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Zai
11/11/22, 10:34 AM
Ahoy, Mateys! I write that because by the end of this day/night, Luthor's complex is gonna be awash in waves & waves of potent cum Waves! Upon! Waves! Of! Cum! πŸŒ€πŸ’§ Ain't no lol'ing about that fact! πŸš«πŸ˜‚ It's quite interesting that Lex somewhat easily acquiescenced to Python's demands. That is a very un-Luthor thing to do. Perhaps the tyrant is a bit mellowed out? Or playing a long game? With Lex' mind and personality? I'd venture with the latter. One thing I'd like to know, which I'm trying to recall if you ever revealed. Were we ever informed from were Python's genetic material came from? Clark|Superman? Cause that's downright incestuous, cum to think about it, lol, if that's the source. I keep having to break way from the story to look up all the kinky stuff you mention all these men dressing in. LOL! I'm excited to read that Rico will be checking in on the 3-some of Batman, Jimmy & BJ-El. It'll be hot if Rico gets in on their sexcapades. Especially if he gets to Dom The Batman. The Dark Knight could use some dark Latin cock down his throat and rammed up his Bat-pussy! Added bonus would be if Bruce is an ass virgin and is broken in during some heated interracial butt-fucking action!!! Thanks, SuperDude! πŸ˜πŸ˜ŽπŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜‰πŸ€“πŸ˜›πŸ˜œπŸ˜

11/11/22, 4:12 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Ciao ZAI!! Happy TGIF & THANKS 4 ALL of your positive thoughts/input/feedback!! I appreciate that you question Lex's diplomacy & who knows how this will play out?!?! At this point, I'm executing a chapter at a time, so sometimes, I dunno myself until I get in front of my computer!! Rico's involvement will be an interesting & unexpected one, as for me, he's quietly developed into "a wildcard character"-- so I'm THRILLED that you "tapped into that tangent" & line of thinking! :smiling_imp: As for the source of Python's genetic material, you pose a VERY intriguing point, but it's NEVER actually been revealed in the story (YET)!:astonished: Again, I'm SO GRATEFUL to you & the other readers for your kind comments/input/thoughts/feedback-- You guys INSPIRE me to keep "the twisted kink" coming (or should I say, "CUMMING")?!?!?!? LMFAO!!!:rofl: Have an AMAZING weekend, my friend!!:innocent:

Zai
11/11/22, 4:26 PM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) Greetings, Earthling! LOL! How about General Zod being the donor for Python? Lex could easily get a sample or many, with his connections. And that would bring Zod's revenge full circle. Finally sealing fate by having Python be the one to bring down the House of El, so to say. Yeah, I'm liking Rico. He's playing at a very dangerous game. But he's adding some Latin heat to an already hot story. I just hope the stuff gets to fuck the cum outta Batman. Here's hoping you have a splendid weekend, too, SuperDude! 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎

11/11/22, 8:05 PM
@Zai In Part 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, and 11 the author reveals that Python is a "Krypto clone". This is Krypto : https://superman.fandom.com/wiki/Krypto :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

11/12/22, 2:09 AM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) Hi Anarchomegalomaniac!! Thanks for your note/comment! Just to clarify...when I refer to Python as a "Krypto clone"...I do mean Kryptonite...I shortened it simply for the purpose of "brevity" & NOT to refer to Superboi's adorable dog, Krypto, so my sincerest apologies for giving you that impression!! FYI, I've made various references to Python throughout this storyline as Krypto-clone or K-clone, simply to shorten the word-- but THANKS for your astute & sharp attention to detail!! ENJOY Your Weekend!!:innocent:

Zai
11/12/22, 2:19 AM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) Hey! I know that cannot be the Kyrpto who Python was cloned from. It's a dog, called Krypto from a 1955 comic book. I believe our esteemed author shortened Kryptonian to Krypto. Python is a clone of an actual humanoid Kryptonian male. Otherwise, SupaSlut has been plowed by a dog clone, talked to a dog clone, kissed a dog clone, etc, etc, etc. And Beastiality is so not my thing, lol; and I bet not the writers, either, lol! That's why Superboivsvillain and I have discussed who the actual Kryptonian donor was for Python. Superman? General Zod? Thanks for your input, though. What do you think of the kinky heat our fun loving writer is creating? Take care, friend!
Nov 11, 2022
11/11/22, 5:25 PM
I'm so invested and love their dynamic. Hopefully Darnell gets to fuck Jayden, but I wouldn't mind Jayden making Darnell his complete bitch devoted to his cock and cum. Looking forward to more! Keep up the great work.
Zai
11/11/22, 6:08 AM
Crickey! Hot Damn! My jaws, throat & backdoor are figuratively hurting in sympathetic pain for SuperBitchPup! Yowser! Ouch! *Cue sad violin music... lol, lol, lol...* 🎻 Seriously, though? It's a good thing Clark|Superman is Kryptonian. Because I'm left wondering how any human male, no matter his fitness level, could take all those huge cocks and abuse without just expiring right there & then, huh?! Methinks it might be a good idea to for Lex to give the once asexual Kryptonian some exposure to yellow sun light. Be it created rays or the actual Sun. Help to heal up the stud's body to showroom new, lol; tighten up that SupaCunt to virgin-like tightness. 🌞🌝🌞🌝🌞🌝🌞🌝 Of course, Lex will be certain to have escorts there, to keep reminding the once formidable superhero about his new life; being the owned, bitched property of his Master(s). Maybe dosing him with a sweet treat infused with those special drugs. Now that, hmmm πŸ€”, once virgin to gay sex, hmmmm πŸ™„, yeahhhhh, right πŸ˜‰, Batman|Bruce has DP-d the dank vault of SupaSlut, but not been able to cum. I'm wondering what he, Jimmy, and BJ-El are going to do? What, with all three having had to vacate the arena AND SupaPup's steamy holes; just what will these three men do, huh??? Take their raging stiffies and commence into a good old fashion 3-way? If so, who'll be the spit-roast-ee, lol? Will the two younger studs turn the tables on the senior trainer, Bruce, and they become the trainers? Taking the Bat's mouth and ass-cunt out for a joyride? Begin Batman's journey into Bitch-hood? I'm surprised at Lex' diplomatic solution with Python! I smell a rat πŸ€, as in Luthor might be planning on re-training Python in the ways of the slave. Hmmmmmm... ... ... ❓❓❓ Ciao, SuperDude!

11/11/22, 3:56 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Ciao ZAI!! Happy TGIF & THANK YOU 4 your respective positive thoughts/comments-- (Chuckling)...you've given me a LOT to chew on!! It's once again ASTUTE of you to smell a rat in Luthor & ALL will eventually be revealed in the subsequent chapters!:smiling_imp: Bruce will be returning soon enough (with the 2 bois) & they will collectively have to "field an unexpected curveball"!! That's ALL I can share at this time...but I'm SO glad you're continuing to ENJOY the storyline!! ENJOY your day (& your weekend)!!:innocent:

Anonymous
11/11/22, 4:10 PM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) Hello, SuperDude! Yes, coitus Interuptous for our four sex fiends was a hoot! 4 boners, loaded balls, and no shots fired! We all know how that feels, correct? LOL! Luthor? I'll be truthful, I always like some loving feels and romance, so I was hoping the hung hunk would eventually realize he has some special πŸ’– for Superman. Of course the studly, pretty boi hero will always belong to Lex; but there's good times ahead, too! Oh yes!!! I'm in the process of publishing my first work here. I guess it goes through some review process or what? I titled it "The Croc and His Bat." It's all about Killer Croc, aka Waylon Jones bitching Batman. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ¦‡πŸ¦‡πŸ¦‡πŸŠπŸŠπŸŠπŸ‘…πŸ‘…πŸ‘…

11/11/22, 5:04 PM
Hi Anonymous!! Thanks 4 your positive comments/feedback!! I'm so appreciative 4 your/the other readers' thoughts/ideas/insight-- it continues to feed the "inner kinky windmills of my mind":smiling_imp: And don't worry-- I won't leave "the 4 sex fiends" HANGIN 4 long:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: As for Luthor, in this particular storyline, I characterize him like "a devilish onion", with ever-evolving layers to be "peeled back" & strategically revealed, so I hope you thoroughly ENJOY how his "ongoing villanous, yet seductive growth" will continue!!:smirk_cat: I will DEF keep an "eagle eye" out for your story featuring Killer Croc & the BATMAN-- sounds HOTTT!!:fire: and BTW, yes, the Spiral review staff is EXCELLENT about executing the process as quickly as possible, but from what I understand, they have been recently "bogged down" with a "literary tidal wave" of stories, so it might take a bit longer, so be patient (I'm not the most patient person, so it's an "personal growth exercise" for me, LOL!)!!! Again, THANKS 4 the positive comments & ENJOY your weekend!:sunglasses:
Nov 11, 2022
Jonanator
11/11/22, 4:41 PM
Curious if they will fall in love?
Zai
11/11/22, 10:50 AM
Oh yes, I forgot to mention that BJ-EL is now calling Bruce, sir. Hmm, that's a new twist. Maybe Bruce could be fucking Jimmy or Bizzaroboi, and Rico cums along, ready to fuck. So first he'd feed his Hispanic long schlong down Batsy's throat, then get behind the superhero's jockstrapped, round muscled ass and begin munching on the virgin snatch. Of course we all would love for the sexy bodyguard, aka hero wrangler, aka Dominator of superhero bitch's to pop Bruce's cherry so hard and so, so, deep. Yummmmmmm... πŸ‘…πŸ’

11/11/22, 4:20 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) THANKS, ZAI, 4 your addendum comments!! Yes, I :heartpulse: that you pick up on the "various nuances" that I "lob out" to the readers in this storyline!! The next couple of chapters will be "baited" with exciting, unexpected "scene shifts", that will hopefully keep the readers "on the edge of their seats" & "pining for MORE"!!!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: THX a MILLION for your :sparkling_heart: & support!!:pray: Have a SPANK-tacular weekend!!:boom:
11/11/22, 7:31 AM
Good chapter, but i feel a twist coming on somewhere. Lex as a Master will not want to give up control so easy

11/11/22, 4:00 PM
@[MalSkin](/user/show/131172) Hi MalSkin!! THANK YOU 4 your kind words/comments! You are right to feel a twist coming/cumming....AND it is CUMMING!!! Appreciate your positivity & Have an AWESOME weekend!:innocent:
Zai
11/10/22, 12:12 PM
I don't know much about the categories I fall under? Jock, once a (muscle) twink, lol? I'll admit, one huge similarity is our preference to be manhandled by some dominant stud who wants to have their wicked, nasty way with us. I don't care if the stud is shorter or taller than me, same age range or older. Just be kind, honest and fair with me plus be built in, well... all ways - *lascivious laughter*! πŸ˜› By your self description, I bet you're a hunky guy who enjoys the attention of deserving men, too! Make them earn your attention and affections. Not in some prima Don (not Donna, we're dudes, SuperDude, lol) way. No, just get to know each other first, is my opinion. Enjoy intercourse of the talking type before actually getting into sexual intercourse, lol! High-fives, SuperDude! πŸ˜‰πŸ€—πŸ˜›πŸ˜œπŸ˜
11/10/22, 4:44 AM
I don’t know what turn of phrase I appreciated more, the houses that looked like they smelled of damp wood, or the simple, zany, glorious stupidity of β€œAactaveet!” Not entirely clear on how Vic wound up as the Haasenpfaapeer, but I’m pleased as punch with the way things turned out for Wes and Zeb. What a fun series!
Zai
11/9/22, 9:12 PM
Thank Goodness... no poo or pee! To each their own, but still... ... ... human waste in our neck of the World's woods belongs down the pipes or an outhouse, etc... πŸš«πŸ’©πŸ’§πŸš« loud LOL!!! Writing about Worlds, I am enjoying your World building, or better stated, World rebuilding, in the realm of Luthor. Everyone in the story overall is having their lives rebuilt/altered in some way or another. Even Lex, the tyrannical leader/master is experiencing change within himself. And with Python challenging him at a crucial stage of so much bitching occurring? Superman, Jimmy, BJ-El, and hopefully Batman? The bald stud himself could eventually become a bitched bitch, lol, himself if he doesn't watch his ass... and attitude. Well, I must go. Take care and have a most excellent day, SuperDude! πŸ‘…πŸ‘…πŸ‘…πŸ’£πŸ’£πŸ’£πŸ’₯πŸ’₯πŸ’₯πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“

Zai
11/10/22, 3:52 AM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) I forgot to add, that your concern for what we readers will like is admirable and thoughtful. I truly appreciate the sentiment. However, as I've written before, this IS YOUR STORY! It's cool you enjoy our suggestions and implement some, but go with your gut. You have the skill set (mind, writing & heart) to craft kinky kink with a great plot. So do as you've been doing... gifting us with primo smut and an actual story beyond that! Adios, amigo SuperDude! πŸ’»πŸ–¨πŸ–²πŸ–¨βœ’πŸ˜‰
11/10/22, 3:46 AM
Love it!