Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/15/23, 4:29 AM
I NEED to know what happens next!! Does Coach give in and help Luke with his problem!?
Martin
2/11/23, 9:33 PM
It's a very nice and hot story, but I don't see any mind control aspect. Is there coming something more? If not you should probably remove the Spiral as a x-posted site.
drs826sub
2/11/23, 5:48 PM
Looking forward to more of this character!
Anonymous
2/11/23, 3:57 PM
This is drs826sub from Twitter. OMG this tale you crafted is soooooo irresistible. I did fall right into it feeling I was there. You have me hooked and I can't wait to read more!
Soccerbiguy
2/11/23, 9:43 AM
Nice story, and agreed, a very sudden but sweet ending :)
2/10/23, 2:09 AM
What a hot story!

2/10/23, 10:16 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Thank you!!
2/10/23, 4:53 PM
I was not expecting the ending but I really enjoyed it.

2/10/23, 4:55 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) Yea. I was originally gonna go with something a bit less pleasant. But. I’m a sucker for a happy ending.

2/10/23, 5:12 PM
@[Alpha Artemis](/user/show/1997819) Well quite possibly Chaz was planning something worse but accidentally got his daddy heart stolen along the way. 😊
2/10/23, 5:09 PM
Great story! What a fascinating setting for more chapters. Nice and kinky but also has a kind of “safe” feel because it’s a public facing business not some shady org that makes unsuspecting boys vanish into the night.
2/10/23, 4:43 PM
Fantastic story! Would love to see more of Dawson and the other employees' journeys, especially with more mental control (e.g. is there more to the fact that the patrons like seeing them as full drones?).