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Anonymous
2/2/26, 6:17 PM
This was so hot and funny
Anon
2/1/26, 4:17 AM
ya gotta direct the AI better, dude. i work with it a lot and i can tell it's starting to fall apart. some directions that help: don't use sentence fragments, don't use similes (AI is notoriously bad at them), focus on descriptions, don't use the word 'deliberate' (this one i've noticed pops up a lot in AI work for some reason, especially nsfw stuff). also be sure you're describing exactly what you want to happen in a story when you command the AI: "write 500 words about Liam and Noah working out at the gym. Noah mentions his cousin will be joining them at a party later that week and Liam is nervous. Noah convinces him by guilt tripping and hazing him, reminding him to 'be cool' and 'not be weird about it'." AI will follow a blueprint fairly accurately and expand on stuff you feel you can't (though human writing is superior). anyway your idea is still really solid. its taking a long time to get to the romance, if that's the intended outcome, and a long time to step forward in the sexy department. Feels like sometimes you repeat chapters just with a different flavor. i really liked the wind up in the earlier chapters and these middle ones have kind of stagnated and circled around each other a lot. Might be the AI's fault, at least partially.

2/1/26, 5:05 PM
@Anon at that point, why not just actually write the damn thing yourself?

twistup
2/2/26, 2:34 PM
@[Jules the Werewolf](/user/show/913350) it's the diff between writing 200 words of commands versus 3000 words of actual writing. Human writing is better, AI is just easier and faster for some people.
2/2/26, 7:02 AM
At this point, I'd rather let Liam got someone else and Noah got punish :P Dylan could work.
Anonymous
2/2/26, 6:26 AM
Loved this its as great as always!! Hope for more soon!
2/1/26, 8:23 PM
His name being klootzak is frying me LMAO!!!

2/1/26, 9:24 PM
@[AshersCampfire](/user/show/10033395) It’s a pun, really. 😂
Anonymous
2/1/26, 3:02 AM
This one made me feel bad for Liam, didn’t think Noah would just let this happen when he seemed to care so much.

2/1/26, 1:04 PM
@Anonymous yeah man, i get it, we gotta see what happens next tho!
2/1/26, 12:18 AM
WOW! WHOA. WOW. the armpit was so good.

2/1/26, 1:04 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) always lmao
2/1/26, 4:18 AM
This was a hard read. Liam caring about Noah enough to bottom to distract him and then Noah just let's Connor have his way with him? I really hope Noah fixes this without Liam getting completely screwed over... I wasn't expecting the story to get so sad. It was definitely hard to read this one.

2/1/26, 1:04 PM
@[blindmandriving](/user/show/1989297) yeah fs, it was hard to write too but let’s see what happens next!
1/31/26, 10:16 PM
Frankly, I feel like I've just stolen something, because I can't believe I got to read this story without paying for it. I can't get over how good this story is, the kind of emotional journey it goes on, and I will definitely be reading this many times in the future. Well done!
1/31/26, 10:46 AM
Really, really good. I sure do hope you'll keep writing!

1/31/26, 6:55 PM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) Thanks for reading it all the way through! I'm glad this series found an audience that enjoys it so much.