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dusty
2/21/23, 6:04 PM
I think this was HOY and had a similar experience when I was in college minus having a 3rd guy in bathroom. College bathroom sex can be so good!

2/22/23, 1:07 PM
@dusty Damn, wish I'd gone to your college...
DadSon
2/20/23, 10:27 PM
I too love the corruption, but I'm also interested in seeing the Pastor and Blake end up having a loving incestuous relationship. Heaven-approved consensual incest if you will.

2/22/23, 7:14 AM
@DadSon This.this this this this this! God I am sickof father son mindcontrol corruption and yea they are fun but there are too much of them. I want the to have a fathersonnmindcontrol love. Is that too much to ask? Anyway good so far but I hope tanner burns in hell
2/21/23, 8:44 PM
*pulls out his fan and swipes it furiously* I do declare, I am all a-heated! Helluva story so far.
2/20/23, 11:19 PM
My goodness, this was so hot! :fire: Aaaand just like that Devon and Tony cease to be part of the rebellion! :laughing: I guess Tanner is THAT powerful, isn't him? It just took him a couple of words to reset all their worries. Such a pity! Kind of comical too. Yet, it was lovely to see their newfound attraction for each other remain intact. I enjoyed Jiang's reinforced cocky attittude. It was hilarious to see his reactions. I honestly chuckled when he rejected Pastor Peter's kiss with a commanding "You don't want to kiss me" :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes: And I also loved how desperate Pastor Peter was to enjoy the presence of his son. He's descended a long way down into the abyss of depravity, and it shows. But the best part was when Tanner finally exerted his powers onto the boys and made them lust after their own dads. That was amazing! I liked the progression from realization, to horniness, to full display, to looking for release in a father figure. Great read indeed. Highly erotic. Hit the all the right buttons. :blush: And now we know where Tanner's planning to culminate his wicked plan. By the way, it was subtle but I think that making Pastor Peter cancel the Sunday mass was a very powerful move from Tanner. Sunday's the most important day in a Christian church! The day of the Lord. And he complies almost instantly? Pastor Peter doesn't know how close he is to the point of no return. Thanks again for continuing this amazing series :heart: I'm loving every part of it. P.S. I wonder how this mysterious cat managed to make that call. Did they use their paws? Although they could have used their voice to activate the phone's AI, I guess. It's the XXIst century after all.

2/21/23, 6:52 AM
@[Piko](/user/show/14889) If Tanner is able to do whatever he is doing, the cat should be able to make a phone call. Minor telekinesis is pretty minor as far as superpowers go.

2/21/23, 3:16 PM
@[kelley79](/user/show/10022397) Oh! I just thought that this almighty creature fighting his terrestrial cat anatomy to dial a number must have looked super cute! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
2/20/23, 4:18 PM
Well, IMO Peter and Blake's corruption and Tanner's victory are two separate things. I'd rather have the first but not the second. In fact, Tanner and the white and orange cat are very similar in one aspect - their arrogance make me want to see them lose.

2/21/23, 1:40 PM
@[kelley79](/user/show/10022397) I agree. The final corruption of Peter and Blake and the other families does not have to mean that Tanner will walk away victorious. He deserves to loose somehow and be cut out of his own success.
2/20/23, 8:59 PM
I’m hearing the love for corruption.. :)

2/21/23, 8:41 AM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) Hope my last comment didn't come off as rude. My intent was just joking that usually you root for the traditional "hero". But fuck the hero, I want our "villain", Tanner, to win hahaha

2/21/23, 12:23 PM
@[James Heller](/user/show/907806) *So* rude. ;) No, I kid—I love the engagement. And you’re not alone: right now it sounds like most readers are Team Tanner all the way. Here’s hoping everyone who has stuck with this twisted little tale are satisfied with how things play out in the final chapters.
Anonymous
2/21/23, 12:23 AM
Just finished the first two chapters this is so hot! Love “straight” men switching to speedos and thongs and the humiliation that comes with that. Great work can’t wait for the next part!

2/21/23, 12:07 PM
@Anonymous Means the world to hear! Any ideas or suggestions, feel free to send them my way.
2/20/23, 5:38 PM
And timing is great given the ‘Secrets of the Occult’ theme
2/20/23, 5:37 PM
Incredible Ending. It was very true to life. No one knows if a relationship will work out but finding a good one is worth the risk. I wonder if the three other guys will learn as much or as quickly as Willem.
2/20/23, 4:11 PM
Oh God, yes yes yes and yes. I really love how Peter has changed compared to the beginning of the story. Looking forward to what we could have next...