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11/15/22, 12:24 AM
I'm glad this story is starting in a place that someone like me can just jump in! I've had my eyes on this series for a long time, only been too busy to start from the beginning, but it's chock full of themes I'm interested inβ€”divine possessions, gay religion and mythology, a benevolently erotic pantheon, spiritual/ecstatic/mystical sex, and I'm sure much more. I suspect I'll take a lot of inspiration from what you've accomplished here!
11/13/22, 8:19 PM
A-ha! So that was what Jiang was keeping up his sleeve. For a few lines there I thought I had either skipped a chapter or that Jiang had done something to his father so he'd now refer to him as The Kid and he'd see him as what he would have looked like if he had been his biological son. But instead of that we get an actual and in-the-flesh biological son! I certainly didn't see that one coming. That was a great plot twist! And although I wouldn't have minded some foreshadowing (maybe I missed it), having a secret son is still something very in line with Lyle's selfish personality, as it is for Jiang to keep this information for future blackmailing. Such a piece of work, these Pratt's. Very hot scenes. As always. All my kinks were covered, specially the Naked Man Clothed Man one, and the suit fetish. And I won't ever get tired of the good old "I'm sorry, Daddy" :grin: Who would? As to how I see the series continuation, I have an idea of how my brain is expecting things to go, but I'm afraid of sharing it in case I jinx it! :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes: So I'll just say that it feels like this series is close to finishing the buildup, reaching the climax, and unraveling the ending. Or at least for this arch, the Love Begins At Home. I enjoyed the defined and logical structure and I think it could be counterproductive to stretch it much further. I'd rather see this part finish "now" and witness the start of new adventures in the "future" with a new cast, Tanner reprising his role of course. Either way, I trust that it will push all the right buttons, so I just hope you keep no restraints in relishing in all the ++corruption++, ++manipulation++, ++lust++, ++sex++, ++love++ and ++mind twisting games++ for the next chapters :blush:

11/14/22, 4:19 PM
@[Piko](/user/show/14889) Lol, I'm glad you liked the "Daddy" bits--I always wonder if they're too much. I don't like when dudes *whine* "Daddy," usually, but in this case it seemed warranted. As I've said before, Tanner will likely show up in another series, so your projections align with mine! :)

11/14/22, 6:22 PM
I agree that the story should not necessarily continue for that much longer. All the families have now had a visit. The next chapters should focus on setting up the ending and then let the Love Begins At Home-story have a strong ending instead of letting it drag on. Then you can always revisit Tanner or the group in other stories.

11/14/22, 6:52 PM
@[Lytcom](/user/show/602531) and @Piko: Interesting! I've been envisioning it as two halves, with this the peak of the first half, and then the buttsex happening in the second half...could be diminishing returns, though, as you say. Certainly ending soon would mean less writing. Hm. Must think.

11/14/22, 11:50 PM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) Oh! Right! The buttsex! How come I keep forgetting that one part whenever I read erotica :hand_over_mouth: I'm fine with any route that feels good to your instincts, to be honest. I had read it as part 1 out of 1, but if your brain envisioned it as a 2 parts show it must be because it is actually feasible. As per the use of "Daddy", I think in this setting it was specially sexy and relevant since the one instigating the phrasing was the one who's been raised as the Pratt's only child. It was so perverse of him to create this sub/dom relationship between biological father and son. Plus he's taking advantage of Drew's daddy and abandonment issues, having grown up without a father figure. All that in itself is particularly hot :fire:(and I daresay that Jiang would agree lol)
11/14/22, 8:07 PM
Jesus, this chapter was amazing! Love the daddy stuff and the suit fuck with Drew also being naked. Wouldn't mind seeing Jiang fuck both Lyle and Drew to show them their rightful place in the household.
11/14/22, 7:48 PM
Of course the families should be allowed to take their love to the next level but perhaps the same end resultat could be achieved without another round of house calls. I fear it would be diminishing returns. I also thought you were holding out on the buttsex because Peter and Blake should have the honour of being the first to take that step.
11/12/22, 4:25 PM
So, when I envisioned this story months and months ago, the plot of it came to me up to this exact point. Writing is slow. But, that being said, I haven't yet put the thought into what the plot will do from here. I'll probably decide in the next little bit how I want things to go, but if you're the sort who has a wish for this series, now's the time to let it be heard! I can't promise I'll take any suggestions, but who knows? Maybe something you say will influence the lives of Tanner's growing flock. Thanks for reading!

11/13/22, 11:48 PM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) personally I love when guys get into thongs so if one of the sub/btm guys ends up with a bit of a feminization bend to it that might be hot. Would be nice to see some of the other progress further too like the son who gets bound by his daddy (maybe it progresses to chastity a bit or just moves to fucking? So far I think the dad just plays with his hole). Maybe it's like that dad's new addiction becomes restraining and controlling the son when at home (could also see it become like a forced pup play sort of thing). But it's your story and think your work is so consistently amazing!

11/14/22, 4:20 PM
@[Botbot](/user/show/10010276) Thanks! Bondage isn't really my thing but I do like it on its way to other things that are. Certainly there's room here to play around with that--so many different possibilities with all these handsome fathers and sons running around.

11/14/22, 6:31 PM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) On the topic of Bondage maybe Peter could suggest a role playing exercise in the Sacred Circle reenacting the story of Abraham and Isaac as an excuse to tie his son down while the rest of the group watches.
11/13/22, 2:40 AM
Well, the predictable end would be either Tanner's triumph (most predictable) or the opposite - Tanner's plan, whatever it is, is foiled by Blake and the orange cat (who seemed pretty lame so far, so it would require a lot of work). I wouldn't go either way. My end would be Tanner **mostly** getting his way, but getting carried away and losing control of his flock to Pastor Pete. I've noticed that Tanner kept himself mostly out of the action so far, with the exception of one kiss. Maybe there's a good reason for that that's related to his powers. Tanner could end as Pete and Blake's third/plaything. I do enjoy seeing arrogant smug characters fall on their faces, and it wouldn't be such a bad fate for him. Just not the one he wanted as he'd no longer be in control. Pastor Pete would continue taking care of his community.. only in quite a different fashion.

11/13/22, 4:57 AM
@[kelley79](/user/show/10022397) I also like it when no one gets exactly what they’re aiming for. Peter as the leader of the group post-Tanner would leave the door open for a sequel…or a later series chronicling another group Tanner interacts with. Hmm…thanks for the suggestion!

11/13/22, 7:45 AM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) I actually have a more detailed scenario in mind if that interests you. I don't want to write it here because a. it's too long b. it may spoil the end and c. maybe you don't want more than a general idea. It's up to you. I could DM to you if you want.

11/13/22, 3:47 PM
@[kelley79](/user/show/10022397) I second this. It would be sweet, sweet irony if Peter ends up being so perverted that even Tanner ends up at his mercy. The end goal should be Peter back in charge of his community - only with a rather different mindset for all involved :-)

11/14/22, 4:08 PM
@[kelley79](/user/show/10022397) I love talking and brainstorming things, as long as you're comfy if I choose to say: "You have a great idea that I cannot write because of my own thoughts about this piece, but I welcome fan fiction of this universe if you want to write it!" DMs always open to charming dudes, and I'm interested in your thoughts on the shape of this going forward. :)

11/14/22, 5:53 PM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) But of course. Your story, your end.
11/14/22, 2:10 AM
A series that continues to arouse you further each time, upping the ante of what's to come. Can't wait to see where it goes, but I do hope Tanner gets away with it. I hope we get to see the next meeting of the group and have Tanner have the guys catch up, share, and enjoy themselves. Blake and Peter need an encore, no doubt. Thank you for another amazing story, can't wait to see what's next.

11/14/22, 4:21 PM
@[Essex](/user/show/909447) Thanks, Essex! I'm glad that the ante is going upward--that's the direction I always hope for. I can't help feeling a little bad for Drew, though--maybe the cat will come in and give him some loving sex too? Not sure how but it's a possibility. Hmmm...
11/13/22, 6:59 PM
Loved that Lyle was obedient to Jiang.... Would love to see some bottom daddy action!

11/14/22, 4:08 PM
@[Tommy B](/user/show/10022728) I think Lyle will be, at very least. Certainly Jiang seems to enjoy being "on top", so to speak.
11/13/22, 3:41 PM
This is without a doubt the best story on this site for quite some time. Thank you so much S.Q Neemie. I would like a new meeting in the Sacred Circle so Tanner can distribute some more perverted wisdom to the group. This would also be a great way to showcase the change in Peter. I can imagine him being more active in his support of Tanners ideas rather than trying to oppose them. Maybe even spread some of his own ideas with Tanners help. From the very start of this story I have seen the Sacred Circle as the perfect setup for a circle jerk. The guys have already openly talked about masturbation. How much more do they have to be pushed before they actually do it right there in the circle? As you must be aware of by now, Peter is by far my favorite. We last saw him planning more hidden cameras. Hopefully his new online friends gets to watch Blake naked again soon. The next step must be to not only spy on naked Blake but naked AND HARD Blake. Would Peter be able to orchestrate events so that his son is tricked into jerking off either in the shower or in his room. I am sure Peters friends online would enjoy that.

11/14/22, 4:06 PM
@[Lytcom](/user/show/602531) Thanks! I really appreciate how willing you are to talk about how the different chapters "grab" you, so to speak. We'll definitely return to the Sacred Circle soon, now that all the guys have had their...ahem...first experiences...
Zai
11/14/22, 8:22 AM
YES! Oh, oh, oh, yes!!! Funhouse time! And this wasn't like any funhouse I've ever been to. No way! This was an adult, men's only funhouse where pleasure is the game and slavery is its name. πŸŽͺπŸ˜œπŸ‘… 3 doors! Brilliant! πŸ’‘ Each door, different desires! Very Brilliant! πŸ’‘πŸ’‘ Lex' diabolical use of the term SPA, UTTERELY BRILLIANT! πŸ’‘πŸ’‘πŸ’‘ SPA = Special Place 4 Assfucking! πŸ‘πŸ₯• And did Luthor work over his 2 slaves or what? So far? 😲 Damn fucking right, he did! πŸ™„ As for El Rico, a new master to be?!?! 😍 I cannot wait to read just what those bitchpills and drinks do to thise 3 maricons, huh? πŸ’ŠπŸΉπŸ‘… Nice chapter, SuperDude, nice chapter! P.S. I'm the one who wrote the Croc and His Bat! Sometimes the site drops my name and leaves a blank. Huh?

11/14/22, 2:54 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Ciao ZAI!! THANK YOU, kind Sir (& Anonymous!) for your positive comments-- SO HAPPY You Enjoyed this chapter!! LOVE your verbage assigned to SPA...LMFAO!!:rofl: Chapter 19 is solely devoted to the "bitching out" of BATMAN by Rico, but Jimmy & Bizarroboi are used & cuckolded as well!!:smiling_imp: I will have Luthor/Python/Supes return to another one of the "What's Your Pleasure?" rooms in Chapter 20...so STAY tuned!!:zany_face: BTW....DEF lookin fwd 2 reading "the Croc & his BAT"!! Appreciate the :heartpulse: & SUPA-GR8ful that you're still vibying the storyline!! Have a PRODUCTIVE day!:innocent: