Recent Comments

8/20/23, 6:38 AM
This one is a classic. So glad to see you posting here.
8/20/23, 6:03 AM
An amazing story! Loved every word.
8/18/23, 7:23 PM
In the earlier comment it sounded like future chapters would be forthcoming. Is that still the plan? This was one of my favorite recent stories and I hope this is not where it comes to an end.
8/17/23, 6:59 PM
I'm so glad I read this, and so glad you posted it here. Sure, it was erotic as hell in many places, but it also conveyed love and emotion in a way that few manage, in erotica or anywhere else. You should be proud of this. Thank you. :heart_eyes:

CasualWanderer82
8/18/23, 1:50 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Thank you for the beautifully encouraging words. They mean a lot.
8/18/23, 11:02 AM
You are definitely not alone in loving the dumb jock kink, man! The only problem is, you've pretty much created the platonic ideal of it!
8/18/23, 10:29 AM
Fascinating :heart: In the end it all seems to fall into place. John has his life as a human, and Colton can live carefree as a dick. Funny how he really acted like the pejorative version of that term before becoming one. I felt a bit sad for Colton, though. Maybe he'll be happier being a sexual organ but as someone who's lived for decades as a human it would be odd if he didn't miss that part of him after a while. Also, It almost felt like he was giving up his life, defeated by all of his internal demons. I wonder if even before the detachment there was a part of him telling him he was a terrible person. He showed lots of narcisist traits, though, so maybe he only realized how bad he was after seeing in John the person he could have been. I also wonder how it must have felt like making out with someone that looked exactly like him. Yet again, the lack of reluctance fits the narcisist mold. Dexter's so cute and an incredibly good person. I fell in love with his patience and understanding. Him reaching his mother for advice was specially wholesome. He must also have a very strong mind since making out with someone who's slowly transforming a dick should be a life-scarring experience :P And I wonder how John will continue from then on. I hope he keeps all the traits that make him such a good guy. I like this "What if..." plot triggers you work with. Very creative. And not only that, but you manage to close all the open issues seemlessly, no matter how bizarre, while dealing with all the emotions and conflicts derived from them. Kudos on an excellent work :)
8/17/23, 5:22 PM
It continues to be a beautiful story, and yes, that's a good thing.
8/17/23, 2:40 PM
Maybe it isn't tailored for the genre, but man. I'm so glad I can read it here. It's beautiful. But yes, I grew up during the AIDS crisis, so it's very very hard to read about it these days. Especially since so many shows like Pose center around it.

CasualWanderer82
8/17/23, 3:31 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Thank you for your comment. I wouldn't say themes like these aren't tailored to the genre. But I have realized my work isn't tailored for the general audience of these sites. I was happy to share, regardless.

Martin
8/17/23, 3:37 PM
@[CasualWanderer82](/user/show/10035964) I would like to disagree. Your stories are standing out, but in a positive way. I want to broaden the scope, away from pure mind control fiction to general erotic stories, and what you’ve written is simply spectacular. Both regarding the stories themselves as well es the erotic parts.

CasualWanderer82
8/17/23, 3:45 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thank you 😊
8/17/23, 3:39 PM
100% agree that this has a home here. Plenty of people write some stuff that is very niche on these sites. Not even sure there is a specific "general audience" to be had here. But you have me as one of your happy audience:-)

CasualWanderer82
8/17/23, 3:44 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) It warms my heart to know that 💓 Thank you.
8/16/23, 1:02 PM
i read it again... This was just fantastic!