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6/16/23, 3:32 AM
A sweet appetizer for what's coming next.

6/17/23, 3:24 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Thank you for consistent kind words. They mean a lot to me and I hope you continue to enjoy my writing. ❤️
6/16/23, 11:26 PM
I continue to be flabbergasted at how good this is. And it's striking deep chords in me, erotic without a ton of eroticism, making me think. Just...so well done. I feel like I keep saying that but each chapter is a delight.

6/17/23, 3:15 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Honestly, your comments mean so much to us! It's so wonderful to hear what you're enjoying about the story! (In other words, we are happy to read as many comments as you feel like writing!) Thank you so much for taking the time to share your thoughts with us.
6/14/23, 11:06 PM
This was completely remarkable. Literary in tone and a fantastic amount of world-building. And I definitely saw the Altered Carbon nods.

6/16/23, 11:52 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Thank you so much, that's hugely encouraging to us both! Actually, we have some plans to eventually do some rewriting of about the first 8 chapters to smooth a few things and maybe add a bit more here and there. Probably after the next chapter we publish!
6/15/23, 8:44 PM
I absolutely adore the slow-burn nature of this. The imagery is amazing, and the little hints of what is to come are so titillating. Just fantastic.
6/15/23, 5:55 PM
This is so damn wholesome my god. Wholesome, well written and I love everyone in it. Yarif is peak himbo and I love him.

6/15/23, 6:15 PM
@[Neon Demon](/user/show/10023852) Awww. Shucks dude. Thanks for the read. Ehh... Yeah. He really is a character close to my heart. I sure hope he doesn't get too badly messed around in the story...:eyes:
6/15/23, 6:13 AM
You threw me with the term: BEANIE. I've always thought that BEANIE was a kid's cap or a woman's hat. But I see that in some parts of the world, BEANIE is the word that we in the States might call a SKULL CAP or a WATCH CAP.
6/14/23, 9:03 PM
Love to hear more about how they put the baby to sleep. Do they do it with Hypnosis or do they do it with some sleep medication so that the baby sleeps all through the night.
6/14/23, 4:40 PM
This is so much fun!
6/14/23, 4:09 AM
amazing start. I am really intrigued.
6/13/23, 2:34 AM
Really good premise, can't wait to see where you take the story next!
Nov 26, 2021
6/12/23, 6:17 AM
That was a fantastic story, loved their transformation and how in the end their love was stronger. They emerged from the experience a better couple, that's great. I wish there was a sequel.
6/11/23, 9:50 PM
Loving this story! Keep it up!
6/10/23, 9:05 PM
Nice followup, still plan to do the pirate part 3 I suggested? Maybe have the pirates with slight mutations due to their drinking?

6/10/23, 9:29 PM
@[master1](/user/show/534520) I'm taking it in a slightly different direction but I hope you'll enjoy it either way.
Fishboy
6/9/23, 10:18 PM
Would love to bounce some merman story ideas off you. What is the best way to reach out?

6/10/23, 6:11 PM
@Fishboy I guess Twitter? @OneiricNerean I would suggest Discord but I'm not comfortable posting my ID in a public comment section.
6/6/23, 3:29 PM
Wonderful tale of lovers.

6/10/23, 12:33 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) *tail

6/10/23, 4:36 PM
@[astrologus](/user/show/1037572) :)
Anon
6/10/23, 10:54 AM
10/10 a little short but amazing
6/10/23, 7:03 AM
I Love this Story
6/9/23, 11:32 PM
Wonderful!
6/8/23, 12:52 PM
Awesome story! Will there be further adventures of the four of them?

6/8/23, 1:12 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) If inspiration strikes. Haha. I'm totally open to suggestions, too.

6/8/23, 9:15 PM
@[Neiotik](/user/show/925823) How about an orgy as they explore their new bodies, but then pair them off into couples. You could later have a bunch of pirates try to raid the island for a hideout and have the merman slowly seduce the whole crew.

6/9/23, 12:35 PM
@[master1](/user/show/534520) Sounds awesome.

6/9/23, 6:22 PM
@[master1](/user/show/534520) I second that motion 🥰
6/9/23, 4:38 AM
Finally someone that writes merman stories, I love them. But I would love this more if you wrote more about the transformation
Fishboy
6/9/23, 4:22 AM
I am just loving these mermen stories! Please continue.
6/8/23, 9:59 PM
Definitely a good beginning. So! Now that they have both jacked off. Once they are in bed, Derek would probably begin to think of the ways he can face fuck the new roommate into submission. (Just an idea)
Anonymous
6/8/23, 1:56 PM
Love it! Can't wait for more!
6/6/23, 10:30 PM
That is the question: how far can he take it and not have it all implode? And when it does what will be left of any of them? Hopefully he can at least keep Adam and Jake.
6/6/23, 11:56 AM
It seems to took every fetish I have and made the perfect story out of it. Reminds me of my first every erotica, _Seaside Delights_, but gay. Yay! Good work!
6/6/23, 1:18 AM
Oh this was hot. I like the ficking and the growing submission. Here's hoping to maybe some rimming. But yeah I like him producing cum and making them his. The dads becoming his too is hot too.
Flipper
6/5/23, 10:18 PM
This was hot but how do they leave the bed? They don’t have legs any more! Lawks.

6/6/23, 12:20 AM
@Flipper Let's say they phone a friend to help them to some water and then proceed to fuck his brains out? And a pod begins to form. ;)
Anonymous
6/5/23, 11:18 PM
I NEED more of this. One of the hottest stories on here for me. Great writing and premise and i really enjoy the characters as well as their interations, sexy kinky and otherwise