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8/13/23, 8:35 PM
Super interesting plot :smiley: Even when I have already read your other story with people who are also literal dicks, this felt fresh, original, and with a personality of its own. I found it paradoxical that John's the nice one and Colton's the actual figurative dick. I don't know how much of that was on purpose but either way I must congratulate you for it. I was surprised by the sudden shift in Colton's way to confront the situation. I am assuming the messy and meaningless date night he had spent might have made him reconsider his point of or his lifestyle. In any case, I guess that's something I'll understand better after reading chapter 2. I have some other thoughts I'd like to share but I think I'll wait until I finish the whole story ;)
Jake
8/10/23, 9:14 AM
I’m in love with this series. Can’t wait for the next part!
8/10/23, 1:52 AM
I really hope you will continue the story soon :) really like it
8/6/23, 2:07 PM
Wow. This was an incredibly first chapter. What an interesting idea. Love the romantic aspect from Clay while also the power dynamic and uncovering just what this frat is about and getting his cock locked away. Sweet and also hot and sexy. Eager to see more.

8/8/23, 3:42 AM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Thank you!
8/6/23, 11:57 AM
Love frat rats! This group is extra special

8/8/23, 3:41 AM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) Thank you sm!
Martin
8/6/23, 6:34 AM
That was so amazingly hot and powerful! I was just reading this because I wanted to approve it, and I wasn't prepared to get that hard and leaking... Not at an appropriate time for me. I almost feel like Luke and I wish I'd be in his place. Can't wait to read more about his journey!

8/8/23, 3:41 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Wow thanks!
7/31/23, 5:04 AM
Going through your catalog right now, really enjoying myself. Loved loved loved (!!!) Greek; I think it's always so interesting to see what authors do with women in gay erotica, especially fantasy/magic erotica. Also thankful that at least someone will be reigning in Lewis in the coming magical harem. fantastic work, thanks for sharing!

7/31/23, 1:35 PM
@[whatknife](/user/show/10003454) @[bluesuedewho](/user/show/1225367) Now I kinda want an ending where Greek, as the one who has both a working brain and the ability to remember how things where even after they change will rule them all.

8/6/23, 8:15 PM
@[whatknife](/user/show/10003454) Thanks! I wanted to do something with a character who could comment on the mind-control/magic stuff without being part of the erotic action. A sort of Greek chorus, if you will :wink:. Some of my favorite long-format erotica stories have women in roles other than 'jilted lover who curses a horrible straight guy with gayness' or similar tropes I see pop up a lot.

8/6/23, 8:16 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) Oh, I have something much more unusual planned for Greek and the boys :smiling_imp:.

8/7/23, 1:12 PM
@[bluesuedewho](/user/show/1225367) Is there a Greek version to "color me curious"?
8/7/23, 4:33 AM
That’s a really great story. Love rubber and chastity! So hot.
8/6/23, 10:00 PM
It was a very happy ending!
littledickslave@yahoo.com
8/6/23, 4:12 PM
Great series of stories. The last was, to me, the best. It was so hot reading about each getting a blow job while scarfing as much food as they could. Obviously, their appetite for food and their appetite for sex overlap and feed on each other. So damned hot to seem them connected.
8/4/23, 6:39 AM
Yay you're back!! A hot chapter for a hot story in a hot dimension! I can't believe we finally found out what is this war they are all preparing for! Sounds like a battle I would love to take part in. Then again, I might be too busy falling into the water, clumsy me. It's very interesting to see the interaction between those three (even though Talley can be a douche sometimes). I wonder what will happen when Marco meets Nate's new friends. I can't decide if I should gamble on Marco being jealous or not. Can't wait for the next chapter!

8/5/23, 7:55 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) Heh, seems I've been edging the readers on frat warfare all this time, but the secret was going to come out eventually! In future revisions of the story I might make it clearer earlier on--maybe even in the first chapter. We'll see. I also really appreciate how excited you are about this story; that kind of thing helps give me motivation to keep going when the writing gets tough. Talley can be a douche, but (at least for him) it's all in good fun, and Nate seems to think it's part of the 'bro code', even if Arik disagrees. I hope you enjoyed the interactions!
7/18/23, 10:59 PM
As always, another wonderful chapter, Soren. And it's great to see months of preparation, planning, and writing come to fruition! The interactions between Talley and Nate were the highlight of the chapter for me, personally, and I can't wait to see how more outrageous the two boys will get in their efforts to prove their manhood to the other. And your refs, as usual, are all mouthwatering! You have _very_ good taste! Keep up the great work!

8/5/23, 7:49 PM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Two bottom-coded frat boys with a chip on their shoulder? Who knows what shenanigans they'll get up to... I'm really glad you enjoyed it; it took me long enough to finally get it out, but I'm glad I did!
7/24/23, 1:49 AM
This really hits my buttons and the writing is very good. I'd just say don't try to ram the descriptions in so hard at the start. It's jarring and the reader knows you're trying to get the descriptive stuff in too much, but you can tell later on you're way better at slipping the details in then. I think it's a lot more natural for you to take your time on the descriptive bits than try to push too much in right up front, and you've got the writing talent to do that for sure!

Author (name hidden)
8/5/23, 4:50 PM
@[edhypnofan](/user/show/10002490) Yeah, sorry. Was my first time writing a TF story, and I was a bit rushing to not hit deadline, could not make the description smoother. But I felt it was needed to get a bit of an idea of what everyone looked like early on. Thanks!
7/19/23, 10:34 AM
I love this world so much. The character mean a lot to me and their interactions feel so real and natural. The relationships are important so knowing that Jasper has to keep a secret and deceive Rhys is painful. Nova. Oh dear. If you're going to accept being converted into a pet, that mind-blowing sex training is probably a good trade for paying that price. That was a great scene. My favourites of this chapter are the attitude and personality planning with Nova and his rehabilitation person/trainer. As always, I can't wait for more.

8/5/23, 2:41 AM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Cuddle-switch says: "Evan! Our more most consistent and frequent commenter -- and always such great and in-depth comments! We're loving the interactions as well. That's definitely my favourite part. The mind-melting sex kinda had me giggling as I wrote it. That was fun." You know how much it means to me to hear your thoughts and have your encouragement! <3 Thank you for being one of our most constant readers and supporters. <3 <3 <3
7/17/23, 1:07 PM
Fives everywhere. Wish I could give more. What an amazing series.

8/5/23, 2:39 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Cuddle-switch says: "Thank you so much -- it really makes me feel good to see positive numbers on my first series that I've ever written." I also really appreciate you encouraging us and taking the time to share your thoughts! Thank you!
7/17/23, 1:06 PM
Still very hot!!! Nova, nooooooooooo, don't be fooled by the hot sex and the brainwashing, think of your friends! I guess next chapter will have Jewel's side of things. Oh boy, that auction seems like the next big event in the story.😰 Hyped!

8/5/23, 2:38 AM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) You're right on the money with what's coming down the line for the auction! We have to make Nova and the others suffer sexily as much as possible before we give them a happily ever after ending, right? Right? Thank you so much for your encouraging comment! It's great to hear what you're thinking! Cuddle-switch agrees and says that you still aren't as hyped as he is! :P
8/3/23, 11:07 PM
This was fantastic. Really loved the well developed characters, the humor, and sex was filthy and hot. I’m so into Chase and Oliver, I would love to read more of them. Good job!

8/5/23, 1:23 AM
@[Charlie Walker](/user/show/1052782) Ah, Charlie! Thank you so much for the kind words! I'm glad you took a liking to Chase and Oliver! And who knows what lies next for the Stallions of St. Sebastian's University? :shushing_face:
8/4/23, 1:22 PM
oh wow! Please keep the brainwashing elements alive. I am hoping that FRED finds a little addiction. I am INTO him. THANKYOU. Your writing is fantastic.
Anonymous
8/3/23, 12:36 PM
this story keeps building and building… so hot… so well written!!!
8/2/23, 4:25 AM
What a hit! Super hot. My phone autocorrected that to super big, and y'know what, that too!

8/2/23, 10:52 PM
@[Ganymede and Co.](/user/show/956270) Well you know what they say, “Go big or go home!”, and I certainly like 'em big! 😜 Glad you enjoyed!
8/2/23, 10:00 PM
I loved the little details and personal touches that made all the same-looking people different. Not my favourite thing in the world but I liked the characters and the happy ending. :kissing_heart:
8/2/23, 7:12 AM
This was very hot, I always love diversity and representation in porn and it was great imagining more than just a typical white guy. The final sex scene felt like it was what I was waiting for, and it was super sexy.
8/1/23, 10:51 PM
I love pecs, so this was a great addition to the story! The only thing that could have made it even better would have been some lactation, but who am I to complain?
7/30/23, 9:52 PM
Oh good LORD, what an ENDING! I’m a sucker for sweet stories about love, and watching Will and Connor confess their feelings is so cute. And yet you did a great job providing a sinister undercurrent: love or not, they’ve still been brainwashed into being into gaining and laziness. Was the love always there, or is it a result of the experiment? Or does it matter? That IS a _riddle_, isn’t it… Also, the scene where all of the guys join together and feast has that similar dichotomy: joy at them being reunited, but also sinister in the fact that they were hypnotized to have totally different personalities. Amazing! In addition to a big fat epilogue, it would be cool to hear a detail that the plan has been working in other countries—a sign that the experiment was a success. Congratulations on your incredible story! :)

8/1/23, 2:31 AM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) Yeees the dubious nature of all relationships was an interesting concept I wanted to tackle, that and the guilt if enabling or interfering in peoples relations. Im happy you liked it 💚
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
7/30/23, 6:53 PM
Sorry to see the story end. I always enjoy reading about in-shape straight men becoming fat, over-indulgent gay pigs! But it was a good ending, nonetheless.

8/1/23, 2:29 AM
@slavethruhypno@yahoo.com Thanks for the comments, Im thinking about expanding the story outside of camp but we will see hehe there is always more guys to corrupt
8/1/23, 12:06 AM
Your world-building, even on a small.scale, is great, Cockatrice. The attention to detail you put into everything, and the way you use dialog between characters to talk it out, is always intriguing.
7/31/23, 9:08 PM
This was beautifully written. I loved the showcasing of how seemingly small moments can hit us hard as kids. I remember my dad once telling me that boys didn't button their shirts from the bottom, only girls did. He always had phrases like that. I did it because I'd sometimes get the buttons lopsided if I did it from the top, but it was always making me think of if I was doing things "wrong" as a boy. I told my dad about this decades later and he was baffled at his own comment. We don't even think about this stuff and how it impacts our psyche. But I think you carried that well. In fact, this was so beautifully done for the toxic masculinity part that the romance bits and your usual merging thing kinda felt tacked on -- not because they were bad, they were fine -- but because they didn't much hit with the same flair as the larger theme. Anyway. This wasn't really erotica, but it was amazing to me.
7/31/23, 5:39 PM
> “He’s not a bum!” > “No” Sean confirms. “Quite the opposite." Ok, that got me. I giggled my head off!
7/22/23, 12:34 PM
I've been reading this one since you started. Such a hot and well written story. Thanks for sharing it.

7/22/23, 10:12 PM
@[Anon](/user/show/10001245) Hard to believe it’s been almost two years! Very glad you found it hot.

Anonymous
7/31/23, 6:03 AM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) It's really one of the hottest father/son long story I've read! I haven't written much in a while but now I'm inspired to write some myself!
7/31/23, 2:20 AM
I LOVE this series. It's so fun, hot, and sexy. I love your writing style and the brainwashing and mind break aspects of the story especially. The almost-too-easy acceptance of something that shouldn't make any sense at all and should shock them from the get go, yet doesn't when Alex explains it like it's nothing, is great. Like, oh, so I just need to swallow your cum and get creampied by you to get protein? Sure, don't see anything wrong with that! And the fact that all these straight dudues are seeing this through their heterosexual lenses, deluding themselves (or actually truly believing) that none of this is gay and it's just to score some brotein, is such a turn on. Seeing the Coach, the boys, and the hot married dads (another major kink of mine) slowly being mind broken and corrupted by their craving for brotein is so hot and up my alley. I can't wait for the next chapter!