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2/14/23, 8:47 PM
I really hope there’s more planned.

Gingcub
2/15/23, 1:39 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) thanks! I haven’t decided whether to keep it a one off or continue. A little sadistic part of me likes the cliff hanger…

2/15/23, 2:32 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) I enjoyed this one a lot, and to me it felt like a complete story cliffhanger and all. For what it's worth!

Gingcub
2/15/23, 9:44 AM
Thanks Amul! @[amul](/user/show/10003734)
Anonymous
2/15/23, 4:29 AM
I NEED to know what happens next!! Does Coach give in and help Luke with his problem!?
Martin
2/11/23, 9:33 PM
It's a very nice and hot story, but I don't see any mind control aspect. Is there coming something more? If not you should probably remove the Spiral as a x-posted site.
drs826sub
2/11/23, 5:48 PM
Looking forward to more of this character!
Anonymous
2/11/23, 3:57 PM
This is drs826sub from Twitter. OMG this tale you crafted is soooooo irresistible. I did fall right into it feeling I was there. You have me hooked and I can't wait to read more!
Soccerbiguy
2/11/23, 9:43 AM
Nice story, and agreed, a very sudden but sweet ending :)
2/10/23, 2:09 AM
What a hot story!

2/10/23, 10:16 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Thank you!!
2/10/23, 4:53 PM
I was not expecting the ending but I really enjoyed it.

2/10/23, 4:55 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) Yea. I was originally gonna go with something a bit less pleasant. But. I’m a sucker for a happy ending.

2/10/23, 5:12 PM
@[Alpha Artemis](/user/show/1997819) Well quite possibly Chaz was planning something worse but accidentally got his daddy heart stolen along the way. 😊
2/10/23, 5:09 PM
Great story! What a fascinating setting for more chapters. Nice and kinky but also has a kind of “safe” feel because it’s a public facing business not some shady org that makes unsuspecting boys vanish into the night.