Recent Comments

6/19/23, 12:01 PM
Oops I forgot about them being a pod. Still trying to make human relationships in mermen; silly me.

6/19/23, 1:56 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) It's basically just a polycule with a fancy aquatic name.
6/19/23, 11:40 AM
I wonder if the trio will stay partners and the other two become a couple. I say this because the other mermen are already couples. Such a sweet and yet sensual tale.

6/19/23, 11:52 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Well, they're a pod, so there's no real hierarchy relationship wise and the 5 new guys will bond with the existing members nicely.
6/18/23, 10:37 PM
The merman group grows!

6/19/23, 12:02 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Just have to lose 2 more pesky pairs of legs. ❤️
6/18/23, 9:37 PM
Loved this! Pretty rare to find a good inanimate tf!

6/18/23, 11:17 PM
@[italianstalian1987](/user/show/2658220) Wow! I will take it as a compliment!
Jun 17, 2023
6/18/23, 11:02 AM
Beautiful!! :heart_eyes:

6/18/23, 12:09 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Thank you!
6/13/23, 8:45 PM
This looks like a very interesting premise and I'd like to read more. I am a bit confused why Liam didn't have to pay any price for turning Mason gay or how does he know that becoming a jock will require (what I can only assume) stealing the other jocks' gains. Also I was surprised that Liam wasn't really concerned about the fact that his grandfather is a fucking lamp. Still, I am really excited to read more and see if Liam will be corrupt by his new found powers or if he'll know when to stop before it goes wrong.

6/13/23, 8:50 PM
@Reader All in due time.

6/17/23, 9:20 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) See and I read the "price" for that first one was getting what he wanted but what he wanted not wanting him. Sort of a Genie in the lamp trickster price of needing to be specific in the wording of the wish to make certain you get what you actually want and not just what you asked for.

Anonymous
6/18/23, 10:47 AM
@[zimdog](/user/show/934645) I think that is true, but the label maker said it had enough energy stored to grant one wish. I think it has to ruin lives o improve the users, that is essentially the exchange.
Jun 17, 2023
6/18/23, 4:21 AM
Such a sensitive touching story!!!

6/18/23, 4:45 AM
@[Stroppy Author](/user/show/227812) Thank you! I was literally sobbing as I wrote it.
6/17/23, 7:56 PM
The complexity of the coin/pet relationship is one of my favorite things about this series, aside from the truly exemplary writing and imagination displayed. It's such a caring relationship while also being so deeply strong in power dynamics. And Aristotle's subtle manipulation of Jasper, while problematic in the real world, makes for such good story.

6/18/23, 2:30 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Those dynamics along with the lore of the culture are definitely a huge part of what I love about writing this story with Cuddle-switch, so it's great to hear that that's part of what you're enjoying the most! Actually, Cuddle-switch and I wrote a short roleplaying game based on the Golden Lattice Ceremony -- I'm just working on some illustrations for the layout and it'll be ready to go!
Anonymous
6/12/23, 10:42 PM
The 500+ word intro was written by AI, right? Just wondering... It doesn't seem to have much to do with the actual story.

6/12/23, 10:52 PM
@Anonymous Is there something wrong with setting a scene?

Anonymous
6/12/23, 11:32 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Of course not. It's just, in my opinion, about twice the length it needs to be to accomplish the effect you're going for. It's better for the reader if you can paint the picture more concisely, and trust them to fill in the details with their imagination. You ever hear that saying, "If I had more time, I would have written a shorter letter"? This introduction drags on. And worse, the flowery tone of the introduction doesn't match the rest of the prose. I'm just offering some feedback. You're welcome to ignore it.

6/13/23, 12:12 AM
@Anonymous Naw I appreciate feedback and perhaps I need to rethink the intro.

6/17/23, 9:18 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) See...and I appreciated the intro as a setting for a multi-chapter story. Let the majors their pursuing their changes if they have them. Make the Wide Receiver someone who loves to be fisted---you know, a WIDE RECEIVER. If this was a stand alone perhaps Anon has a point, but hoping this can become a series. Maybe bring grandpa back....who knows. Lots of options.
6/17/23, 7:24 PM
I love the idea and it's really well-written for a first story! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

6/17/23, 7:27 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Thank you!