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6/20/23, 8:07 PM
Wow that was hot!
6/20/23, 3:48 AM
A very interesting transformation. I wonder what the other jocks will become?

6/20/23, 2:28 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Soon.
6/20/23, 2:58 AM
What a hot new chapter. Loved that the dick become an actual dick. ~~(I feel like ive read this specific transformation story, so its either you are the same author, or you got inspired by him. You dont have to answer since this is a contest)~~ Just wondering why did label aged Liam up, since Mason mentioned a big dicked jock. Hmmm, somethings amiss with Dakhoz. Cant wait to read more of it.

6/20/23, 2:28 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Thank you! I don’t believe I pulled from another author for sure. If I did it wasn’t intentional.
Jun 20, 2023
6/20/23, 3:55 AM
Another sweet yet descriptive transformation and sex scene.
6/18/23, 1:36 PM
I continue to be delighted with this and hope you continue this amazing story into the future. I especially loved Julian and Nova's predicament and Julian's conversion to Jewel, and hope for much more on those lines in the future! I don't mean to try to guide the story, just to say what hit best for me here. :)

6/20/23, 3:23 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Thank you! We're both so glad to know you've been enjoying this. We're actually working on the next chapter and have just a few more scenes left to write for it, so definitely more to come, though I can't say how soon! (There are definitely more training scenes in the wings for Nova, who hasn't had hardly any yet, and probably Jewel too!)
6/19/23, 11:40 PM
Great story!
6/19/23, 7:43 PM
In the recent live-action 'Little Mermaid,' there is a scene where Halle Bailey is swimming with a pod of dolphins. The dolphin are paddling and jumping so quickly through the waves, I can only believe that was actually video. Bailey (animated) was swimming along them and moving just as fast. She was depicted as in control and athletic as an Olympic sprinter. It was exquisitely beautiful and totally made the movie for me. I'm liking this series, and hope you will continue it - the good sex, the awkwardness of being a merman on a deck of a ship (a little bit helpless), and the men losing themselves (their self-control, perhaps their old identities?) to their watery passion. Hoping for beards, and swelling muscles as well!

6/19/23, 9:28 PM
@[Rock Creek Werewolf](/user/show/10002145) Thanks! The next chapter will probably be the last for now unless I get inspired. There'll be more other merman stories, though. The mental changes, I think are more a loss of inhibitions as far as sexual affection is concerned. It simply becomes more obvious and natural and the empathic link kind of puts that into overdrive as there's no need or want to hide that.
6/19/23, 6:29 PM
Excellent beginning! It's nice to see facial hair and body hair growth and it not be seen as a punishment or on just older men. Please keep it going. It could be more descriptive in the changes but I always like them detailed. :smiley:
6/19/23, 12:01 PM
Oops I forgot about them being a pod. Still trying to make human relationships in mermen; silly me.

6/19/23, 1:56 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) It's basically just a polycule with a fancy aquatic name.
6/19/23, 11:40 AM
I wonder if the trio will stay partners and the other two become a couple. I say this because the other mermen are already couples. Such a sweet and yet sensual tale.

6/19/23, 11:52 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Well, they're a pod, so there's no real hierarchy relationship wise and the 5 new guys will bond with the existing members nicely.