Recent Comments

Apr 4, 2017
Daniel
8/27/18, 1:25 PM
Very detailed, well written, solid characters, brave, romantic....hot! The way it wrapped up got me a bit emotional, great job dude ! I. J. S.
8/11/18, 9:22 PM
Just reread this beast and wish I'd had the time -- and energy -- to finish it. I really did have an epic novel in mind. (And you can really tell I was in a Tom Robbins period with my writing -- my prose is so playful.) Maybe someday I'll finish this.... I know the ending...
Daniel
8/6/18, 12:00 AM
Nice job- wish I could've met a 'Xander' in high school I. J. S.
Anonymous
4/19/18, 4:30 PM
Please write more
2/9/18, 12:55 AM
Thanks very much, Mdlftr. Maybe Martin will have to add an icon/rating for tears? :)
Mdlftr
2/8/18, 4:11 PM
I just reread chapters 7-8 -9 and cried all over again. They are happy tears and ones of tribute to a well-written, emotionally complex, compelling, positive story. Thank you!
absman420
2/6/18, 6:54 PM
absman420 here! What a great compliment! Especially from a guy whose stories ALWAYS get me hard and cumming!
9/29/17, 11:41 PM
Bluemohawk: Thanks so much for your comments. It's nice to know this story has touched so many people.
Bluemohawk
9/29/17, 11:18 PM
When I read exceptional stories like this, I feel like I am witnessing a great talent unfold. I am 55 and related to so much in this story. This is easily one of my favorites online or in print. Thank you for sharing this masterpiece with the world, and keep writing!
Jun 25, 2017
screamingmoist
8/27/17, 5:06 PM
@bateriam glad you enjoyed it!