Recent Comments

8/4/23, 6:39 AM
Yay you're back!! A hot chapter for a hot story in a hot dimension! I can't believe we finally found out what is this war they are all preparing for! Sounds like a battle I would love to take part in. Then again, I might be too busy falling into the water, clumsy me. It's very interesting to see the interaction between those three (even though Talley can be a douche sometimes). I wonder what will happen when Marco meets Nate's new friends. I can't decide if I should gamble on Marco being jealous or not. Can't wait for the next chapter!

8/5/23, 7:55 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) Heh, seems I've been edging the readers on frat warfare all this time, but the secret was going to come out eventually! In future revisions of the story I might make it clearer earlier on--maybe even in the first chapter. We'll see. I also really appreciate how excited you are about this story; that kind of thing helps give me motivation to keep going when the writing gets tough. Talley can be a douche, but (at least for him) it's all in good fun, and Nate seems to think it's part of the 'bro code', even if Arik disagrees. I hope you enjoyed the interactions!
7/18/23, 10:59 PM
As always, another wonderful chapter, Soren. And it's great to see months of preparation, planning, and writing come to fruition! The interactions between Talley and Nate were the highlight of the chapter for me, personally, and I can't wait to see how more outrageous the two boys will get in their efforts to prove their manhood to the other. And your refs, as usual, are all mouthwatering! You have _very_ good taste! Keep up the great work!

8/5/23, 7:49 PM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Two bottom-coded frat boys with a chip on their shoulder? Who knows what shenanigans they'll get up to... I'm really glad you enjoyed it; it took me long enough to finally get it out, but I'm glad I did!
7/24/23, 1:49 AM
This really hits my buttons and the writing is very good. I'd just say don't try to ram the descriptions in so hard at the start. It's jarring and the reader knows you're trying to get the descriptive stuff in too much, but you can tell later on you're way better at slipping the details in then. I think it's a lot more natural for you to take your time on the descriptive bits than try to push too much in right up front, and you've got the writing talent to do that for sure!

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8/5/23, 4:50 PM
@[edhypnofan](/user/show/10002490) Yeah, sorry. Was my first time writing a TF story, and I was a bit rushing to not hit deadline, could not make the description smoother. But I felt it was needed to get a bit of an idea of what everyone looked like early on. Thanks!
7/19/23, 10:34 AM
I love this world so much. The character mean a lot to me and their interactions feel so real and natural. The relationships are important so knowing that Jasper has to keep a secret and deceive Rhys is painful. Nova. Oh dear. If you're going to accept being converted into a pet, that mind-blowing sex training is probably a good trade for paying that price. That was a great scene. My favourites of this chapter are the attitude and personality planning with Nova and his rehabilitation person/trainer. As always, I can't wait for more.

8/5/23, 2:41 AM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Cuddle-switch says: "Evan! Our more most consistent and frequent commenter -- and always such great and in-depth comments! We're loving the interactions as well. That's definitely my favourite part. The mind-melting sex kinda had me giggling as I wrote it. That was fun." You know how much it means to me to hear your thoughts and have your encouragement! <3 Thank you for being one of our most constant readers and supporters. <3 <3 <3
7/17/23, 1:07 PM
Fives everywhere. Wish I could give more. What an amazing series.

8/5/23, 2:39 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Cuddle-switch says: "Thank you so much -- it really makes me feel good to see positive numbers on my first series that I've ever written." I also really appreciate you encouraging us and taking the time to share your thoughts! Thank you!
7/17/23, 1:06 PM
Still very hot!!! Nova, nooooooooooo, don't be fooled by the hot sex and the brainwashing, think of your friends! I guess next chapter will have Jewel's side of things. Oh boy, that auction seems like the next big event in the story.😰 Hyped!

8/5/23, 2:38 AM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) You're right on the money with what's coming down the line for the auction! We have to make Nova and the others suffer sexily as much as possible before we give them a happily ever after ending, right? Right? Thank you so much for your encouraging comment! It's great to hear what you're thinking! Cuddle-switch agrees and says that you still aren't as hyped as he is! :P
8/3/23, 11:07 PM
This was fantastic. Really loved the well developed characters, the humor, and sex was filthy and hot. I’m so into Chase and Oliver, I would love to read more of them. Good job!

8/5/23, 1:23 AM
@[Charlie Walker](/user/show/1052782) Ah, Charlie! Thank you so much for the kind words! I'm glad you took a liking to Chase and Oliver! And who knows what lies next for the Stallions of St. Sebastian's University? :shushing_face:
8/4/23, 1:22 PM
oh wow! Please keep the brainwashing elements alive. I am hoping that FRED finds a little addiction. I am INTO him. THANKYOU. Your writing is fantastic.
Anonymous
8/3/23, 12:36 PM
this story keeps building and building… so hot… so well written!!!
8/2/23, 4:25 AM
What a hit! Super hot. My phone autocorrected that to super big, and y'know what, that too!

8/2/23, 10:52 PM
@[Ganymede and Co.](/user/show/956270) Well you know what they say, “Go big or go home!”, and I certainly like 'em big! 😜 Glad you enjoyed!