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7/1/23, 3:34 PM
HOT Chapter, Supaboi! Def like the new direction of the last 2 chapters.... Can't wait to see what happens next!
6/30/23, 9:50 PM
It took me a very long time to catch up to the more recent stuff, and it was very nice to see the evolution of your style. The story also went in many funny directions. 😍 I do have a problem with your overuse of capital letters, but this seems to have calmed down in recent chapters.

7/1/23, 3:24 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Thanks, Bobby!! Appreciate ALL of your comments!! My overall style continues to be "a work in progress", but hearing comments from you are certainly helpful "to hone in on my shortcomings"... I had been utilizing the capital letters mainly to demonstrate "moments of anger/domination/strength".... but I will keep your comment in mind for future chapters/stories!! Super GR8FUL that you're diggin the storyline & hope you enjoy the next chapter (which is currently in review)!! Happy 4th!:firecracker:
7/1/23, 2:46 PM
Part 2? Please 🙏
7/1/23, 1:09 PM
I really have to agree -- the sex scenes are sweet and so sex-positive, and I really love that. They're also intensely erotic, which I think is an accomplishment. I liked the tie-in to the larger Priapist/Consummation universe world you create elsewhere!
7/1/23, 11:06 AM
That was such an enormous pleasure! THANK YOU
6/22/23, 5:57 PM
I really love mischievous, trickster types, and a short muscular guy is a real turn-on for me, so I love Talley, and I love that he's a dominant vers! He really does say "fuck you" even to such a universe as Consummation, defying his role to do what he loves, while still loving his role as well. Honestly, that's a pretty complex character compared to our usual erotic characters! I do think it's somewhat interesting that for as much as the name of the series is about the Prince, when he features, he's almost always being drug one way or another by his dick! Find some agency, Ariel/Arik!

7/1/23, 1:03 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Yeah, I love writing Talley, he goes so wild with whatever he does and it's hard not to let him take control when he exudes dominance the way he does. Role-wise, it's definitely been tough for Talley to balance both the role thrust on him by his powers and his own dominant preferences. More on that in Top Maker, but it'll show up in different ways here in P&FB as well. I appreciate your insight into Arik—what's happening to him will develop in complexity over the next few chapters, and I'm looking forward to drawing out his dilemma.
6/22/23, 1:40 PM
Even when it's not My Thing, this story is just so fantastic. I feel silly for commenting on every chapter, but you deserve the kudos for being one of the best writers on the site. And "a romp" is the perfect description for this.

7/1/23, 12:47 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) I'm so glad! I hope the homoeroticism did the job even when the rimming didn't, heh. I'm a big fan of keeping things hot the whole time in a subtle way. And I appreciate your comments; they tell me that people are picking up what I'm putting down. I really appreciate the compliment. Yeah, I always thought of it as a "romp"—something that could freely go to so many places and just have fun. I do still need to adhere to character development and story, so much of the "romp" will end up appearing in interludes that are less important to the story, which will come up... sooner or later.
6/30/23, 7:09 PM
Really liking this story. Wonder what other powers or attributes Nate will have.
6/30/23, 4:51 PM
This was so hot! Love learning their relationship! Hopefully we see Matt come into his own and exploring the horny and sexual landscape around him. So good! Keep it up!
6/30/23, 1:45 PM
Your writing is excellent! Great setup!

6/30/23, 2:24 PM
@[Kelly](/user/show/933626) Thank you!!! I published this as a Prologue, next chapters will be steamier 🔥