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11/9/22, 11:53 AM
Awesome story!

11/9/22, 3:05 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Thanks!
Zai
11/8/22, 2:28 PM
LOL, lol, lol... *cue dramatic music* 🎵dun, dun, dun...🎶 That ending is a fun and exciting cliffhanger! What will happen? Will Python go all beserker because now he'll know his Supabitch was being truthful and Lex had played him like a chump. 🎵dun, dun, dun...🎶 Will Python head to the arena to rescue his grade-A, prime superhero Slut from Lex' clutches? 🎵dun, dun, dun...🎶 Oh boy, the scenarios running rampant in my mind right now! 🎵dun, dun, dun...🎶 And just what will happen to Batman? Is a thourough bitching in his future? I swear, you've got a story that leaves we readers open to all sorts of kinky avenues of thought. I so excited to see who gets what from who. Will there be another orgy? If Batsy becomes a cock crazed whore, who gets to plunder his steamy holes? Will more superheroes appear to aid their fallen comrades only to become more of Luthor's depraved, sex slave pawns. 🎵dun, dun, dun...🎶 My heads gonna explode, lol... ... ... Thanks and ciao, Dude! 🎶🎵👅😛😜🤤👿

11/8/22, 3:21 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Ciao ZAI!! Once again, your opening lines have me doubled over in laughter (dun-dun-dun!!)!!! LMAO!! THANK YOU 4 your positive comments & subsequent EMBRACING of this chapter-- it warms "the cock-les of my heart"!!:smiling_imp: While you/the other readers' kinky minds have you exploring multiple avenues of potential desired results/scenarios... I hope that most will be pleased with how this cliffhanger is resolved!! It's a LOT to unpack, so it will probably evolve over a couple of chapters (at least), as "other facets" will be in-play simultaneously!! THRILLED to hear that I've "got you going" to the point of "your head exploding"!! (LOL) Again, eternally GRATEFUL 4 ALL your thoughts/feedback/ideas-- ENJOY your day, kind SIR--make the MOST of it!!!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

Zai
11/9/22, 8:41 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) 💼 I'm excited for the unpacking you'll be doing in the Up-Cumming chapters, SuperDude! 💼 AND SUPERDUDE? We are SO KINDRED SPIRITS, LOL! Cock-les, indeed!!! 😜👅 Oh yeah - from now on, I'll be referring to you as SuperDude! Okay? 😉 I'm thinking of writing a Batman|Bruce Wayne story, eventually. You've inspired me! Adios, SUPERDUDE!

11/9/22, 2:25 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) G'Mornin ZAI!! Thanks 4 your warm response, Kindred Spirit-- I'm TOTALLY diggin on the SuperDude moniker...:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: We are DEF on similar vybes/wavelengths--Now, what should I call U-- STUDboi, STUDmuffin or maybe...BigSurSTUD?!? U let me know, k? I'm SUPAexcited that I've inspired you to write a Batman/Bruce Wayne story...I can't wait 2 read it!! Hope you ENJOY the "unpacking" of the UP-CUMMING chapters!! You made my day-- Have an AWESOMELY Productive Day!!:innocent:
Zai
11/9/22, 8:27 AM
I'd state, quite vehemently, that your subjugation of the Man of Steel into the Man of Squeal by Lex (et. al.) has been one of the most deliciously diabolical I've ever read! And that you've added (once) squeaky clean Jimmy Olsen into the fold as one of Luthor's minions & bitches has been unique and hot, indeed! I must also note the Roid Rage Jimmy heaped on SupaDupaDipShite was not just the toxic cocktail and brainwashing Lex subjected the Daily Planet cub to. I'm feeling that boi held some envy towards Clark & Superman. Add in some latent, deep, deep seated homosexual desires; especially for Supes in his ultra-skintight, ultra-sexy costume that showcased all those muscles, that huge bulge, the muscular bubble-butt & the pretty-boi, movie star looks... ... ... ??? I'm surprised Jimmy didn't just rip those chick panties off that heroic ass and plow that farmboy's cunt deep and dirty right away, lol. Skip the wrestling and pop that 🍒virgin🍒 Supatwat into oblivion! Whoa, Dude! I'm now in much need for a cooling... naw, frigid shower ASAP! Before I explode, lol, lol, LOL! 🛁💣💥 Ciao, SuperDude!
11/8/22, 11:06 PM
Love the pup play part of superpups training. I wonder what is going to happen between Lex and Python? Can't wait for more.

11/9/22, 5:43 AM
@[Redcoma100](/user/show/41857) Hi Redcoma100!! Thanks 4 your positive comments & glad you're continuing to ENJOY the ongoing storyline! Happy 2 hear you're diggin the pup training--it's gonna continue to UNFOLD, so I hope you ENJOY it!! Lex & Python's "detente discussion" will also be an ever-evolving situation, which I hope will surprise (& satiate!) you/other readers!:smiling_imp: SO GR8FUL 4 your ongoing, positive support & Have a GR8 night!:innocent:
11/8/22, 10:35 PM
I'm not sure why but it's hot that Python continues to call Lex "master" even while having a complete meltdown. Maybe they'll arrive at some form of detente by "working off some steam" :smiling_imp:

11/9/22, 5:38 AM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) Hi Anarchomegalomaniac!! Thanks 4 your positive comments & glad you're continuing to ENJOY the ongoing storyline! The pup training & the detente discussion between Luthor & Python, will continue to unfold (in multiple layers), so I hope you ENJOY how it all "gets unpacked"!! Appreciate the positive support!! :smiling_imp:
11/8/22, 3:18 PM
Love what you did with Batman. I could just picture him in is new uniform. Oh that ending. What will Python do when he finds out his super slut was telling him the truth? I guess we will just have to wait and see what will happen in the next chapter.

11/8/22, 3:50 PM
@[Redcoma100](/user/show/41857) Hi Redcoma100!! Thanks 4 your positive comments & appreciation of the ongoing storyline!! Glad U were diggin on the "Python cliffhanger"-- there's DEF MORE 2 CUM (& unravel!) in forthcoming chapters, so please stay tuned to this BAT CHANNEL (LOL)!! VERY GR8FUL 4 the positivity & Have an SUPA-Day!:innocent:
Zai
11/8/22, 8:26 AM
My big question, Dude, is why is Bruce|Batman so friendly and cool with Lex? And the same for Dr. Strange? I realize this is an AU, but since you already had canon feels Superman v. Lex Luthor in the beginning of the story, I'd assume that Wayne and Strange would have suspicions towards Lex. Hmmmmmmm... ??? However, Bruce & Lex act like besties and Hugo being all into hypnotising and bringing down Superman (and even Batman) seemed a bit out of left field. I'm not criticising you nor this chapter. It just perplexed me in its content. Please don't hate me. 🤔 As you know, I was hoping more of the canon, ever alert and suspicious Caped Crusader arriving and beginning to put his detective skills to use. Then alas, the Dark Knight's investigating soon would bring him to becoming a bitched dick-tective, lol. Above all, though, this is your story, your plot, your visions. And I don't want to throw shade or aspersions on it. So I'm going to now comment on what occurred in this chapter. Lex is one sly fox, huh? Bringing in a big gun like Bruce Wayne|Batman to mentally root and cement Superman's recently submissive & cunted psyche. And it's such a delight that the cunted psyche has a direct link to Clark|Superman's whorish and slutty oral and anal holes. It's going to be interesting to read the dialog you write that's going to occur between Bruce & Clark. Plus, will Bruce be Bruce Wayne or Batman & will Superman be in some slutty attire or his superhero costume, etc? Will Bruce|Batman be converted to ultimately top or bottom? I'm voting an utter bottom bitch, lol. That way Lex has SupaSlut & BatBitch under his total control. Imagine what you wrote earlier about Lex wanting to whore out the Big Blue Boy scout. The huge amounts of $ bank$ that'll bring in. The same would be true about whoring out Batman. Joker, Riddler, Penguin, Killer Croc, Solomon Grundy, Deathstroke, etc, etc, etc, would pay msny millions to own Batsy for a night. Again, please don't take my opening thoughts as negative feelings. I express my thoughts, yes, but I don't ever want to hurt feelings. You have a very vivid and keen imagination which you're able to translate quite well into creative writing. Thanks and high-gives, Dude! 🤔😋😎😊😉🤗👅

11/8/22, 2:22 PM
@Zai Ciao ZAI! Thanks so much 4 your thoughts-- you have EVERY right to voice them in this forum!! To be completely honest, and for the context of this particular story, Lex & Bruce are seemingly more allies than adversaries-- being completely transparent, I adapted their "somewhat warmer, yet unexpected relationship" from the "Batman vs. Superman-- Dawn of Justice" movie (& ran with it)...while it may have been "predictable" for Bruce to be immediately wary, I "slanted" Lex's call to Bruce as a "call out of sincere concern" with respect to Superman's behavior/well-being...a bit of "develish trickery" on Lex's part (as he is one of the 2 principal characters in the AU):smiling_imp: With respect to Professor Strange, in my mind's eye, has already been established as an ally of Lex's (and a "warped character" himself), who's helped Mr. Luthor in previous stories (that I've read in the past-- "Strange Dealings: The Fall Of Superman"), so he was "a natural fit". Perhaps, I'll readdress this point (& well taken!) in upcoming chapters, as MORE is to unravel with the BAT soon enough!! Anyways, SIR, I do appreciate your thoughts/feedback/insight, but my "twisted kinky mind" takes the story in these directions, so no negative feelings at all...and I'm eternally GRATEFUL that you CARE enough about this storyline to spend "quality personal time" to meticulously address some of your thoughts/concerns-- THANK YOU & have a SUPA-Productive Day!!:innocent:

Zai
11/8/22, 2:36 PM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) You're cool, Dude! 😎 I'm glad you realized I wasn't being a dickwad, lol. And thanks for giving me a clear look at your vision and certain plot points. I for one truly appreciate all the time & effort you and other writers put into creating erotic stories for we starved fanfiction hounds. Adios and much gratitude! 😀😎😉👏👍🏻👌🏼✌🏼🖖👍🏻

11/8/22, 3:46 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Cheers ZAI!! Why THANK YOU, kind SIR!!! (-- bowing to you kindly!)! YOU are SOOOO NOT a "dickwad", my friend-- you voiced your honest opinion/concerns/questions about the story/characters, and I feel compelled to answer/explain your respective comments in the most transparent fashion...which I hope I did to the best of your satisfaction! Zai, I sincerely appreciate your feedback....you make my day with "your opening lines", comments & suggested desired storylines-- YOU INSPIRE ME!!!! I hope that you see/read that I take your comments to heart!! Many THANKS, Much GRATITUDE & Ciao 4 NOW!!!:innocent:
Zai
11/8/22, 2:43 PM
Hola, Amigo! No probs cutting and pasting. Yes, I love Big Sur! My parents have a beach house in Carmel, so we made many a pilgrimages to the pristine and raw beauty that is Big Sur; since I was a wee one. I hope you have a great day, too! Later, Gator! 😀😁

11/8/22, 3:39 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) THANKS, ZAI!!! Wow, your multiple experiences at the family house in Carmel & beauty of Big Sur sound AWESOME (& vividly picturesque)!! YOU ROCK, DUDE-- Much appreciated of your time/assistance in extending Chapter 8 some LOVE!! SUPA-GR8FUL & ENJOY the DAY, Sir!!:sunny:
Zai
11/8/22, 2:52 PM
Dude! Whoa! Smutty Heat delivered! I love Jimmy’s cock being the official first human - homo erectus- to plow his once bestie. And yes, that was my attempt at pun-ny humour, lol; homo erectus. Yes, the young lad had all the advantages against the once mighty superhero, but I didn’t read no complaints from the Man of Squeals, did I. No that cunted bitch was euphoric to be taken by Jimmy’s boi-cock. What a fucking whore Clark has be-cum, huh!?!? Adding in Jimmy's sexy wrestling singlet and SupaPussi's pink, specially embroidered panties, we were left wanting more wanton action. Congrats on another steamy chapter! Long live SupaSlut becoming more sub and cock/cum crazed like the greedy little piggy we're cumming to 💓!!! Ciao!

11/8/22, 3:34 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) THANK YOU, ZAI!!!:smiling_face_with_three_hearts: Appreciate the LOVE for this chapter-- it's one of my FAVES (& means the world that you "picked up" on my PASSION)!!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: Glad you took note of the respective wrestling gear, i.e., Jimmy's red-hot slinglet & Supes' bitched-out pink embroidered panties!!:hugs: I really enjoyed unpacking the intricasies of Jimmy's feelings of anger & betrayal (& hero worship) against Superman, which were only magnified by his "roid rage"-- having him "turn on his hero" so violently & in SUCH a dominating fashion was an uber-THRILL for me!!:muscle: Again, SUPER GR8FUL 4 the positive comments & continued ENJOYMENT of the storyline-- YOU ROCK, SIR!!:innocent:
Anonymous
11/8/22, 3:27 PM
I really hope Luke and Sammy get together! I love the sex aspect but I really liked the romance Sammy has!