Recent Comments

Gaz
1/10/26, 10:41 AM
Hey I really like your writing style, and I love a game reality change story. It’s obvious you have a clear idea who your characters are. As a reader, I’m finding it hard to keep 9 characters in my head. Also, with a choose your own adventure style, you may want to publish a block/thread of chapters at the same time. This is possible using the “Publish on” field. You can select a date more than 7 days from when you publish them (giving the volunteer approval team time to do their magic). Just a suggestions, keep writing, can’t wait to see where this is heading.

1/11/26, 2:19 PM
@[Gaz](/user/show/365297) Really super appreciate this; 9 is a bit much isn't it...hoping to create enough isolating/individualized situations to keep 'em all relevant and cohesive; also hoping to emphasize dif characters and dynamics w/ the many dif story strands...will def keep you readers in mind tho :) That's a great publishing idea (like holy tysm); much is already written so will def employ this! Hope you enjoy
1/11/26, 1:24 AM
Damn what a chapter. Why do i want Agent Tony to be part of his "family" aswell. Maybe he could be a below or slave by Farrow and then Farrow would be back. And wow, that gym scene is so hot. I wonder who snitched about the giant orgy. Maybe a passerby or late student/audience saw whats happening and freaked out. And so Ethan does bottom. So maybe a shapeshifted Derek or Farrow would top him that would be hot. And for his family, and the implications of them being released from his manipulation, i wonder what would happen if Ethan escapes. Hmm.
1/10/26, 11:06 PM
Great and well-written story, thank you. Hot too. As a submissive myself who has experimented with chastity cages I could relate to it. Look forward to future chapters.
1/10/26, 3:31 PM
With scenes as hot as this, I'm missing Oby chapters a lot less.
1/10/26, 2:23 AM
I loved the perspective switches in this, just damn good writing.
1/10/26, 1:31 AM
Oh wow... I wasn't expecting an actual novel sort of story here with depth. This was a pleasant surprise and enjoyable.
1/9/26, 11:29 PM
I hope his agent heartthrob is alright!
1/9/26, 2:19 PM
😏 Hoping these chapters keep on coming!

1/9/26, 11:16 PM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) I reckon I got a couple more left in me :kissing_heart:
1/9/26, 12:39 PM
Pepperoni
1/7/26, 3:18 AM
I absolutely love these chapters, it is by far my favorite current series. My heart jumps (along with other body parts) every time I get an email that another chapter drops. I'm hoping you can continue with these characters forever.

1/8/26, 1:05 AM
@[PSExplorer](/user/show/10064257) Thanks again for all the kind words. Your comments are a huge motivation boost for me, and just encouraging to hear as a first-timer. Forever is a mighty long time, but I’ll do my best to keep you invested as far as I can take it. Xxx

1/8/26, 1:42 AM
@[Lonely Djinn](/user/show/945165) Also, and this is just a suggestion of something I would love to see is maybe some foot/sock worshipping. Since you made Aaron a 'sniffer' I think it could play in nicely with that and also would play in nicely with the whole submission aspect. Anyways, I leave the writing to the professional (you) and enjoy whatever you send our way. 😊

1/8/26, 3:23 AM
@[PSExplorer](/user/show/10064257) I’m more than happy to take requests or suggestions. No promises of course, but you’re right, that would definitely blend nicely with Aaron discovering what he’s into.