuck". No seriously :joy: Other than that minor detail, a nice ending and everyone's happy... except maybe Vic's wife lol
billi
11/1/22, 9:46 AM
i... dont get the ending - if it is the ending :D
11/1/22, 9:15 AM
I love a good cock shrink story especially when he’s a jock. Loved it. More please.
11/1/22, 4:21 AM
This was really excellent, you split the difference between porn, fluff and prose perfectly. Definitely one of the best I’ve read on here, this one is a story I’ll remember.

11/1/22, 8:14 AM
Thank you! It’s the first time I’m doing smut, actually, but I thought this Halloween challenge would be a great opportunity to at least try; it was a lot of fun to write, and I’m really glad you liked it so much! @[11037](/user/show/13616)