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3/19/24, 6:56 PM
Just as lovers and friends come into our lives at the right time, so too do stories just like this one. Profoundly touching, in more ways than one 😉🤪 seriously though, thank you for writing such a beautiful work and sharing it for others to enjoy.

OneTimeWriter
3/23/24, 7:06 PM
@[ArcoNorth](/user/show/10032789) Thank you for reading it, and following my beloved characters on their journey! :)
3/23/24, 1:16 AM
Oh god, this is so hot. Them fucking each other from their original body. Thats such a hot concept. Lookinng forward to where this story would go.
3/23/24, 12:27 AM
H fucking SHIT this is so damn good!!! 🥵🥵🥵🤤🤤🤤🤩🤩🤩🤩
3/8/24, 3:20 PM
Really hot, great stuff! I like these stories that seem like a personal fantasy from the author, always feels intimate. Small writing tip: remember that character dialogue gets a new paragraph each time the speaker changes. > "Hello," I said, "how are you?" > "I'm fine, thanks." they replied. It's usually always best to add line breaks if there's a lot of action between the dialogue, too. > "I ate the hotdog." I said, rubbing my stomach. > "Then I ate the chips." I said tossing the empty bag into the trash. >"Then I drank the soda." I finished, replacing the bottle cap. Makes it easier for the reader to follow.

3/8/24, 6:54 PM
@[bak2jak](/user/show/141970) [https://i.pinimg.com/736x/f5/09/d6/f509d62a8d7e7f8e327bbc342db8cd43.jpg](https://i.pinimg.com/736x/f5/09/d6/f509d62a8d7e7f8e327bbc342db8cd43.jpg)

3/22/24, 3:46 PM
@[Skyboundbull](/user/show/10006422) While waiting to be asked to give advice can be a good general rule at times, I think their intentions were pure and their tone was very encouraging and constructive. Part of posting any kind of creative work on a public forum is getting criticism. And I'd love to get criticism as thought through and positive as @bak2jak wrote here.
3/22/24, 7:48 AM
Brad wouldn't be able to control his impulses and cast another spell, would he? :p
3/17/24, 12:48 PM
Love this series

3/22/24, 5:42 AM
@[SirD](/user/show/946083) Glad you do! It’s fun to write!
3/14/24, 1:35 PM
So hot! Hope you continue this story!

3/22/24, 5:41 AM
@[S.147](/user/show/10025257) Thank you! Any suggestions/comments are appreciated!
Itsmethevoid
3/22/24, 5:23 AM
Ughhh yes I looove where this is going …
3/21/24, 9:27 PM
Brad is slowly corrupting himself to be a bottom slut and im into it.