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2/4/23, 4:44 PM
This series started hot, stayed hot, and I'm sure it's gonna finish hot. Always a pleasure to read, thanks for sharing your talents with us. Glad Cameron got in on the party instead of ending it ;)
2/4/23, 5:57 AM
You know what I'm gonna say. Loved seeing Dick being all Dom. Another amazing chapter as usual and can't wait to see who the new addition in the bathroom is :P

2/4/23, 2:17 PM
@[fanboi214](/user/show/908190) Hi Fanboi!! THANK YOU, my friend!!:smiling_face_with_three_hearts: THRILLED that U enjoyed this chapter & will do my BEST 2 keep U "on the edge"!!:smiling_imp: GR8FUL 4 your positive comments & ENJOY your weekend!:sun_with_face:
2/3/23, 4:02 PM
Really hot stuff! I loved how the way its written makes the reader feel like they're being manipulated too. Would love a follow up chapter.

@Whitechap_e1
2/4/23, 8:47 AM
@[PuffDeamon](/user/show/10025400) Thanks, I have a partial second chapter but got distracted. Time to put my nose back on the grindstone. Huge fan of your work - love stories where there's something nasty in the woodshed!
Anonymous
2/3/23, 4:00 PM
Like always, I’m completely amazed by how great you are at managing to craft something that is simultaneously super hot and also incredibly well fleshed out with regards to concept characters and world building. At the end of each new chapter I’m left wanting more. In these kinds of stories, I typically never find myself enjoying or rooting for the villain or asshole but there is just something about Lewis that makes him the exception. I really hope that he is able to make his dream of turning out a team full of jocks with his fat cock a reality. That being sad I’m also glad the chapter ended with him not fully being able to take advantage of Jace and his magic.

2/3/23, 10:35 PM
@Anonymous Thanks! It's a mixed blessing sometimes when I just want to bang out something quick. I like reading stories where an asshole wins, but I usually end up threading the needle between that and a happy ending. Definitely more Lewis to come in future chapters.
2/2/23, 9:20 AM
Your writing skills are amazing! I admit that while the chapter started really hot, when Lewis behaved more and more like a dick it had put me off. While Franklin was the voice of reason, when he had no effect Jace was just a victim in a way. I hope that his dumbness is only temporary like in the beginning and not permanent because of what Lewis said at the end. Fucked silly can be hot, but when temporary (in my opinion). Lore wise it was a bit confusing because I don't understand why Lewis got to change things. He wasn't offered a pact and Jace didn't have a choice (also platinum blonde is way overrated, but that's my opinion on the matter. The GIF vs GIF dialogue was absolutely hilarious and made me laugh a lot! As I'm writing this it comes out more critical than appreciative, so I just want to emphasize again that dirty talk is hot and that your writing is hot. Just don't let Jace be abused or hurt. The poor guy has a heart of gold. I really can't wait for the next chapter!

2/2/23, 3:37 PM
@Reader Thanks! Technically it was a spell-pact Jace made that allowed Lewis to change him, not a bargain Lewis made. Jace was a little loopy from other effects, so he was basically tricked into making the agreement by the spirits. There will be some more details on magic in the next chapter.

2/3/23, 11:26 AM
@[bluesuedewho](/user/show/1225367) Ohhh, I see. It was a bit confusing because it seemed like they were waiting for Lewis to get to a mental state where they can use Lewis for their own fun (and this is why they were able to affect him directly when boosting his confidence without involving Jace in some way or another). By the way, if you think I didn't google these three to see who they are and find out that they are priapus' subordinates (as far as I understood) you're very much wrong. I love easter eggs.

2/3/23, 10:32 PM
@Reader Glad somebody appreciates my little details! :wink:
2/3/23, 10:29 AM
Love this and absolutely love your style. Big muscley himbos being topped by smaller horse hung dudes is the exact niche I REALLY get into so this is just perfect in my eyes. I also love the way your work incorporates magic/hypno kinda elements while also still having a certain amount of sweetness and good spiritedness.

2/3/23, 10:30 PM
@[fanboi214](/user/show/908190) Thanks! I enjoy reading darker, squirmy stuff, but it's hard for me to write.
Art
1/31/23, 3:16 AM
I have so enjoyed this story! Is this the end? It has been so long since chapter 18 was posted. Thank you.

2/3/23, 9:21 PM
@[Art](/user/show/1014223) Yeah. We are many who are eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Anonymous
2/2/23, 12:24 PM
This was, as with everything you write, super hot. You write the transformation of jock to himbo slut so perfectly. I can’t wait for more!

2/2/23, 3:33 PM
@Anonymous Thanks! More to come!
2/2/23, 3:49 AM
Very nice! That is a great new chapter. I loved the magic happening to Jace. I loved how Lewis was a such a dick but that the magic beings riding Jace pushed him into it. I loved Franklin being the voice of reason calling Lewis out in his stupidity, but still wanted to dom Jace and felt bad about it. I found the Gock thing hilarious. And GIF vs GIF. Classic Blue hilarity. Most of all, I loved the flip of the obliviousness. Jace is the only one that remembers that the nerd’s dicks got bigger, but Franklin and Lewis are the only ones that know that Jace has been changing. Soooo hot. Can’t wait for more.

2/2/23, 3:25 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) Thanks! It took more effort than expected, but I ultimately had fun playing with stuff in this chapter.
2/1/23, 8:31 PM
Don't get me wrong, I understand it's almost definitely the author's kink, but I'm kinda sad Jace (jason) isn't a bit more of a demanding/controlling bottom instead of a brain-dead cock-sleeve. Like sure, he can get his brain-fucked out, that's hot. But you start calling him names and shit-talking and he just gets you off *immediately* and leaves you there wondering what the fuck happened. Honestly, I'd just like Jace to get someone who wants to show him a good, long, slow fuck.

2/2/23, 3:24 PM
@[Drawningghle](/user/show/10005957) Thanks for reading!