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8/2/23, 10:00 PM
I loved the little details and personal touches that made all the same-looking people different. Not my favourite thing in the world but I liked the characters and the happy ending. :kissing_heart:
8/2/23, 7:12 AM
This was very hot, I always love diversity and representation in porn and it was great imagining more than just a typical white guy. The final sex scene felt like it was what I was waiting for, and it was super sexy.
8/1/23, 10:51 PM
I love pecs, so this was a great addition to the story! The only thing that could have made it even better would have been some lactation, but who am I to complain?
7/30/23, 9:52 PM
Oh good LORD, what an ENDING! I’m a sucker for sweet stories about love, and watching Will and Connor confess their feelings is so cute. And yet you did a great job providing a sinister undercurrent: love or not, they’ve still been brainwashed into being into gaining and laziness. Was the love always there, or is it a result of the experiment? Or does it matter? That IS a _riddle_, isn’t it… Also, the scene where all of the guys join together and feast has that similar dichotomy: joy at them being reunited, but also sinister in the fact that they were hypnotized to have totally different personalities. Amazing! In addition to a big fat epilogue, it would be cool to hear a detail that the plan has been working in other countries—a sign that the experiment was a success. Congratulations on your incredible story! :)

8/1/23, 2:31 AM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) Yeees the dubious nature of all relationships was an interesting concept I wanted to tackle, that and the guilt if enabling or interfering in peoples relations. Im happy you liked it 💚
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7/30/23, 6:53 PM
Sorry to see the story end. I always enjoy reading about in-shape straight men becoming fat, over-indulgent gay pigs! But it was a good ending, nonetheless.

8/1/23, 2:29 AM
@slavethruhypno@yahoo.com Thanks for the comments, Im thinking about expanding the story outside of camp but we will see hehe there is always more guys to corrupt
8/1/23, 12:06 AM
Your world-building, even on a small.scale, is great, Cockatrice. The attention to detail you put into everything, and the way you use dialog between characters to talk it out, is always intriguing.
7/31/23, 9:08 PM
This was beautifully written. I loved the showcasing of how seemingly small moments can hit us hard as kids. I remember my dad once telling me that boys didn't button their shirts from the bottom, only girls did. He always had phrases like that. I did it because I'd sometimes get the buttons lopsided if I did it from the top, but it was always making me think of if I was doing things "wrong" as a boy. I told my dad about this decades later and he was baffled at his own comment. We don't even think about this stuff and how it impacts our psyche. But I think you carried that well. In fact, this was so beautifully done for the toxic masculinity part that the romance bits and your usual merging thing kinda felt tacked on -- not because they were bad, they were fine -- but because they didn't much hit with the same flair as the larger theme. Anyway. This wasn't really erotica, but it was amazing to me.
7/31/23, 5:39 PM
> “He’s not a bum!” > “No” Sean confirms. “Quite the opposite." Ok, that got me. I giggled my head off!
7/22/23, 12:34 PM
I've been reading this one since you started. Such a hot and well written story. Thanks for sharing it.

7/22/23, 10:12 PM
@[Anon](/user/show/10001245) Hard to believe it’s been almost two years! Very glad you found it hot.

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7/31/23, 6:03 AM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) It's really one of the hottest father/son long story I've read! I haven't written much in a while but now I'm inspired to write some myself!
7/31/23, 2:20 AM
I LOVE this series. It's so fun, hot, and sexy. I love your writing style and the brainwashing and mind break aspects of the story especially. The almost-too-easy acceptance of something that shouldn't make any sense at all and should shock them from the get go, yet doesn't when Alex explains it like it's nothing, is great. Like, oh, so I just need to swallow your cum and get creampied by you to get protein? Sure, don't see anything wrong with that! And the fact that all these straight dudues are seeing this through their heterosexual lenses, deluding themselves (or actually truly believing) that none of this is gay and it's just to score some brotein, is such a turn on. Seeing the Coach, the boys, and the hot married dads (another major kink of mine) slowly being mind broken and corrupted by their craving for brotein is so hot and up my alley. I can't wait for the next chapter!