Recent Comments

9/13/25, 2:59 PM
Yay! There's finally a daddy! This was extremely hot and also really funny. I can imagine Kyle's confusion standing there seeing his dildos fucking someone else. I'm kinda bummed out that he intervened and had "cut" the symbiosis that was being created between the team and Danny. It would be interesting to see what would happen if the relationship and the messages define something equal. However it was worth it to get Daddy Lane and Danny boy. We will definitely need more of these two. I also wonder how coach will react given that he's not under the spell of Oby. Can't wait for next week!
9/13/25, 1:06 PM
Wow that was hot! Love the description of his emotions through the entire process. Would love to see if they hookup again.
9/12/25, 7:00 PM
Fantastic work…I’m tempted to give a chapter a try!

9/13/25, 4:13 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Oof, would love this!
9/12/25, 10:47 PM
Thank you for writing this chapter of your story and opening your work up to the larger community. I'm not into the smut as much as you are, but I like the premise and may try writing something.
Anonymous
9/12/25, 4:02 PM
New chapter?

9/12/25, 4:09 PM
@Anonymous Yep! This is a side chapter of Accidental Obedience. Pure smut, doesn’t tie into the larger plot, and it’s set as a community series, so other authors can add chapters if they want. We will resume the main plot next week.
9/11/25, 7:59 PM
I love the Mateo character in this, easily the best character so far. But all the dads in this series have been highlights
Tex
9/11/25, 12:31 AM
I think I'm truly addicted! Worth the wait.
9/9/25, 3:58 AM
This story continues to be fun and poignant. If i wasn't reading it on an erotic gay mind control site I'd think i was reading a YA novel (complimentary). Its interesting to read what's basically an Aardvark story, but from the PoV of the people left in the wake of the change. Reminds me of my favorite story on this site, "Husbros and Son" by Kods (and since you mentioned both in the footnotes, I'm assuming that's not a coincidence). Good luck on future chapters, I'm interested to see what you come up with.

9/10/25, 9:08 AM
@[BlindSeer0](/user/show/381024) I didn't actually read that until after Chapter Two of this story was posted. So, actually, it is a coincidence! As for this being "basically an Aardvark story," I will say he and I have had... some words about that. I don't think I did it consciously, though this comes from a place reminiscent of _The Coronation_. What I'd hasten to point out is that this isn't focused on a long-term TF, but the fallout from a rather quick one, like you pointed out. Thank you for the good luck! There's some interesting stuff coming.

9/10/25, 12:37 PM
@[Travis Ramsey](/user/show/10050627) To be clear, i don't think your work is copying or derivative of Aardvark (or Kods). Your work is your work, and I'm enjoying it for and as YOUR work. There are similarities and they're interesting to point out (especially because you've worked with them), but ultimately I'm here for you and what you've written. Anything else is incidental. (Plus i think you said in one of your footnotes that the TF wasn't even part of the original plan)

9/10/25, 9:12 PM
@[BlindSeer0](/user/show/381024) Hah, thank you again. That does ease my nerves a bit. Further TF wasn't in the cards at first, no. But now there's some fun coming. To quote the Third Doctor in [_The Time Warrior_](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=37HTMmBM2eU)... "A straight line may be the shortest distance between two points, but it is by no means the most interesting!"
9/10/25, 10:17 AM
the transformation is arousing

9/10/25, 4:58 PM
@[taah5b1](/user/show/10063069) Thank you!
9/9/25, 10:22 AM
I agree with BlindSeer0's comment wholeheartedly. What I will say though is that reading this story kinda feels like being edged. What I mean by that is that the writing is so good at keeping me intrigued about what's gonna happen, that I'm like getting hyped for future story beats that might not even happen. At the same time, the erotica part has taken a back seat to the story, which is fine of course, but it definitely leaves me wanting more 🤭 I can definitely relate to Ollie, wanting to squish some big ol' pecs

9/10/25, 9:16 AM
@[ThomBaws](/user/show/908711) Oh, gosh, that's some lovely praise. I am, hahah, quite familiar with edging for long periods, but this is my first time writing a slow-burn. I prefer quick, down-to-business relationships like Ollie and Mo's. That, of course, only happened because I felt behooved to force some erotica into the first chapter. I intend to stick with it nonetheless and show how such a relationship can be done healthily. I'm debating compressing the next two chapters into one as I don't want to drag things out _too_ much. Plus, there's no point in forcing incident to mark time. It's a journal; sometimes there's nothing to really say! Besides... I have big plans for October. Halloween is going to be very entertaining! Ah, but I've said too much already! I relate to Ollie, too. Most musclemen around here are straight, and I can't exactly go up to a dude and go, "Hey, can I grope your chest for my own sexual gratification? It won't be weird, I promise!" Always glad to see your comments, BTW. I look forward to them.