Recent Comments

12/16/24, 6:42 AM
Really good work. Thanks for sharing this.
Rad P
12/16/24, 1:08 AM
I loved this chapter the best! I liked the reprogramming aspect of Roger’s nanobots better and the lack of moral restraints, which makes his story more carefree and enjoyable to read. I hope he continues his reign of power
12/15/24, 11:29 PM
Really hot stuff. I love boundary violation that gets right up to the point of making me uncomfortable, and the back-and-forth in the protagonist's head is super hot too. Well done!
Leo
12/15/24, 9:59 PM
Please please make a chapter where the dad falls under hypnosis!! There’s nothing hotter than a sexy, obedient daddy!
Art
12/15/24, 6:25 PM
Maybe the dad will be involved next since he is so easily hypnotised

12/15/24, 9:17 PM
@[Art](/user/show/1014223) God, I hope so.
12/15/24, 7:25 PM
excellent (depressing) set up. Well done. Well written and well paced! .. Gonna go take a Prozac now and wait for the next chapter
12/15/24, 3:55 PM
Another great chapter! I really want someone to do art of the Heck Pups now. I really appreciate that you constantly keep this setting fresh by continuing to introduce us to the characters Seb and Te'Lor transform and putting us in the most interesting possible positions to view the changes they're wreaking. I don't know if you attempt the chapters from various perspectives until you find the one that works or if knowing the best perspective for a story is a special skill of yours, but it's definitely working!
12/15/24, 2:42 PM
Wow man, such a great writer. Not only a hot story, but also well told. Can't wait for your next story. The only thing is the narrative with I and you. It is a bit confusing. Who? Me? Next time consider to use third person (Not sure if this is proper English, sorry, non native speaker)
12/15/24, 2:07 AM
Fantastic chapter. And you know what’s on loop in my head? “… like a virgin, touched for the very first time…” ❤️
12/15/24, 1:48 AM
This was a great story! Perfect for the holidays. I’m looking forward to reading your other writing.