Recent Comments

7/17/23, 4:45 AM
there isn't actually anything in here about names? adjectives, arguably nicknames, but no _names_. there is nothing about the power of names and no "nominative determinism" going on in this story. maybe that's pedantic criticism, but honestly it seems like you had something already written, slapped a title onto it that relates to the contest tyne but not the story, and uploaded it just for the sake of participating.
6/30/23, 10:25 PM
I don't know that I've read an actual realization moment in this site that was so realistically portrayed (as opposed to forced by transformation or coercion), and it was very sweet. Well done.

7/17/23, 3:35 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Well, this is one of the first fics published on GayCupidStories, so I'm not exactly surprised that this is one of the first realistic 'realisations'—it just wasn't the typical _oeuvre_ of Spiral, I'm sure. But I tried my best, and I'm pleased with how it came out (heh). Although most of my stories involve characters who are already certain that they're gay, I care a lot about the theme of self-discovery, so writing this well was important to me.
6/23/23, 4:59 PM
Wow, that was so incredibly sweet, and yet managed to veer away from saccharine, with the help of an almost literal cum geyser at the end. Delightful, funny, and a sweet love story with differentiated characters. Very well done!

7/17/23, 3:32 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) The fact that it started as a simple "guy goes back in time to get a girl, wakes up with a husband about to top the absolute shit out of him" probably has a bit to do with the wicked turn it takes at the end! But a lot of evolution and many surprises to me went into making it something I could consider beautiful, and not just decadently sexual. I'm glad you found it sweet.
7/16/23, 11:54 PM
Ngl, I would be very happy with a part two.
7/16/23, 8:24 PM
Holy shit. This was PHENOMINAL. More, please!!!
7/16/23, 7:37 PM
Had a reread of this in one go while lounging away in the mountains. What an absolute gem! Thanks again for sharing this world and such wonderful characters with all of us
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7/16/23, 6:57 PM
That is sooo hot!
7/16/23, 5:30 AM
This first chapter was awesome! I started reading it earlier, and it was getting me soooo horny, I had to wait until the night to finish the chapter. And I'm glad I did! This was so sexy, and reading how Reed seduced Topger drove me crazy. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
7/15/23, 6:52 PM
I also support the sequel, if you ever do one
7/15/23, 5:05 PM
Incredibly hot!