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Nutiper
1/8/23, 11:21 PM
There's something *extra* 🔥 about Dr. Darkness insisting furiously that he's going to get the upper hand on Captain Courage — only to find himself on his knees blowing the hero, and inadvertently turning himself temporarily stupid thanks to Courage's alien 'dumbing-down' precum. Meanwhile, the happy-go-lucky Courage gets smarter and increasingly in control throughout the blowjob, while Darkness gets more and more oblivious and eager to suck the hero's schlong... *Whew.* It's a brilliant touch! It adds a lot of heat to the whole brain-drain scenario. And it's so funny to see the inversion of the usual villain-corrupts-hero trope, where the hero is the one to 'corrupt' the villain with his sexy wholesomeness for a change!

1/9/23, 6:02 PM
@[Nutiper](/user/show/25270) I'm glad it worked! It felt a bit messy as I was writing it, TBH.
1/8/23, 10:05 PM
Love seeing the continuations of these older stories. This one in particular is so creative. I’m sorry you’re in a stressful stretch of life. Those are the worst! Do what you need to do to rest and feel better!

1/9/23, 6:02 PM
@[SwimJock](/user/show/39947) Thanks! I certainly didn't expect to spend a year finishing the chapter.
1/8/23, 9:11 PM
Love that you came back to this and hope life stuff is getting better!

1/9/23, 6:01 PM
@[Botbot](/user/show/10010276) Thanks! Rough end to the year, but fingers crossed for 2023.
1/9/23, 5:26 PM
You're my favorite author on here! Fantastic story and I love the perception play!
1/9/23, 1:09 PM
Great addition to your saga. Thanks to you and to Jack Parker for the influence he gave you

1/9/23, 2:44 PM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) THANKS Mjkuhll!!:smiley: HNY & GR8 2 hear from U!:fireworks: Appreciate your positive comments...GR8FUL & THRILLED that U ENJOYED it!:pray: After reading Jack's recent (& BRILLIANT!) story "NOT SO SUPER NOW":raised_hands:, it gave me the inspration:zap: (& "kick in the ass":athletic_shoe:) to think "out of the box":outbox_tray:, which prompted me to go back & do some research the Bash character from the Superboy comics (who I always thought was HOT:fire: ), which is where I learned about SUPERBASH!:supervillain: Again, THANKS 4 the positivity & Have a SUPA-PRODUCTIVE Week!:sun_with_face:
1/9/23, 5:47 AM
What a fun surprise! Way to keep reinventing things and keeping them fresh. Loved seeing Lex's loyal minions breaking superb itch down to his lowest.

1/9/23, 2:28 PM
@[fanboi214](/user/show/908190) THANK YOU, Fanboi!!:smiling_face_with_three_hearts: Appreciate your positive comments/feedback & SO Glad that you ENJOYED this surprise (& the chapter!)!! :hugs: As I mentioned in the comments above, SUPERBASH is NOT done w/SUPERMAN just yet…:supervillain: Curating his evil, humiliating brand of domination just might give LEX a run for his :moneybag:!!! Again, SUPA-GR8FUL 4 your positivity & Have a BRILLIANT week!!:sparkler:
byhisello
1/9/23, 2:27 PM
Well written, but you know that. The pacing seemed fine to me. I'm a fan of the slow burn story, so this is not something unappealing. Part of what appeals to me in a hypnosis story is the public nature of a stage show and the potential for humiliation; I'm also a fan of exhibitionism stories. I was trained years ago in clinical hypnosis, which is quite easy since in a clinical setting the subject is seeking help. I've never taken it to the stage, but I suspect I could do it and do it well. As you probably know, the key is calibrating your subject. Some of the strip routines don't actually require the subjects to be hypnotized; all the needed was an excuse, plausible deniability.
Willie Cici
1/9/23, 3:51 AM
I loved it. It was dark, but hot. Great writing, too. A good example of writing and editing. It shows. Keep it up.
1/9/23, 2:25 AM
Really enjoying the drama and depth you’ve created here. Chapters can’t come fast enough.
1/9/23, 1:49 AM
Thanks everyone for the kind words! Was very curious how people would receive this! It was supposed to be a very different story originally and kind of came out in a mad rush - so, point taken about there maybe being a bit more room for build, but I don't think it would've been at all like this if I hadn't written it in one sitting. Thanks again for reading, and the kind replies!