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3/27/24, 10:57 AM
I would love to see more, if you don't mind
3/27/24, 6:57 AM
Fun story. You've got a great ear for dialogue
3/27/24, 4:02 AM
Ooh this is a very interesting but also Hot story. I never thought a manuscript style story would be this so hot.

3/27/24, 4:08 AM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Thanks! I liked the idea of seeing what I could do without any visuals.
Dec 25, 2021
3/26/24, 10:44 PM
What a beautiful, and hot, Christmas story!
Mar 24, 2024
3/25/24, 7:42 PM
Dropping us right into a mystery! This will be fun. I couldn't quite picture the full situation the narrator and Ben are in (lying on the floor, wrists and ankles bound?) Seductive start! I can't wait to see what game the captor has in store, who this amusingly fiendish dude is, and what his plans are for our three rugby studs. πŸ‰πŸ’ͺ
3/24/24, 5:01 PM
This was beautifully conjured, you managed to make it bittersweet without making it tragic. However, it needed more 'meat' in the middle, you had a lot of short sentences. It does not mean the story is bad per se, it's really really good, but I feel this kind of story would have worked _even_ better as a longer novella.

3/25/24, 11:50 AM
@[Twan Andersen](/user/show/10018149) Thank you and it's true yes. This story is honestly the one that I would want to revisit the most, if I ever did that. I think giving the characters more breathing room to fully develop their relationships would be a pretty good idea. Also setting up some of the payoffs better. :heart:
Mar 24, 2024
3/25/24, 8:19 AM
I love the story, for someone who have an underwear fetish, this certainly hit the spot... MORE!!!
3/24/24, 7:51 AM
I seem to have found a small discrepancy in the story, so I thought I would mention it. In the previous chapter I recall Rico is still in high school. In this chapter Mickey just turned 18 and Rico says he's 6 years older than Mickey. That means Rico is 24 and still in high school?

3/24/24, 2:54 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) Good eyes! So, the Black Tiger stories are not in any real chronological order - in most of them. Rico IS a Senior in high school, but in the stories where Tigerboy is his sidekick, these occur later in his career when he’s in his mid-twenties, so Tigerboy can be a teenager.
3/24/24, 7:26 AM
I don't know exactly what it is you do, but it seems the way you weave details of the mind control techniques into the story makes it almost magical. i feel pretty familiar with standard kinds of hypnosis techniques but you invent other techniques which you really bring alive and make them completely believable. You are turning me from being a goodie-two-shoes to a bad-boy who wants the crime lords to enslave and use the hero in whatever way they want (especially, as Ab3 puts it, to turn this superhero into a bitch in heat!) Thanks so much for this hot entertainment.
3/24/24, 4:13 AM
Loving this series!