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Anonymous
3/28/24, 6:12 AM
Well written. Enjoyed this very much and hopefully will get to see this game played out!
3/27/24, 5:21 PM
Long time reader, first time commenter - this story is why i read this site. I’ve recently started hooking up with this older couple and I’ve felt some of the way Brad feels here- I haven’t gotten the happy scene Brad enjoys here but I’m really rooting for him. Keep up the amazing work🙏

3/28/24, 12:07 AM
@[BeezingKing](/user/show/2230179) Thank you sir. I have not personally been in a relationship like that, but I have several poly friends who have, so I have witnessed the good and the bad from the outside to try to draw on.
3/27/24, 11:50 PM
I've always loved the straight to gay game stories. I can't wait for more.
3/27/24, 11:04 PM
Reread it and it was amazing.
3/27/24, 9:47 PM
Very good
3/27/24, 7:46 PM
Beautiful. I love when the Bottom is in charge.
3/27/24, 6:50 PM
Me gustaría saber la opinión de lo que piensan de la historia, algo que les quedará de incógnita, que les gusto más, cual culo les pareció que disfruto más, cual trasero o traseros les gustaría probar… o lo que quieran opinar. Estaré contestando los comentarios, sino desean que les responda (lo cual es comprensible dependiendo de la persona y sus gustos) solo deben poner un “*” al final del comentario. Gracias siempre. (Si soy muy perezoso y es el mismo comentario que antes, pero creo que es el que acapara bien todas las partes, que no se note mi pereza) :writing_hand: :penguin:
3/27/24, 6:47 PM
Bienvenidos a la zona de comentario, las nalgas tatuadas del matón de Liam en esta ocasión estarán “sujetando" cada comentario que coloques. :peach:
Ark
3/27/24, 5:02 PM
TFTC
3/27/24, 5:13 AM
This is so hot. Is there any chance that you posted on this site before ? I remember one or two year ago I read a extremely nice story in this “transcript style” and edit before ( with square brackets and everything), but I couldn’t find it anymore (probs got deleted).

3/27/24, 4:03 PM
@[Bbbbin](/user/show/1918429) I posted a version of this as a script offer in /r/gonewildaudiogay, but there were no takers. (Which isn't surprising: it's a *long* script with four parts, one of them for a woman...)
3/27/24, 3:53 PM
Very good intro like to see where it goes, turn one into a mannequin with a hard cock
3/27/24, 12:28 PM
Very clearly inspired by Campus Magnum, by Berylforge. Interested to see what happens next!

3/27/24, 3:01 PM
@[Hinner](/user/show/10013948) I did get my inspiration from Campus Magnum by Berylforge, who knows, maybe if it'll be a hit we'll do something together haha.
3/27/24, 9:18 AM
Hot af so far, Definitely looking forward to any updates you do for the story! Not sure how long the story is, but can make a table of contentt for all the cards thats effecting the players, to help the readers keep things straight.

3/27/24, 3:00 PM
@[Speed99](/user/show/909251) I will make a table of content, right now I've got a few cards written down. I won't make an online list right now 'cause there isn't much, but I will make one when the time is right. Thank you for the feedback :)
3/27/24, 2:46 PM
Definitely want to see more!
3/27/24, 1:36 PM
Would love to read more . Seems hot!
R P
3/27/24, 1:08 PM
This is hilarious and hot
Anonymous
3/27/24, 10:57 AM
Oh this is going to be a good series!! Can’t wait for more.
3/27/24, 10:57 AM
I would love to see more, if you don't mind
3/27/24, 6:57 AM
Fun story. You've got a great ear for dialogue
3/27/24, 4:02 AM
Ooh this is a very interesting but also Hot story. I never thought a manuscript style story would be this so hot.

3/27/24, 4:08 AM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Thanks! I liked the idea of seeing what I could do without any visuals.
Dec 25, 2021
3/26/24, 10:44 PM
What a beautiful, and hot, Christmas story!
Mar 24, 2024
3/25/24, 7:42 PM
Dropping us right into a mystery! This will be fun. I couldn't quite picture the full situation the narrator and Ben are in (lying on the floor, wrists and ankles bound?) Seductive start! I can't wait to see what game the captor has in store, who this amusingly fiendish dude is, and what his plans are for our three rugby studs. 🏉💪
3/24/24, 5:01 PM
This was beautifully conjured, you managed to make it bittersweet without making it tragic. However, it needed more 'meat' in the middle, you had a lot of short sentences. It does not mean the story is bad per se, it's really really good, but I feel this kind of story would have worked _even_ better as a longer novella.

3/25/24, 11:50 AM
@[Twan Andersen](/user/show/10018149) Thank you and it's true yes. This story is honestly the one that I would want to revisit the most, if I ever did that. I think giving the characters more breathing room to fully develop their relationships would be a pretty good idea. Also setting up some of the payoffs better. :heart:
Mar 24, 2024
3/25/24, 8:19 AM
I love the story, for someone who have an underwear fetish, this certainly hit the spot... MORE!!!
3/24/24, 7:51 AM
I seem to have found a small discrepancy in the story, so I thought I would mention it. In the previous chapter I recall Rico is still in high school. In this chapter Mickey just turned 18 and Rico says he's 6 years older than Mickey. That means Rico is 24 and still in high school?

3/24/24, 2:54 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) Good eyes! So, the Black Tiger stories are not in any real chronological order - in most of them. Rico IS a Senior in high school, but in the stories where Tigerboy is his sidekick, these occur later in his career when he’s in his mid-twenties, so Tigerboy can be a teenager.
3/24/24, 7:26 AM
I don't know exactly what it is you do, but it seems the way you weave details of the mind control techniques into the story makes it almost magical. i feel pretty familiar with standard kinds of hypnosis techniques but you invent other techniques which you really bring alive and make them completely believable. You are turning me from being a goodie-two-shoes to a bad-boy who wants the crime lords to enslave and use the hero in whatever way they want (especially, as Ab3 puts it, to turn this superhero into a bitch in heat!) Thanks so much for this hot entertainment.
3/24/24, 4:13 AM
Loving this series!
Anonymous
3/23/24, 11:53 PM
Super Hot!!
3/23/24, 10:08 PM
As always I love your stories… and as always, I am massively jealous of the bottom. Lucky lucky Jun.