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12/15/21, 1:01 AM
I love a slow burn ...

12/15/21, 2:22 AM
Me, too. I guess I'm a little disappointed there isn't any actual hypnosis, since it's tagged - but maybe it doesn't have to be verbal to count. This is hot, regardless! A slow, gradual seduction without any mind tricks might even be hotter in some ways. I think you mean Bluto, not Brutus. It's been a while for me, too. I like the image. 🙂 Edit: just read the comments on the first chapter, lol. I guess I'm that guy... but I'm not really complaining!

12/15/21, 2:29 AM
@meatheadosis Keep in mind, it *is* a slow burn. There may very well be hypnosis coming in a later chapter.

12/15/21, 3:55 AM
@amul At this point, I'm fine with it either way. I love seduction stories! I don't know if I've ever even seen one in real life that went from a "no" to an enthusiastic "yes" (seen guys get less picky as it gets later/drunker, but that's *not* what I mean by a seduction).

12/15/21, 8:07 PM
@meatheadosis there was a Bluto, and a Brutus in the Popeye cartoons. Glad you're enjoying the story. Next time I'll have giant space lasers hypnotize him in the first chapter :)
12/15/21, 7:56 PM
It's definitely becoming steamy. This is so casual and yet so hot.
12/15/21, 7:43 AM
I would really like to see the rugby team who knocked him up become father's to the boy growing inside the daddy. And as Dace suggested maybe the little boy needs a brother.
12/15/21, 7:30 AM
I love a good slow-burn story and this is a great one!
Coyote
12/15/21, 4:50 AM
this story seems to have a good flow so far. I'm looking forward to reading the rest
12/15/21, 2:30 AM
The slow hypno massaging elements of this chapter are so hot. Great story.
12/15/21, 1:11 AM
I enjoyed this one quite a bit. My only real exposure to the mpreg kink has been through a single bdsmlr account but I always thought it was intriguing and kinda hot.
12/14/21, 1:23 PM
Hawt. The idea that he can't really know the father because of the, uh, orgy makes it even hotter; way to go dude!

12/14/21, 10:37 PM
@Dace I would hope that all the possible fathers would gather together to support the man and his baby.

12/14/21, 10:41 PM
@Cutlerfan Chapter 2: the rugby team takes turns holding the baby so their teammates can fuck a brother into its dad?
12/14/21, 10:35 PM
Great Story!
12/14/21, 8:43 PM
I want to read this later. Not many mpreg stories.
12/14/21, 12:05 PM
Oh I bet I can guess who these tags were suggested by! Can't wait to read this one after work today.
Nov 26, 2021
12/13/21, 5:17 PM
I'm glad you included the happy ending tag - otherwise I'd have tapped out on this one and missed the great resolution. The middle of the story was rough to get through because the stakes were so high with a child being in the picture.
12/13/21, 10:00 AM
Great start! Looking forward to more!
12/13/21, 12:29 AM
This was a beautifully written, understated story. You might get a complaint "where's the mind control?", which you should ignore, in my opinion. Seduction and manipulation are "mind control" enough for some stories. Not everything has to be orbital mind control lasers.

12/13/21, 5:01 AM
@amul thanks! Actually the orbital mind control lasers are in the next chapter :)
12/13/21, 1:01 AM
Interesting story. Nice start. I like the slow and steady approach with a clear cut element of something is going on. So yeah sexy.
12/13/21, 12:56 AM
Nicely written.
Anonymous
12/13/21, 12:36 AM
I love this! Such a hot study, I can't wait to see what Sam does to Bill next.
12/12/21, 8:58 PM
thx for posting!! great as fuck.. inspiration and more. great description of transformation
12/12/21, 7:32 AM
Really great story. I would have preferred some of the transformation to have been subtler, not having the barber telegraph every change explicitly, and perhaps skipping the piss and rubber shirt. I would also have made the barber a bit more professional, skipping the shoe and hookup at the end, and instead have him kicked out still in a state of shock. As he is walking home he is struggling with conflicting emotions being horrified he is at his changes, in disbelief it even was possible and happened, despair about how to revert it, and incredibly turned on by it all. Then he meets the scally group again on his way back and finds them irresistable. I always find it interesting to read different people describe changes for a stereotype, like the shape of the head, the neck, the tattoos. Always an inspiration when you try to describe something yourself.
12/10/21, 3:01 PM
Oh my god, I had so much fun with this! It was hot the whole way through and you kept up the erotic tempo well while also leaving me curious about what was actually going on. And the *cum inflation,* damn, you hit so many of my buttons with it, especially with the force of Courage’s cumshots. I’m loving this idea of cozy-but-hard kinks. And I’m loving the dynamic of a Courage who’s oblivious to what’s going on (maybe?) while Dr. Darkness knows everything, and Courage still can’t tell—it’s so cute and mind-bending. Looking forward to more!

12/11/21, 9:55 PM
Thanks! I'm glad the balance of wholesome and kinky hit home. Certainly never something I expected to be writing on GSS. @Soren Fitz

12/11/21, 10:41 PM
I’m stating a revolution of wholesomeness! Thanks for joining me with this story, haha. @bluesuedewho
Anonymous
12/11/21, 3:49 PM
I can't tell you how much I loved this story, I read it 3 times. Thank you so much for it, and we all hope to read more :)

12/11/21, 10:04 PM
Thanks! I have a couple other stories that will probably get updated first, but there's definitely enough interest for me to continue this one at some point! @
Anonymous
12/11/21, 5:07 AM
This is awesome! Stereotypical comic stuff, reality changes, mind-meltingly hot sex, and wonderful amounts of wholesome fluff and romance?!! It's everything I love at once!!! MORE!!!

12/11/21, 10:04 PM
Thanks! It's not the kind of thing I ever expected to write, so I'm glad people are enjoying it! @
12/11/21, 3:15 AM
I lost it at “Snugglebutt says what?” This was amusing and sexy.

12/11/21, 10:02 PM
Thanks! @Heru Kane
12/11/21, 12:38 AM
This is very cute and very fun.

12/11/21, 10:02 PM
Thanks! @Cadek
12/10/21, 6:44 PM
I am a sucker for clever wordplay and banter, and the first bit where Dr. Darkness wakes up in his new reality hit those buttons so well! This is really just a lovely story with hot sex and reality changes gone wrong. I like how this story has similarities to your other work, but feels completely different. I'm also very impressed at just how much writing you do. Impressed and envious. I hope there is a continuation to this story. I want to learn how Dr. Darkness screwed up and got to this reality. And I really want more genuine romantic, yet steamy, sex between Courage and Darkness.

12/11/21, 10:01 PM
Thanks! I had fun writing the dialogue for this one. I think the main thing tying my stories together is a "sexy disaster" element -- plans going gloriously wrong. Unlike other WIPs, I just have very rough notes on this one instead of drafts. I wanted to see if there was an interest in a story like this before I spent a lot of time writing it. @Proteus
12/11/21, 8:43 PM
Absolutely fantastic. Incredibly hot and sexy, with a fantastic balance of denial and release. I was really excited when you told me about this one, and it lived up to my expectations!!!

12/11/21, 8:52 PM
That's exactly what I was going for; I've never done this before, so I was worried it would get repetitive or something boner-killing like that. I'm glad I was able to write it in a way that kept up the tension without losing interest! @Razz TFs
12/10/21, 3:50 AM
Wow, this chapter was very, very hot! Nicely done -- great tension and anticipation!

12/10/21, 3:11 PM
Thanks! I’m glad I was able to get the right erotic atmosphere across. I’m hoping to continue to improve in those areas. @time.to.occur

12/11/21, 12:41 PM
@Soren Fitz well it got me nice and hard, so well done!

12/11/21, 3:29 PM
Hell yeah! That's always good to hear. @Dace
Anonymous
12/11/21, 12:54 AM
Need Dr. Darkness to get knocked up for real
12/7/21, 10:58 PM
With those tags I didn't expect to enjoy this as much as I did. And I loved the twist at the end. I also enjoyed having to write to tags I wouldn't normally. It allowed me to explore new areas through my writing. Awesome job man, and you were much closer to the word limit suggestion.

12/7/21, 11:02 PM
@Lusty Stallion It's such a fun challenge, isn't it! I never would have written this without being assigned the tags. I wonder if anyone will be under the word count? 😂

12/10/21, 4:21 PM
@Norismo That is a very good question that I would love to see the answer to!
12/10/21, 3:40 AM
I loved seeing more of Talley and Ariel here! I also appreciate all the redhead representation in your stories. They're underrepresented in erotica, I think! I really like the sound of those two WIPs too...

12/10/21, 3:09 PM
I absolutely adore redheads, so this is definitely par for the course for me! I almost didn’t have a redhead protagonist for this story until I came up with Talley. Looking forward to putting both WIPs out… eventually! I’m so busy, haha, but I’m working away. @bluesuedewho