Recent Comments

12/15/24, 7:25 PM
excellent (depressing) set up. Well done. Well written and well paced! .. Gonna go take a Prozac now and wait for the next chapter
12/15/24, 3:55 PM
Another great chapter! I really want someone to do art of the Heck Pups now. I really appreciate that you constantly keep this setting fresh by continuing to introduce us to the characters Seb and Te'Lor transform and putting us in the most interesting possible positions to view the changes they're wreaking. I don't know if you attempt the chapters from various perspectives until you find the one that works or if knowing the best perspective for a story is a special skill of yours, but it's definitely working!
12/15/24, 2:42 PM
Wow man, such a great writer. Not only a hot story, but also well told. Can't wait for your next story. The only thing is the narrative with I and you. It is a bit confusing. Who? Me? Next time consider to use third person (Not sure if this is proper English, sorry, non native speaker)
12/15/24, 2:07 AM
Fantastic chapter. And you know what’s on loop in my head? “… like a virgin, touched for the very first time…” ❤️
12/15/24, 1:48 AM
This was a great story! Perfect for the holidays. I’m looking forward to reading your other writing.
12/14/24, 4:04 PM
Fantastic chapter! I loved every bit of it, but my favorite part was the Madinna reference. I look forward to the continuation!
12/14/24, 11:40 AM
Again, I love it. Always something new and refreshing.
12/13/24, 10:00 PM
Holy shit. Well, new kink/desire unlocked. I need to be treated like one of these Heck Pups. How do I join the harem?!

12/14/24, 11:40 AM
@[wbmttt](/user/show/911981) Haha, I need one of those pups, where do I sign?
Anonymous
12/14/24, 5:39 AM
God damn this story was fucked up. You have a sick mind

12/14/24, 6:08 AM
@Anonymous Why thank you kindly 😈 I was going for sexy, romantic and morally ambiguous but I’ll take sick. 🤭
12/14/24, 12:48 AM
This has been one of the best stories I’ve read ever. I’m really happy with the characters and the way you have developed them. This story line is so detailed and i feel like you’ve done a great job of keeping everything in order. I can’t wait to read what you have next and can’t wait for their happy ending!

12/14/24, 12:51 AM
@[Real deal](/user/show/918329) Oh thank you. Yes in the next part we're going to finally meet the Mysterious Dad, so I had to figure out a few things first. In the meantime, if you haven't read it, you might want to check out _Fracture: Physical_.