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6/26/23, 4:46 PM
A great start! I hope they get big solid bellies or roidguts. Huge pecs and/or glutes to balance the bellies would be super. The bigger they get the stronger and tougher they get. Just a few thoughts.

6/26/23, 6:06 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Thanks! Im thinking about describing each ones changes and show some weight variety. Also all the ideas are well received, lets see how they end up 😜
6/26/23, 11:56 AM
Amazing start, I can’t wait for more.

6/26/23, 3:27 PM
@[Marcus](/user/show/454905) Thanks for your support!
6/25/23, 5:38 AM
This is my second time reading this and if anything, it only got hotter on the re-read. I love this universe already and I can't wait to read more in it. I have to admit that, like other readers, it would be really hot to read through Patrick experiencing those changes and being molded, along with some of the aftermath. I'll be looking forward to more stories in this universe!

6/26/23, 3:27 PM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) Thank you so much! Getting better on a reread is a real compliment. I think you'll be very interested in some of the other main stories in this umbrella. I have other upcoming stories that deal with bio printing, AI, artificial reality, and nanotechnology.
6/24/23, 11:20 PM
I definitely want to hear more about what happens to Patrick. You've created a very compelling future world here.

6/26/23, 3:25 PM
@[Gorbant](/user/show/927166) Thank you! I hope you will also enjoy the other stories in the Fracture series as they will all contribute to illustrating my take on this sort of Westworld/blade runner future, just with a very gay twist.
6/24/23, 4:05 PM
This chapter was written really well! I like the combination of real life scenarios (the picture in the locker room) and fantasty scenarios (the ominous transformation) both happening at the same time. I hope the next chapter will come out soon. I'm curious to see how it develops (Plus any story with dirty talk is blessed)

6/26/23, 1:15 AM
@Reader thanks so much i appreciate your comments so much, cant wait for you to read the next chapter!
6/23/23, 9:44 PM
This is really good, can't wait to see where it goes

6/26/23, 1:15 AM
@[BacchusBeef](/user/show/10001250) thanks so much, cant wait for the next chapter to get approved. hope you'll continue my writing.
Oct 30, 2021
Bearmythology
6/25/23, 6:42 PM
You were mentioned in an Instagram reel where I posted Werebears. I instantly searched for you and read this story. I was blown away by the tale and how touching and relatable the characters are. I'm just disappointed that I didn't know about you sooner. This story specifically is grand and epic while simultaneously being low-key and down-to-earth. I love the myth behind the Werebears and how they're introduced. I was expecting horror and was pleased that it wasn't. Completely caught me off-guard. Amazing story, sir, and I'll be reading more.
Anonymous
6/25/23, 4:52 PM
so so hot!!!
6/25/23, 1:19 PM
It's interesting to see that on the one hand Liam is recognizing that the bullies might have a good side and on the other being corrupt enough to completely ignore that in order to "complete his mission" One thing I don't understand is why Liam heart sank at the end of this chapter. Since they weren't a couple, it makes sense that Mason will meet people on Grindr. Liam knew that they are not in a relationship so I don't get why he was surprised by that. I guess I'll just have to wait for the next chapter to see what his next wish will be. P.S. Oh, and there are many things that can be said about Liam losing his years, but it seems like he's getting a very successful life. Becoming a professor at 24 years of age is a big deal.

6/25/23, 4:06 PM
@Reader That's very fair to say, I guess I didn't think an assistant coach was a professor. To me he's just helping out at practice at the moment. The rest is all yet to come, the rest of how it all plays out. You will see.
Anonymous
6/25/23, 2:56 PM
hot hot hot!!!