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Anonymous
9/1/18, 6:17 PM
Above the author says that chapter 4 hasn’t been released yet. Does that mean one was written?
9/1/18, 4:20 PM
Thank you guys. I'm happy the things I was trying to express came through clearly. I don't have a sequel immediately planned but I do have some thoughts for a future continuation. I've been letting this story cook for quite a while and I reached the point where I had to set it down and make some decisions before I could figure out where else it might go.
LongtimeFan
9/1/18, 3:53 PM
AMAZING! This story was phenomenal in every way: a kind, thoughtful protagonist, a wish that didn’t immediately ruin people’s lives (clever and sweet!), an achingly hot muscle worship bit, and a sex scene so amazingly hot, so perfectly written, that I felt like I was right there (I almost always skip the sex scenes, but this was PERFECTION). Amazing job!
Anonymous
9/1/18, 3:53 PM
Oh this is good!
Danny
9/1/18, 2:57 PM
I love that, whether he knows it or not, Jack's wish has made having sex with him more addictive than any drug ever could be...
9/1/18, 1:46 PM
Loved it! I hope there is more!
9/1/18, 1:44 PM
Wow. That was really hot! Smart, kind wish, followed by smoking hot sex. Are you planning a second wish story?
Matt
9/1/18, 1:40 PM
More!!! Oh dear god more of that!! Love to see Finn come back sheepishly wanting to feel what he felt here!! Damn, well done!!
Apr 4, 2017
Daniel
8/27/18, 1:25 PM
Very detailed, well written, solid characters, brave, romantic....hot! The way it wrapped up got me a bit emotional, great job dude ! I. J. S.
8/11/18, 9:22 PM
Just reread this beast and wish I'd had the time -- and energy -- to finish it. I really did have an epic novel in mind. (And you can really tell I was in a Tom Robbins period with my writing -- my prose is so playful.) Maybe someday I'll finish this.... I know the ending...