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1/4/23, 6:50 PM
Part 4? Gaaa! Spoiler!

1/4/23, 7:14 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) LOL. I posted that thinking that part 4 was already approved; I sent it about 8 hours ago.

1/4/23, 7:36 PM
@[M. Greene](/user/show/130901) Thought so. I keep hitting refresh. Can’t wait.
Great Story 1suggestion.
1/4/23, 7:32 PM
The only thing that might have made the story better in my opinion is if you would have done a romantic partnership building between Colin and Zev before what comes later in the story. That way it would have been more of a tragic, but sweet ending.
1/4/23, 3:47 PM
A great story, with some intriguing population dynamics behind it. If masters always return as masters, then over time (a very long time!) all men will eventually become masters. If however there is a small probability that some will return as neutrals, then there will be interchange each way so that over time all masters will have further spells as neutrals/thralls. The overall balance between masters and neutrals/thralls will also depend upon the rate of new arrivals from Earth. Were that flow to cease, the two populations would eventually reach a steady state where the numbers moving each way (neutral to master vs master to neutral) are broadly equal, assuming of course that the death rate of masters remains constant and isn’t affected e.g. by some cultural change.

1/4/23, 4:02 PM
@[U.K. guy](/user/show/1944978) Thanks, UK Guy; I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Although I'm no mathematician, I did suspect that if Masters always came back as Masters, it wouldn't work, so I had Azrael (a former Master) come back as Neutral in part 1. Although this is rare, I think that's possibly offset by the fact that the Masters spend a lot of time fighting Masters from other tribes, and jockeying for position within their own, which probably gives them a slightly greater chance of dying, although in part 4, I have 5 dead slaves and only one dead Master in that tannery raid. Oh dear... This is why I always hated maths at school LOL.
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1/4/23, 10:47 AM
Felt good to read this.
1/4/23, 5:56 AM
This made me so, so happy. I love a good romantic happy ending, not to mention a sexy one.
1/4/23, 3:43 AM
God I love this series so much! Like another commenter I hope Nick’s muscles aren’t gone for long but this chapter opens so much going forward and really makes me excited for what’s next! In particular Darius’ loss of inhibitions and the knowledge of exactly what was done to them make me look forward to how it plays out.
1/4/23, 3:17 AM
Absolutely delightful! It was so well constructed. A perfect combo of pure hot kink and utter romance. Loved it!
1/3/23, 1:37 PM
the dilf... the coach! Please bring him back! I love this story. Your writing is so good and captures me!

1/4/23, 1:49 AM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Don’t worry dude, there is a lot more of Coach to come ;)
1/4/23, 1:40 AM
This was so beautiful! 😭♥ Jed is a lovely creature, and I love his take on the whole situation. His attitude is almost close to how children react to changes: with awe and without prejudices. His curiosity for gay sex and his fear to stop having the hots for men are so endearing. He's the kind of character that is hard not to love. Then, the chemistry with his best friend was so heartwarming. The way Ricky cares for him, the way he makes Jed feel at ease, the way he accepts him no matter what... God, many more bromances should end up this way! Had I been Ricky I would have cried after having granted my long awaited wish. And that makes me think: I need a magical abuela, pronto! 😂 So thank you so much for this Christmas tale! It was a delight from start to end.