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12/3/23, 4:02 PM
Amazing and super hot story as always. Congrats!
11/28/23, 11:32 PM
Wonderful story!

12/3/23, 3:48 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Glad you enjoyed it!
9/23/23, 7:17 AM
Love this story! There's so many things I would like to say about it that are positive. The description of the muscles and growth, the tension and build up, the Romantic climax! All of it was beautifully done! The only thing I wish was different, is I don't think the post transformation pictures do these muscle Bulls Justice. But, I still loved being able to see what these guys look like, it really helped with the visual aids.

12/3/23, 3:45 PM
@[darkluster4](/user/show/10001301) I'm so glad you loved it! I had a lot of fun writing out the muscle growth and transformation scenes—especially, funny enough, the one that happened over a phone call. I love me some romantic tension with the plot tension, and I'm glad I was able to weave it together. Honestly, I think you're right about the images! I'm thinking of moving to a model where I link "cast inspiration" pics, but don't actually embed them in the story. Then I can (1) have multiple models that inspired me, but also (2) don't have to force the readers to imagine these characters in a specific way. I'll probably update this soon.
12/3/23, 1:16 PM
I really enjoyed this, I hope to see Richard and Luke’s relationship develop further!
12/3/23, 2:29 AM
Another rework! Another successful tightening of events and using what you've built of the world in the future to inform past chapters. Particular representing the lewd, hypersexual nature of pets and Coins and how normal it is. I also love the introduction of some of Aris's pets earlier to ease Jasper into their personalities when he'll inevitably run into them. Oree remains a strong favourite. I love how you write them. So effortlessly charming and seductive. The integrity of the doctor was a nice touch, and Jasper's cunning to answer the question in a way that reduced concerns. Can't wait for chapter 5.
12/2/23, 10:21 PM
You should do a story where Jason hypnotizes Tim.
12/2/23, 12:43 PM
I really enjoy this finale. Its hot and have "happy ending". Cant wait to read more from this stories universe.
12/2/23, 11:01 AM
in my mind, one of Jayson harem betrays him and put him on chastity while he is in his submissive state until he submits fully to the doctor A man can dream
12/2/23, 12:02 AM
Hot and fun and sexy. The nature of the powers of this world is very interesting. Also gay dom top with a harem of good boys of various body types is great! Especially if they love rimming! (Hehe) Seriously though, fun and sexy. Ps. I like how he basically won, or maybe reached a status quo is better. Either way I'm glad he didn't loose.
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12/1/23, 7:53 AM
Omg Conner and Nathan are so cute (and HOT) together. Hope they meet again soon. Also HOT how Nathan seems to be embracing his slut side. Wonder whether he’ll end up feeling differently about his video being shared around school once he fully embraces his sluttiness and immodesty.