Recent Comments

LongtimeFan
10/22/18, 11:26 PM
Fantastic! Even though this was the "exposition" chapter, I love how you still made it into a character study of Pierce as well. You truly are one of the best writers on this site. :) And hooray for your mantra! I feel safer about Todd now. Can't wait to see what happens next...but take your time writing! Do what YOU like at your own pace. You'll always have at least one reader!
10/22/18, 10:26 PM
My motto as a writer: No Character Left Behind. I knew this was going to be a heavy exposition chapter -- it's basically a two-man one-act play -- but this seemed like a logical place to break it before the action of Day 3 really kicks in.
nycboot
10/22/18, 8:56 PM
...and please don't forget Todd. :)
nycboot
10/22/18, 6:37 PM
I love this story! This is kind of the "explanation" portion, but Pierce is such an amazing creation. He's endlessly fascinating - I just love reading about him. I look forward to the end of this story, but I strongly encourage you to keep Pierce in your arsenal in case he has other friends he wants to treat in a royal way.
10/20/18, 11:57 PM
I totally agree with "LongtimeFan." I love this series, but after this installment, my empathy totally went away with the hedonistic newlyweds and landed with poor Todd. He was dropped so suddenly that I hope that he's picked up again. Maybe he ends up with Pierce and the latter brings him out of his shell.
LongtimeFan
10/20/18, 5:48 PM
P.S. Out of everyone, I feel the worst for Todd...I hope he gets a happy conclusion in the story!
LongtimeFan
10/20/18, 5:46 PM
Ha ha, I knew it! I guessed that Pierce was using Mariposa to keep an eye on his friends. But I only figured it out because of your amazing writing, Cris, and how you scattered clues throughout the story. Fantastic stuff! Thank you for always producing such incredible stories. :)
Anonymous
10/20/18, 4:11 PM
whyyyy didn't Charles and Chico have sex, such a missed opportunity to drive the plot forward and include some real sex
Anonymous
10/20/18, 3:51 PM
beau w pierce? wow haha
Anonymous
10/20/18, 3:43 PM
This such a great series. I don't know many authors on this site that evoke such emotions; hating Pierce and Chico, and empath for Derek and Charles still trying maintain their monogamy even with their changes. My only problem is I feel blue balled from waiting for the next update. Please keep it up!