Recent Comments

Iriefal
11/7/22, 7:09 PM
Thanks for updating, I love the story and I hope for HE. I want to see coach fall for may as well 💘
obligatonym
11/7/22, 5:52 PM
Call me a sappy helpless romantic, but I like it when a story is about more than just dicks and fucking and there are actual amotions. <3
11/7/22, 4:19 AM
Actually, SQ....thinking of the 4 brothers-in-law.....maybe you could do a short epilogue with Wes and Zeb, like 3-5 years later...maybe they're actually celebrating Halloween as well as Haasenpfaapeer...and Vic could come on over for ....a drink or something. ;)
11/7/22, 1:48 AM
That dick #2 is cut is just such a brilliant bit of detail for Wes to focus on. Many, I am _loving_ your character work in this series! And the second orgasm was _chef’s kiss_. Masterful stuff.
11/6/22, 9:04 PM
Did we skip a chapter someplace? From what was posted we have Chapter 15, then the unnumbered one, followed by Chapter 18. Somewhere, it appears, we lost either chapter 16 or 17.

11/7/22, 12:38 AM
@[John Manning](/user/show/241691) Sorry, I messed up the number. This is chapter 17, let me fix it.

11/7/22, 12:38 AM
@[John Manning](/user/show/241691) Thanks for the heads up!
11/6/22, 11:19 PM
Oh, Neemie… so hot, so zany, so creative, so _funny_… what a gem of a story.
Nutiper
10/25/22, 11:14 PM
Holy shit. The eyes are the nipples of the face and mine are _very_ 👀 right now Excited for Maarkeilscaant tomorrow! Wahoo!

11/6/22, 11:19 PM
@[Nutiper](/user/show/25270) Hah! _Somebody_ watched their DRUK s3 snatch game…
11/6/22, 11:03 PM
My goodness, Neemie, but if you aren’t a master at conveying character and personality right from the get-go. This is an exciting start and I am _here_ for the next chapter!
11/6/22, 10:45 PM
I like it, I hope to see more of it soon
11/6/22, 10:02 PM
This seems like it has some fun worldbuilding and an interesting future story planned! Looking forward to more.