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2/28/23, 4:32 AM
I fuckin' love your writing style, man. > Naa, Aanglish, just slapping you with a hen’s bladder. Just ... Where on earth did you come up with _that_ one?!
2/28/23, 1:02 AM
Look, I don't know how you come up with this shit and I don't really care. It's the most original bit of comedy erotica I have seen on this site since...the last thing you wrote, actually. And the damn scandahoovian names! It reads like a damn gay porn version of a St. Olaf story.
2/28/23, 12:55 AM
Your stories are the best.
2/28/23, 12:25 AM
Main plot and TF aside, you manage to bring us another story about a sweet couple that feels honest and heartfelt. Kudos again Cockatrice, it's always a pleasure to read your stuff.
2/27/23, 11:38 PM
Love the title and once again you bring sometbing deligtful and add your own flare! Looking forward to the next story!
2/27/23, 4:55 PM
That description of Vic eating ribs was delightfully erotic. Now I'm really hungry. For ribs. Yeah. Ribs.
2/27/23, 2:35 PM
I'm honestly just glad you didn't get angry at my negative comment. I hate posting those and try very hard to not say anything if I don't have something nice to say. You just got me in the feels pretty hard ;-)

2/27/23, 3:11 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) I don’t mind at all. I totally get why people would have such a visceral reaction to this rift between Luke and Sammy. It’s partially based on my own personal experience so in a way writing it is therapeutic because I get to give it the outcome I wanted.
2/27/23, 1:48 AM
I would have so much more enjoyed this chapter if the crushing weight of the injustice done to Sammy hadn't literally been a boner killer for me. Usually I don't say anything negative at all beyond "please, guys, check your grammar", but ...you made Sammy too nice, too sweet, too crushing on Luke, and Luke's reaction to him was so _awful_ and incredibly unjust that I just replay the scene over and over and hate Luke for it. So now I'm sitting here hating the protagonist while he's getting his bussy pounded by a guy with a giant fucking dick and thinking "you know what? He doesn't deserve Mark's dick. He doesn't deserve anyone's dick. Not until he apologizes to Sammy for being a giant asshole himself". So, like, literary wise, it's a good move. Erotica wise, it just destroyed it for me. (And I really apologize, for the negativity here, because overall I love this series so much, and your writing as a whole)

2/27/23, 2:19 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Thanks for the comment! I’m glad you feel this way actually because it means you are invested in the characters. Luke is clearly struggling with his sexuality, and while that doesn’t excuse his behavior, it does explain why he’s acting how he’s acting. He’s young and making mistakes - he’s human. In the following chapters Luke comes closer to realizing what he’s done wrong. I’m a big romantic softie and love a happy ending, so there will definitely be one for this story.
2/26/23, 4:18 AM
Amazing that this is both your first story, and you aren't a native English speaker. I would have guessed neither if you hadn't said. It was hot, vivid, and you gave enough attention to the major kinks of the story (muscles, hair, musk) to be satisfying and horny. This falls under a section of fiction that is either a very long caption or a very short story. With that limitation, the transformation sequence was rather short and didn't include a tremendous amount of details. _This is completely fine._ That being said, lovers of transformation stories would surely appreciate a more detailed transformation sequence as well as more time spent after the transformation so they can live the experience through the transformed character (since imagination is the only way to do this particular kink within reason). Perhaps you'd consider a longer form story for another transformation tale, or expand on this one by letting the readers follow Henry and his roommate to the gym so we can see just what kind of effect his musk has on others, and what kind of sex he likes to have with other people. This was a very good first story!

2/26/23, 9:44 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) Thank you so much for such a positive and constructive feedback! As this is my first story preferred to start small but I do have a lot of ideas that would need lengthier stories to fully develop. Seeing how well this first story is being received, I'm getting motivated to expand on the setting and the characters as well, so expect some more soon! Thank you again for your advices!