Recent Comments

7/1/23, 1:09 PM
I really have to agree -- the sex scenes are sweet and so sex-positive, and I really love that. They're also intensely erotic, which I think is an accomplishment. I liked the tie-in to the larger Priapist/Consummation universe world you create elsewhere!
7/1/23, 11:06 AM
That was such an enormous pleasure! THANK YOU
6/22/23, 5:57 PM
I really love mischievous, trickster types, and a short muscular guy is a real turn-on for me, so I love Talley, and I love that he's a dominant vers! He really does say "fuck you" even to such a universe as Consummation, defying his role to do what he loves, while still loving his role as well. Honestly, that's a pretty complex character compared to our usual erotic characters! I do think it's somewhat interesting that for as much as the name of the series is about the Prince, when he features, he's almost always being drug one way or another by his dick! Find some agency, Ariel/Arik!

7/1/23, 1:03 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Yeah, I love writing Talley, he goes so wild with whatever he does and it's hard not to let him take control when he exudes dominance the way he does. Role-wise, it's definitely been tough for Talley to balance both the role thrust on him by his powers and his own dominant preferences. More on that in Top Maker, but it'll show up in different ways here in P&FB as well. I appreciate your insight into Arik—what's happening to him will develop in complexity over the next few chapters, and I'm looking forward to drawing out his dilemma.
6/22/23, 1:40 PM
Even when it's not My Thing, this story is just so fantastic. I feel silly for commenting on every chapter, but you deserve the kudos for being one of the best writers on the site. And "a romp" is the perfect description for this.

7/1/23, 12:47 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) I'm so glad! I hope the homoeroticism did the job even when the rimming didn't, heh. I'm a big fan of keeping things hot the whole time in a subtle way. And I appreciate your comments; they tell me that people are picking up what I'm putting down. I really appreciate the compliment. Yeah, I always thought of it as a "romp"—something that could freely go to so many places and just have fun. I do still need to adhere to character development and story, so much of the "romp" will end up appearing in interludes that are less important to the story, which will come up... sooner or later.
6/30/23, 7:09 PM
Really liking this story. Wonder what other powers or attributes Nate will have.
6/30/23, 4:51 PM
This was so hot! Love learning their relationship! Hopefully we see Matt come into his own and exploring the horny and sexual landscape around him. So good! Keep it up!
6/30/23, 1:45 PM
Your writing is excellent! Great setup!

6/30/23, 2:24 PM
@[Kelly](/user/show/933626) Thank you!!! I published this as a Prologue, next chapters will be steamier 🔥
6/30/23, 4:37 AM
Absolutely sensational read.
6/29/23, 11:07 PM
This was hot!
6/29/23, 9:13 PM
Very hot! Great pov. Nice effects. Loved the top fucking the boy. Too bad he didn't rim him first but the fucking was hot!

6/29/23, 10:29 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Thanks, Heru - glad you liked it. I thought long - and hard - about to rim or not to rim. Ultimately decided to leave it out in case I decided to continue the series. Was originally a one-off I thought up after a Twitter prompt by Charlie Walker on the spiderman theme. And I tweeted the whole story out, too - something I'll never do again. Boy was that a nightmare of cut and paste, lol