Recent Comments

10/11/25, 11:57 PM
Really not a fan of the piss at the start, but everything else was incredibly erotic. Love the party antics. You're really good at that!

10/12/25, 8:01 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) thanks dude! yeah i get it, not for everyone lmao
10/12/25, 12:40 PM
This was just the most exciting chapter of the BEST story on this site. WELL DONE

10/12/25, 7:57 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) yooooo i’m blushing man
10/12/25, 10:55 AM
The story is good, but you frustrate it by teasing without end, never consummating by fucking Liam, caging him in chastity, etc. only teasing, as if Noah is not interested in fucking him really. It's frustrating and boring.

Tim
10/12/25, 11:58 AM
@[Toto27](/user/show/10051657) ever heard of a slow burn? makes it way better anyways

10/12/25, 1:51 PM
@Tim I love this story and I might have agree with you if not for once a month update. I can stand slow burn when it post like weekly but when it once a month, it feel frustrating. But, well I'm not patreon so I guess that what it is but at current pace, I feel like even after this years end, we won't see the end.

hairybear
10/12/25, 6:01 PM
@Tim A slow burn and writing the same chapter 10 times without any character development are two different things, as both characters are one dimensional and evidently incapable of independent thought. There is no burn here, only an awakening awareness that this story may never end, and that this story will probably never develop.

10/12/25, 7:53 PM
@Tim yoo you’re a real one.shoot me a DM on Twitter or drop me an email, I got something for you

10/12/25, 7:54 PM
@[Toto27](/user/show/10051657) gotta have faith my guy lmao
10/12/25, 5:56 AM
Brilliant as always. Good to see the introduction of some new characters too - I'm looking forward to seeing what comes from them.

10/12/25, 7:52 PM
@[tomtales](/user/show/10001207) yeahhh they’re only gonna add to the chaos too
Mark
10/12/25, 7:21 AM
One of my favorite series. Keep it up!

10/12/25, 7:52 PM
@Mark dude thanks for reading!
10/12/25, 12:00 PM
I was JUST reading through this series last time. So happy to get an update on this! This is also such a clever plot omg. So hot and good job writing this.
10/12/25, 3:11 AM
Ooof. Noah is the embodiment of every man I wish I’d met, and still hope to find…. I’m only slightly terrified to keep reading, knowing how closely I relate to Liam, and how much I yearn for someone like Noah. Here’s hoping I can survive Lucas’s masterful writing while Liam survives Noah!!
10/12/25, 2:34 AM
Holy eff. I am so glad I stumbled upon this 😳🫣🥵
10/11/25, 8:45 AM
What a surprise update. Loved how we see the slow corruption of Bael.
10/7/25, 2:11 AM
Love this story! Two characters, one invisible, a complex cyber-dance around something profound, revealed between the lines and texts and games and erotically-charged enhancements in and out of the players' control... gets better with each installment. I could see this on the stage.

10/7/25, 4:15 AM
@[HypnoMutt-1](/user/show/10023035) I'm glad you liked it and chose to leave this comment! It'd be interesting to imagine what this would look like as an (obviously 18+) stage production. Practically a one-man show, unless you gave GMAN some voice-over. I'm probably not the person who could realize any kind of adaptation, but it's always been fun when what I write inspires others to imagine concepts of their own!

10/10/25, 3:39 AM
@[A Voyeur Fan](/user/show/649586) Hmm, could do a split stage where each half is one of their bedrooms and there desks are facing each other with a wall separating them. I'm really enjoying this series.