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1/2/23, 7:35 AM
Happy New Year! What happens to our boys?!

1/2/23, 7:52 PM
@[Coq au Vin](/user/show/916716) Oh yes! I was asked to be an emergency writer for another Secret Santa story.
1/2/23, 4:59 PM
You have an enviable knack for voices.
12/12/22, 2:21 PM
i love this story. these two innocent boys just having good natural curious times. I am loving this story and I enjoy your writing style.

1/2/23, 11:31 AM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thanks man! I’m glad you enjoy it. Definitely more to come!
1/2/23, 12:50 AM
I appreciate that our POV isn't instantly becoming better, that it's taking him some time. It seems like Mike has been thinking about this for a while, and has been more certain of and content with what he wants than the main character.

1/2/23, 11:28 AM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Yes that’s what I was trying to convey. I didn’t mention it specifically but Mike’s actions from the beginning on should hint that he is more aware of what he is doing and what he wants. He’s more fearful that the main character won’t accept him while our main hero struggles more with self acceptance. Things take a shift after chapter 3 though ;)
1/2/23, 9:49 AM
Wow! What a fantastic story! The ending was just perfect. It felt like a Christmas Film which is some of the highest praise i can give.
1/2/23, 4:05 AM
So glad to see you back!!! Another good story to look forward to.
1/2/23, 12:48 AM
I really like this! Always dig bros/himbos getting to know each other sexually and discovering what they really like.
1/1/23, 11:14 PM
Loved it! Even when the themes have nothing to do with my kinks. Actually, without all the sexual parts this reminds me of those old regional myths on how certain landmarks came to exist, or why certain towns follow certain traditions. Your ability to replicate the traits of those stories gave this a warm, exciting and unique touch that made reading it very enticing. I'm afraid that from now on foaming waterfalls will remind me of Everett's erotic predicament and I won't be able to explain my friends why I'm chuckling 😝
1/1/23, 3:30 PM
Loved this chapter. He’s definitely putting his new powers to good use.
1/1/23, 2:09 PM
I thought this was a compelling addition to the original. All of the relationships and feelings the characters had felt real, which is an impressive feat in such an unreal scenario like this. I empathised with all involved and if you were to ever expand on this I'd love to see something from Evan's point of view. How he's been treated over the years (that scene with Sean and Cory was oof) and what finally drove him to change his mind.
12/31/22, 7:13 PM
Well-written as always. You really know how to get that power behind words in romance without making it sappy. Great job.
12/30/22, 3:39 AM
MAN! This is awesome! Can't believe you made an actual track list. The dedication!!! I love the set up you have here and the way you have all the storyline's converging. I agree that Tim and Bernard being super submissive slutty boy toys to Lex is very very hot. I also can't wait to see how Dick reacts to realizing how enthralled and far gone all the heroes are. If things go according to HH's plans I hope it's Rico who becomes the "STONE COLD PUSSY BITCH" and Dick who alternates between "Dom/Sub." I think it could be really hot if Rico actually begs for the privilege of being the Stone Cold Pussy Bitch. But that's of course assuming nothing gets de-railed and with Superman on his way in who knows how it could go. In fact I think our man of Steel might be fit to be the ultimate stone cold pussy bitch when all is said and done ;P

12/30/22, 3:07 PM
@[fanboi214](/user/show/908190) HNY Fanboi! :tada: THANKS a MILLION 4 your positive comments (especially your appreciation of the H-H/Mercy Killers track listing)!!:sparkler: You made my day with your various comments...SUPER GR8FUL!!:boom: P.S. I took GR8 Pride in choosing the tracks (so it had a specific "sexual progression") -- my years of "record industry experience/creativity at work!!:notes: I’m THRILLED that you got into that aspect of the storyline!!:smiling_face_with_three_hearts: The Lex/Tim/Bernard throuple seems to be "a boner-fide HIT":stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: with the readers-- I'm SO Happy I went in that direction!!:smiling_imp: AND....All I’m gonna say to you about what happens NEXT is....GR8 MINDS, my friend!!:smirk_cat: Wishing U a Happy/Healthy/Prosperous 2023!!:partying_face:

12/30/22, 3:23 PM
@[fanboi214](/user/show/908190) P.S./BTW... I absolutely :revolving_hearts: that you isolated (or specifically appreciated!) the phrasing, "STONE COLD PUSSY BITCH"!!!:sparkles: LMAO!!:star_struck:

12/31/22, 12:43 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) You're welcome a million times. Every one of those comments was beyond earned. Thank you for sharing this super hot super fun story with us. And I can't wait to see where that great mind of yours leads ya ;)
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12/30/22, 8:35 PM
Lol echoing Nutiper, I also had echos of Midsommar reading this. Such a great story, got me all hot but also feeling happy with the ending
12/29/22, 8:57 PM
I’m loving the Lex/Tim/Bernard throuple going on.

12/30/22, 12:44 AM
@[Gay_Genes](/user/show/298626) HNY Gay_Genes! Thanks 4 your positive comment about the L/T/B throuple!!:boom: I'm happy that you & other readers are really enjoying it!!:smirk_cat: I'm SUPER GR8FUL your continued interest/enjoyment of the ongoing storyline!:pray: If you have any suggestions/input about fave characters or story direction, please feel free to further “the twisted windmills of my mind”!:smiling_imp: Wishing U a Happy/Healthy/Prosperous 2023!!:confetti_ball:

12/30/22, 2:28 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) I would love to see Lex mindfuck Tim and Bernard into thinking and believing (maybe even genetically modifying them) that he is their dad, and getting them to call him Daddy.

12/30/22, 3:10 PM
@[Gay_Genes](/user/show/298626) Thanks Gay_Genes!!!:raised_hands: I will take your suggestions under advisement!!:raised_eyebrow: Much appreciate your input & Happy New Year!!:partying_face:

12/30/22, 3:15 PM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) LOL Or maybe Lex actually falling in love with them. Lol Whatever you do with the three, I will still follow. I love seeing some hot throuple action. ❤️

12/30/22, 3:19 PM
@[Gay_Genes](/user/show/298626) Thanks again Gay_Genes!!!:clap: "The Lex throuple" has become a popular storyline, so I will continue 2 build upon "the HOTness"!!:fire: SUPER GR8FUL 4 your ideas/positivity/input!!:pray: Wishing U & Yours a Happy New Year!!:tada:
12/30/22, 12:34 AM
You're prose is so beautiful. The way you write everything is just so vivid and evocative, I'm really jelly. This was a very tricky set of tags, but you turned it into something really sweet and cute and it gave me all the warm fuzzies. Great job!

12/30/22, 10:17 AM
@[Lotus-Silk](/user/show/213413) Aww thank you so much, and I really like the fuzzies too, I think that's what I wanted to capture for this story :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: I've been a reader on GSS for some time now and me being able to write this way is thanks to a love of reading and a respect to the writers, authors, and editors here like yourself and many others who continue to make really hot stories on this site.
12/30/22, 1:29 AM
Great Story. It's realistic glimpse into another world similar to our own.
Dec 29, 2022
Martin
12/29/22, 9:53 PM
A hot little story! Well written and definitely exciting to read!
12/29/22, 7:05 PM
Man, this actually made me cry.
12/29/22, 6:01 PM
talk about sexual chaos LOL. I am very curious of the end game of these stories hehehe.

12/29/22, 6:48 PM
@[TeddybearTO](/user/show/10005146) HNY TBTO! Thanks 4 positive comments!!:grinning: Yeah, 4 this chapter, I decided to take "a calculated risk" & complicated the pot with "all of the various players/characters" in the LexCorp Lounge!!:cyclone: If you have any "proposed endgames" in mind, please feel free 2 shoot them my way-- I welcome your input/inspirations!!:boom: I'd be TRULY GR8FUL 4 any thoughts/ideas 2 further "the twisted windmills of my mind"!:smiling_imp: Wishing U a Happy/Healthy/Prosperous 2023!!:confetti_ball:
12/29/22, 6:29 PM
Thoughtful lore builder, which still manages swift pacing. I want follow-up chapters and more action, and more... TFing. Keep. it. up.
12/29/22, 6:28 PM
Fantastic story! Heartfelt and perfect for the holiday season. Cockatrice, you do an amazing job of developing the emotions and bitter-sweetness of it all while keeping the hope up. One more story where you show us just how talented you are. Kudos!
12/29/22, 4:40 PM
Hoping for a part 2, as the condition progresses!! I also love the clinical professional & nature of Dr. Carson. It’s an interesting juxtaposition to the craven & animalistic Impulses of the characters afflicted with JPS. Unique on this site. Bravo!
Martin
12/29/22, 2:31 PM
One should be disgusted about this story, but my hard dick says otherwise. And who am I to argue with my dick?
12/29/22, 2:17 PM
One thing that would be interesting would be see the parents and teachers calling for a meeting for them to find out what to do with the dogs, only for them to pull a prank that turns everyone in the meeting into canines too, and after the orgy, the Doberman principal says they need too ensure the whole school is turned, and gets back into being fucked by the Rottweiler coach
12/28/22, 10:31 AM
I know Scat isn't for everyone, but you've got such a vivid imagination. You really capture perverse wholesomeness so well! And Christmas! Two of my favourite things. I thought for sure Samuel's dad would show up, but that's not a fault of the story. You have such a unique creative voice, I look forward to your next story for sure.

12/28/22, 11:22 AM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) Thanks! I really wanted to do a Christmas story. I'm not sure if it was the best, but I really liked the idea of 'infectious cheer' and people getting their heart's desire in the form of a toy that infantilizes them. I'm actually a little disappointed in myself for not thinking of including Samuel's dad as part of his warped perception of the dream world. He'll probably show up in that place sooner or later as part of Samuel's fantasy, or maybe his mind now perceives Lieutenant Bingo-Bongo as his Daddy in addition to being his lover. I think Samuel and Bob's 'dreams' were my favorites to write. You don't see a lot of older guys being babied and regressed. I've felt a little more creative recently in terms of kink. I'll try and see what I can come up with in the future.

12/28/22, 5:25 PM
@[SyntheticHyacinth](/user/show/10025156) Sequel, sequel, sequel. :grin:
12/27/22, 4:48 PM
This was such a sweet, sexy story! I loved the boathouse setting, it felt perfect for a preppy story. If you write a sequel, I hope the blond pledge gets involved! ;)

12/28/22, 12:59 PM
@[Bound_Up_Boy](/user/show/907887) Thank you! Nothing felt more preppy to me than a school with a boathouse and a rowing club :smile: If in the off-chance I do write a sequel, there are some directions I could take to build on the world and its characters :relaxed:
12/27/22, 3:47 PM
I really enjoyed the subtle, story-wide buildup to their sudden, almost unexpected kiss in the boathouse—it’s a really clever juxtaposition, and deftly done. And I can’t fail to mention how hot I found the piss scene, because it perfectly captures the “boyish power play” that I love so much, a sort of sexual spontaneity from which the victim neither can nor desires to escape. Very successfully sexy! Thanks for this contribution to Cupid. I’m always on the lookout for more Cupid exclusives.

12/28/22, 12:57 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) I'm happy that you enjoyed the story, and also that the piss scene was something you found hot. Honestly, that part was the one I really thought long and hard about on how to incorporate with the other tags, as someone who is only slightly familiar with the kink, but it was really fun writing about new kinks with characters I really wanted to develop. Thank you for taking the time to read the story!