Recent Comments

3/3/23, 4:10 AM
So glad to see this back. I went back to the beginning and reread all of it together. So amazing. As far as who “wins”, I’m kind of a romantic, so I’d like Ethan to end up with his brother Sam, and Tony and Devon to become lovers. Drew can end up with his dad, Lyle. Peter and Blake care for each other, so why not? That leaves Jiang. But he’s become Tanner, Junior. His story can continue somewhere else. But no matter what, I will be happy. But I’m also wondering, if Jiang didn’t want to kiss Peter because he might transfer his new powers if he did?
3/2/23, 10:17 PM
I'd like to thank Google Chrome for letting me select a word to get a definition of it, or a link to Wikipedia. And I'd like to thank you for consistently making adorable himbo stories with characters that surround them who are achingly sweet. Like, I thought I knew my kinks, and then this site just blows my mind with authors like you. (It helps that you have actual writing talent, too. I would buy your books.)
Anonymous
3/1/23, 1:06 PM
Almost seems like as Jer thinks something, Ryder becomes it. Might be interesting if his mind wandered to a change or kink he would only imagine and Ryder evolved to it... bearded smoking tough guy, swearing sexual focused jock, etc

Anonymous
3/2/23, 2:47 PM
@Anonymous Nah, maybe that would work in another story. I don’t feel like this one would need that
2/25/23, 6:11 PM
"certified someballier". I'm dyin' over heah. I love this story so much. Even when it's not hitting my kinks, it's just really great erotica!

3/2/23, 12:35 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Thanks! I try to write broadly (well, as broad as reality altering gay smut is going to get).
2/25/23, 1:41 PM
That breadstick scene may have just completely broken me. I was gonna quote it to highlight how much I loved it, but it kept going and kept raising the hijinks so far that it would have been basically a copy and paste job for one "lol" comment. You know, the logic might not always be here, I may not be devoted to every character you've created, Sam might sometimes be a little more ditzy than you quite intended him to be, but none of that matters. This is a classic bedroom farce on a cosmic scale and I am _so_ there for it.

3/2/23, 12:33 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) I rarely plan for my stories to be farce, but then I trip down the stairs, rip my pants, and face-plant into the keyboard, producing wildly improbable scenarios in the process.
Martin
3/1/23, 9:26 PM
Such a lovely continuation of that story!
3/1/23, 8:02 PM
now THAT made my dick leak! great story. i luv a big, hairy man. . . [look what u made me do ;)](https://twitter.com/pike5280/status/1600584917024325633/photo/1)
2/26/23, 4:30 PM
So excited about how this plays out, you have set up such a great story. I literally skipped the sex scene to find out what was happening with the plot

3/1/23, 2:03 PM
@[ImNotGoodAtUsernames](/user/show/10004981) Same here. I came quickly so that I had an excuse to see what's Blake up to. I'm going to go against the grain here--mostly because I'm all out of cum to give--but I'd like to see the cat succeed here, maybe at least partially. But the moment I come back to this story, I'm probably going to sing a whole different tune.
2/28/23, 3:34 AM
I hate to be the first one to comment. It very much needs more fleshing out. Why all of the sudden did they have lust in their eyes. Why did they fuck like that. Just there are so many holes and gaps to make the story. Not just hard to follow along with, but makes it just flat unenjoyable. “I’ve been keeping track on how many times you guys came. Kaito came 4 times, Kanoashi came 3 times. I came 7 times and the absolute slut is Austin who came 19 times in the past 3 hours” said Refias. I found that extremely jarring in an already jarring story. This isn't meant to tear down your art. I would like to see you improve on this same story expand, and grow.

Anonymous
2/28/23, 8:15 AM
@[HnT Boy](/user/show/87763) this is my first time writing a NSFW story so it would make sense that it sucks so bad. in the future, i might continuing or fixing this story

Martin
2/28/23, 5:22 PM
@Anonymous Don't get discouraged! You only get better with practice. And reading a lot of other stories. You might get inspired, too :)
2/28/23, 3:25 PM
So romantic and sweet, with a healthy respect for consent and communication, too. What a lovely story! :)