Recent Comments

12/4/22, 11:21 PM
What a fun first entry! I’ve gotta say that I’m leaning towards intensely disliking Bellamy, and am sliiiiighly suspicious of Alex’s bona fides after letting him get so out of sorts so quickly, but those are minor quibbles. The sex was hot, the manipulation is believable, and I’m very interested to see the further softening of Bellamy’s edges to the point that the romance/Cupid aspect kicks in. I’d also love for Alex to have a genuinely positive impact on Bellamy, because I am biased towards wholesomeness. I’ll definitely read the next instalment once it’s up!

Sebastián Apollo
12/5/22, 7:21 PM
@[Noam de Pluma](/user/show/1403470) No! Not Bellamy! 😭 That's curious because, as mentioned previously, I had to do a near total rewrite of all of Bellamy's dialogue and character to make him a lot more tolerable and likeable. He's supposed to be bratty, immature, and self-centered, sure, but there's also some light cracking through. Maybe the second chapter might change your tune... The aspect of Alex's bona fides is also an interesting one. It's a difficult balance of both realism and fantasy - if Alex actually DID his job, then they never would've gone to the party. Which may have brought us to another story thread with the same outcome, but the idea of the party involved multiple facets that will come up in future chapters. Glad to hear you enjoyed the sex scenes though - I'll be honest, as ridiculous as this may sound, sex scenes were never my forte. I always kind of _cringe_ when I read mine after writing them. And I don't know if that's indicative of actual quality, or it's because I'm just never satisfied with how my final product turns out. Chapter two is in the editing stage and should be coming out soon, stay tuned!

12/5/22, 7:28 PM
Aw, don’t let me bum you out, @[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736)! Just means you did a good job at making Bellamy bratty just like you wanted. There is some light shining through, and that’s what makes me interested to see where it goes from here. I can tell you’re gearing up for real character development and a thoughtful story. As for Alex, I realize you had a tough needle to thread. For my money, as described by Bellamy’s father, his job is to be a bodyguard, but that means going where the client goes and doing your best within that context. So it didn’t strike me as weird that they went to the party; I was just surprised that he was so inept at handling crowds or fading into the background. But, there was already an air of unreality at KOK that maybe something ‘artificial’ was going on that conspired to undermine him? At any rate, as I said, minor quibble. You did good work!
Jonanator
12/2/22, 10:47 AM
Very good. I like it.

12/5/22, 3:13 AM
@Jonanator Thank you for sticking with us! Great to hear you're still reading and enjoying!

Jonanator
12/5/22, 4:18 AM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) No problem
12/3/22, 1:30 PM
Mouse deserves better. TT Rhys and Lemon are starting to question what's up with Jasper, that's good. But oh no, the other thiefs are in trouble 0_0

12/5/22, 3:14 AM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) <3 We are so mean to them sometimes but we love the characters so! Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts -- we really appreciate it.
12/2/22, 7:58 AM
So, so, so excited to read the next chapter. Thank you. I have been hanging out for a new installment for a while. This was worth the wait. What a fantastic chapter. Plot is making leaps and bounds and the characters continue to grow deeper and spread their web of connection. I hope Iskios turns out to be trustworthy. It'd be so nice if they all find a place together. You know, if the group actually can get back together again after all this. There's just so much in this chapter. I'm so curious about Mouse and just what is going on there and also totally creeped out by the clear and disturbing abuse from Aris on the poor lad. I'm glad he had a fun sex scene with a bunch of other pets to start off his stay. Especially since he's an indoor pet. Rhys and Jasper are just the sweetest. I love them so much and want them to be disgustingly happy together. Even Lemon has a heart! Even though his motivations are in keeping Rhys safe and well. The Greek Play was a surprise and a great expansion of the world and the culture. Love this world and really, really need to know what happens next. No pressure or anything... but pretty please? :)

12/5/22, 3:13 AM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) We're so happy to have you as our reader. Thanks again for reading through the draft. It's such a delight to hear your thoughts!
Cock slut
12/5/22, 1:39 AM
My favorite new writer. I loved the writing of "from straight to bitch club" and this dumb jock roommate series has has a very similar and high quality. I love how Jon is still straight but still using Theo for his pleasure. Chapter 5 will easily ruin my no fap strike and I'm looking forward to it 😋
12/4/22, 9:18 AM
Reread this all the past few days. Just as amazing as always. Hoping for more, but as a fellow author who feels distracted by many other pursuits, I totally get waiting for the right time to continue stories that get requests. Just wanted to let you know that this is a masterpiece and no matter what comes next or when it drops, that won't change. You're supremely talented and I can only hope you don't feel pressured to write anything you aren't 100% proud of <3

12/5/22, 12:57 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Oh wow, thanks! This is a very generous comment! I'm still committed to finishing this, and I have drafts. Every chapter feels a bit harder to write since I have so many threads and so many potential ways things could go on the way to the conclusion (the conclusion is pretty well set), plus I feel like I've built up impossible expectations. But eventually I'll get back to it and stop distracting myself with a million other stories.
12/4/22, 8:30 PM
I love the novel road to climax here, just twitching around and inside one another in a feedback loop. Plus the idea that their insides are turning into a generalized erogenous zone as they change to accommodate new life. Eager to see where this goes next!
12/4/22, 4:27 PM
Aaaaaand, I’m caught up. Geez, poor Luke. Will he ever get control of his life back? You did an amazing job of describing how he processed the physical sensations of his need and getting fucked. So hot. And I’m glad he’s coming to terms with his new reality!
12/4/22, 4:09 PM
The relationships really sell this story for me, on top of the eroticism. I want to echo some of the misgivings raised by Feed Your Head above — part of me definitely raised an eyebrow at the racial stereotypes employed, and was a little icked out at the implications of non-con and power imbalance, plus the tension between a character who’s got a real impediment to understanding his reality and what’s just happening _at_ him because of his biology. All of which is to say, it made me feel things, and I’m still hopeful this will have a happy ending for all involved. (And more explorations of Luke’s itch, of course, because it remains an incredibly hot execution of an incredibly hot concept.)
12/4/22, 2:40 PM
This chapter is so heartbreaking! I just want to reach through the screen and give both Sammy and Luke a shake and tell them why they’re miscommunicating. But I like how it’s apparent they’re moving past the part where we could see Luke as being used or taken advantage of, and of course it’s still incredibly hot. Can’t wait to read more.