Recent Comments

Flipper
6/5/23, 10:18 PM
This was hot but how do they leave the bed? They don’t have legs any more! Lawks.

6/6/23, 12:20 AM
@Flipper Let's say they phone a friend to help them to some water and then proceed to fuck his brains out? And a pod begins to form. ;)
Anonymous
6/5/23, 11:18 PM
I NEED more of this. One of the hottest stories on here for me. Great writing and premise and i really enjoy the characters as well as their interations, sexy kinky and otherwise
Anonymous
6/5/23, 5:57 PM
Excellent!!
Anonymous
6/5/23, 5:56 PM
Spectacular!!
6/5/23, 3:31 PM
Good first start and you can see the budding bromance to romance forming. I can't wait for more.
6/4/23, 10:56 PM
Pretty good for a first story! I’m looking forward to seeing the rest :)
5/28/23, 6:37 PM
Before I ever read a story the summery reals me in. A good story catching snip bit can really draw people in. So instead of you introducing yourself as a new writer, say something about your story and the characters in it. Your introduction can go right before the story begins inside a few (of these). That way people know it’s not about the story. That’s one way or another way is a line under your introduction to break it from the rest of the story. Here’s an example of one I did something like what I’m saying. https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10006069

6/4/23, 7:29 AM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) Thank you for your feedback. I didnt realize as I was filling out the submission form that what I put there would end up as the intro displayed. I will look into adjusting it.

6/4/23, 10:37 PM
@[Bowtied boy Jason](/user/show/255330) Sure no problem! I believe that you got something here that could get more traffic.
5/31/23, 1:42 PM
I enjoyed would have like a bit more detail in the the clothing and how they were before the transition but I enjoyed none less.

6/4/23, 7:31 AM
@[nerdysuitedbaby](/user/show/164769) Thank you for your feedback. I will make sure to include more details like you mentioned in my upcoming stories.
6/1/23, 4:22 PM
I loved the story but it MUST continue. It is just a start. If not it will be just another good story not a memorable one, And, of course, the two main character have to unite as a team with Kenneth & Thad.

Sebastián Apollo
6/3/23, 10:59 PM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) Thankfully, we still have a little bit left to go. We shall see how it all turns out! :smiley:
6/3/23, 2:00 PM
This was a hot set of sex scenes, and I’m glad Papi got to unload in Thad’s ass after all; Kenneth stealing that cumshot was positively wicked! I also understand why Papi is reconsidering—this situation was incredibly stressful, I’m sure, and no one should have to walk around with a career-destroying secret on their shoulders all the time. I appreciate that he’s seriously thinking about it.

Sebastián Apollo
6/3/23, 10:55 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) As always, thank you for the kind words Soren. It's been a tizzy trying to balance the seriousness of the situation with the sex scenes and lightheartedness of it all, so I'm glad some are enjoying all aspects of the story!