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Anonymous
11/22/22, 5:26 PM
Loved the slow burn of this chapter. The characters feel very connected

11/22/22, 5:53 PM
I'm really glad! I'm hoping to write a few more around these guys and the course of their, uh, conditions. After that, the story is community-based, so anyone can add more! I'm hoping people do!
11/21/22, 7:31 PM
Me with my logistics brain: how did the subjects not inadvertently discover their new glands and whatnot while showering, or deliberately discover them while experimenting? Inquiring minds want to know! Me with my horny brain: SO GOOD MORE PLS Really well executed and exceptionally hot sex scene. Nicely done!

11/22/22, 5:52 PM
@[Noam de Pluma](/user/show/1403470) maybe some of them did. Why don't you write a story about 'em? It's a community series, after all :sunglasses: And luck for your horny brain, chapter 2 just went up!
Zai
11/20/22, 5:50 AM
Wellllllll... I was referring to directly on the coast, beachside living, lol. For all you might have sussed, I live full time inland *shutters*, like inland, inland... yikes, lol! The most inland I've ever lived was at uni, and that was Stanford. So, not too, too stressful, lol. What can I say, "I needs me some salty air to function properly" *winks*. 😉 (Did that read as a pirate stating that pertinent fact, huh? *loud fricking lol!*) ☠ Yup SuperDude, I'm anxious to read 24! Will there be more jealous feels? Will SupaSuckSlave get to finish blowing Master Lex, or will there be more drama? Later, Alligator! 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄

11/20/22, 6:34 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) C&C ZAI!! Hope U R enjoying your weekend! I've started to work on Chapter 23...and I've got a couple definite hot storylines "already in gear", but I'm trying to find sum addt'l inspiration on this rainy Sunday.... to answer your question...YES...SupaSuckSlave will continue blowing Master Lex (with another couple "HOT curveball twists" ala SuperDude:smiling_imp:) As I watch the rain CUM down, I'll try 2 "bang out" the rest of this chapter so it's 2 my liking (& UP to my standards!)...LOL:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: ENJOY your Sunday, my friend!:cloud_with_lightning_and_rain:

Zai
11/21/22, 5:38 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) DUDE! MY MAN! First, you do that, banging away, lol, on the story. However, you get some sexy man wanting to bang away in other ways, go for it! Writing can wait when hot dick is waving about! Yum! Just a small ewwwww, SuperLex. Why? "As the rain CUMS down?" Now I'm imaging the Cloud Men jerking off and drenching we lowly surface dwellers... lol... lol... LOL!!! Seriously though? That reads as calming. Very, very calming; and relaxing. Also stimulating, too! I hope your writing, etc, was productive as Florida was drenched in virile jizzy juice, Lol! Long live our beautiful Superhero studs enjoying the subjugation of sweet sex slavery. *Bless those killed & injurured in Colorado Springs! 😣😯😢😭*

11/21/22, 4:37 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) C&C ZAI!! You don't like a CUMSHOWER?!?!?:cloud_with_lightning_and_rain: I'm actually a BIG FAN of them!! :zany_face: Being transparent, I always PREFER that my sex partner (whoever that lucky guy is!) finishes on my cute, hungry awaiting face/mouth!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: Speaking of which, Chapter 23 is CUMMING!!:rofl: Just awaiting approval! BTW...has your story been approved yet!??! I recall you saying that it's still in the "approval process"....pls UPDATE me!! I'm dying 2 read it!! And YES...I did hear about the shooting in Colorado Springs...HORRIBLE!:sob: Sending prayers to ALL involved (who passed or were injured)! :pray: Hope U have a decent Monday!:wink:

Zai
11/22/22, 3:07 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) SuperDude! SuperLex! SuperLexDude?! DUUUUDDEEEE???!!! *FREAKING LOUD LOL* EWWWWWWW... TMI! Do you prefer a loofah, washcloth or bare hands whilst enjoying your... CUMMMMMM - SHOWER???!!!???!!! 😏🛁 OMG! YOU'RE A HOOT! 🦉 Yeah, nah... my story is seemingly in limbo? Later I'll try to search to see if *The Croc and His Bat* has been published. It's been over 1 week. I followed the criteria, by using phermones/musk as the reason Batsy gets lured in. So??? I am excited for 23! Yay! I've my own feels about not just what occurred in Club Q in Colorado, but why there's getting to be more anti-LGBTQ hate growing again. Certain factions with-in the LGBTQ are too radical and demanding too much! Ciao, you Cum Shower L♥️ver, *Lol, Lol*!

11/22/22, 2:51 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) HOOT HOOT ZAI!! I prefer BARE hands whilst enjoying my "CUMSHOWAZ" (BTW...I LOVE that word, "whilst"-- do U cum from a British background?)... I have a recording artist friend in the UK (from my days in the music biz) & we would giggle 4 hours using that word in our convos!!! NOW....Back 2 cumshowaz...can U tell I might possibly be a bit of a "closet cumpig"??!?! SUUUUEEEYYY....OINK!!!:pig: LMFAO! (It's been a while since I've had a "proper cumshower", I'm afraid!):pleading_face: tee-hee-hee Anyway...getting 2 your point about Club Q & increased hate in the LGBTQIA+ community.... I would agree with you, but I would also venture to say that there's a lot of "HATE" in general within the country right now, not just our community, I'm afraid. I do my BEST 2 remain positive (& think positivity & kindness ALWAYS), BUT I honestly think the country needs to hit a MAJOR RESET button! :thinking: On that note, I will go take a shower (sans CUM:frowning:).... Have a FAB day, my friend!:innocent:
Zai
11/22/22, 3:18 AM
More Curveballs? Really... ... ... ??? *yaaawwwwwnnnnn...* 😴 Just Kidding, *hahahahaha*!!! 😃 Gotta rev up Monday, somehow. Right? 😉 Curveballs are fun, and you've a way in creating clever-curveballs right outta left-field. Ohhh, these baseball references are heating me up. I do so love sexy baseball players in form fitting uniform pants. Yum! I hope your Monday went well and the rest of your week flows smooth as silk, Dude! Adios, StudMuffin! 😄😄😄😆😆😆😉😉😉

11/22/22, 2:38 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Ciao ZAI! But you :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: my curveballs....it only leaves U BEGGIN 4 MORE...isn't that right?!?:smiling_imp: PLUS....Won't U need some nice, thick gravy 4 your Turkey Day?!?! YUM...LMAO! :zany_face: There's some STUFFING 2 B DONE this week 4 SURE with both the BAT & SUPES...so STAY TUNED!!:boom: Have a STELLAR day, my friend!:sun_with_face:
Zai
11/22/22, 11:09 AM
*YELLING EMPHATICALLY WITH WILD ARM GESTURES AS I WIPE THE DROOL AWAY...* 💪😋 OH! NO! YOU! DIDN'T! AGAIN! *YELLING GETS LOUDER* 😰 ANOTHER CLIFFHANGER?! WITH RICO ABOUT READY TO MUNCH AWAY ON *THE* BATCUNT!? THAN FUCK THAT TIGHT HOLE... AGAIN?!?!?! 👅 *Calming down...* Dude! You ARE SUCH a big COCKTEASE! Are you certain you're not Lex Luther? Because you Are as Diabolical... no... More Diabolical than that villainous stud bastard! 👿 *Fucking damn curveballs... ... pouting...* 😡 *Whew, release and back TO ZEN* 😚 SuperLEX! Seriously though, you cannot leave readers like this. Sprung but no CumShower? 🌦 Seriously, I need chapter 24 right now. My stiffie ain't going no where... 24, 24, 24 *chanted like that famous film line, "Attica, Attica, Attica!" ASAP, please! 😉 As for SupaSuckSlave getting his CumShower BEFORE me? I'll forgive you... Lol! Just know this, my throat is aching like my tonsils need removing. 🤣 And Lex is far from done with his SupaSexSlave, who's gonna be getting split open on his Master's DickOfDeath! Yes! 😘 This chapter deserves an A+! I love you dressing Batmsn in his skintight costume with the cherry on top being his ultra tight BatBriefs... or as Rico should refer to them - *bragas de murciélago*! PANTIES OF THE BAT! 🤤 Now I'm heating up. I just love Batman in his classic costume, especially those sizzling, Speedo-like briefs. Can you imagine Batman getting bitched AS Batman, with Rico calling his briefs panties, aka *bragas de murciélago*? 😍😛😝 I'm hoping you have Lex pound Superman in his skintight costume asnd briefs, too! Getting the idea after watching Rico (on digital recording) plowing the BatPussy! I need to know? Is Lex ever going to bitch Bruce|BatBitchMan? I need to state... lil' of Jinx the Minx' spell ain't working quite up to snuff, eh??? ❓❓❓ Thanks! I'm still frustrated, SuperLEX! 😠

11/22/22, 2:32 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) And a ROUSING G'Morning 2 U 2, ZAI!! LMAO....SO happy that you thoroughly ENJOYED the chapter-- AND, NOW...who's beggin 4 da CUMSHOWA?!?!:cloud_with_lightning_and_rain: Cliffhangers & curveballs ...I'm realizing that they've become strengths in my writing! You've been reinforcing this...So I'll use them to my advantage, my friend! I take your A+ rating humbly (& as a BIG CUM-pliment!)...LOLOL!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: I will ALSO take your suggestion about dressing Supes in costume again 4 Lex's slave reorientation:zany_face: Glad U are FULLY enjoying Rico's re-bitching of the BAT (complete with various little Spanish cummands/phrases)...is it better than Babble?? (LMAO!)!:rofl: Will get started on Chapter 24 today (as I can see/sense that you DEF need sum MAJOR release...hehehe!):smiling_imp: Have an AWESOME day, kind Sir!!:innocent:
11/22/22, 6:17 AM
Sexy story! Nice part two!

11/22/22, 2:17 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) glad you liked it! I put in a little something special, just for you :D
11/17/22, 5:16 PM
Funny and sexy. Maybe an unpopular opinion but I’m mostly interested in him becoming a stupid fuck toy for Lewis.

11/18/22, 6:08 AM
@[Mrdick](/user/show/1001656) Thanks for reading!

11/22/22, 9:54 AM
@[Mrdick](/user/show/1001656) Can I upvote this somehow??
Martin
11/20/22, 9:06 PM
I've read it! And I liked it. It's a very heartwarming and fun story, really. I had hoped Colin's transformation would have been a bit more dramatic, but I guess that was just not your point. Now what is it about Colin's name? I didn't get the hint you gave me before reading that story...

11/21/22, 1:15 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Glad you liked it. The names are references to wolves. Each means "wolf" in a specific language. Zev comes from Zeev and is hebrew, Valko is bulgarian and Ulric is old english and means "wolf ruler". Colin comes from the scottish gaelic Cailean which means "whelp, young dog". It's very obscure, I didn't expect anyone to get these.

Martin
11/21/22, 2:35 PM
@[Cockatrice](/user/show/620105) Wow, ok, I'd never have recognized THAT subtle detail. It's really nice. And a shame that you don't refer to it in any way... Thanks for disclosing this to us! Did you explicitly research those names or are you some kind of language expert? I've noticed that your English is practically flawless, which is amazing for someone living in Germany...

11/21/22, 8:20 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) No, haha, I research it on behindthename.com. I just like giving characters names with meaning, so I look up possible names for some stories, though not all.
Zai
11/20/22, 4:54 AM
Dude! DUDE! G'evening, mate! How's it going in your... neck of the woods? Corner of the city? Place in the village? Spot in the suburbs? Sandy patch of the beach? *Insert what fits best, lol.* 🏡🏢🏯🗼🕌⛱ You probably noted my humour wasn't very prevalent in my comment. I felt more subdued, perhaps due to the magical veil this chapter had!? I feel that at some point, Hugo will show up and some *Strange* shite is gonna occur. Because he'll be pissed that Jinx was called in by Lex. Perhaps mixing magic with drugs, hypnosis, alcohol, etc, etc, etc, is going too far in Hugo's estimation. Or, Hugo is peeved that he wasn't called in instead of Jinx? Envy time? Or, Hugo may want to work alongside Jinx; or Jinx will try to bespell Hugo or others? Or Jinx will be treated to Hugo's own types of magic? Whoa, I could keep going with what if's, huh... ??? I'm awaiting more action, more plot reveals, and lots more sex, SuperDude! So keep writing, day and night, 24/7... please... *Lol, lol, lol, lol, lol, lol, lol* ♨️♨️♨️⚡⚡⚡🔥🔥🔥 😀😀😀🤣🤣🤣😉😉😉

11/20/22, 6:46 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) Happy Sunday ZAI! Thanks 4 your comments/ideas/feedback!!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: As you may already know (if U read my previous comment from a couple chapters back), it's a rainy day in the Sunshine state:cloud_with_lightning_and_rain: You bring UP a salient idea about Hugo Strange returning to the storyline, which I will DEF take under advisement:sparkler: Don't think that Hugo is EVEN aware that Lex contacted Jinx instead of him-- I was inspired to utilize Jinx as I had just recently watched the newest episode of "Titans" on HBO Max & I found her "intriguing" (plus I hadn't included a female character as of yet, & I thought it was "high time" 2 do so!)...as you can imagine, Master Lex has his villanous fingers in many pots & is always multi-tasking:thinking: LMAO...why did U suddenly stop your "stream of thought"?!?!?:smirk: I find your thoughts/insights/ideas 2 b VERY stimulating!:boom: I'm gonna get back 2 writing this chapter, but I gratefully THANK YOU 4 your suggestions/concepts!! ENJOY a BRILLIANT Sunday!:sun_with_face:

Zai
11/21/22, 5:17 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) Ha... *twirls my non-existent mustache*! ☻ Dude! Had I prattled on about my possible Hugo and Jinx scenarios, you'd still be reading that comment, lol!!!!!!! 😋 One thing I gotta give Jinx... she didn't bat a single eyelash at seeing all those naked muscle dudes, boners saluting ludely, cum sprayed everywhere, dripping outta assholes and mouths. 😲🤤💧 I notice I mistakenly wrote chapter 24, rather than 23 as the actual next chapter. Opps! 🙃 Adios, Dude!

11/21/22, 4:30 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) G'Mornin ZAI!! Hope U enjoyed your weekend!!:sun_with_face: I love it when U "twirl your invisible moustache", spiralling your thoughts & theories about the chapters you've just consumed (& 4 the ones that are CUMMING)!!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: FYI...Chapter 23 has been completed & is simply awaiting approval from the STELLAR staff @GaySpiralStories... I sure hope that U enjoy it (as well as the curveballs, twists/turns)!!!:smiling_imp: Have an AWESOME week, my friend!:innocent:
11/21/22, 12:58 PM
I really love where this story is going. I'd love to see some enhancement in Reece perhaps because he's eating Nathan's lube. Thanks for the story