Recent Comments

4/28/20, 7:51 PM
I loved it. I was waiting for this continuation, and now I've read it, you didn't disappoint. Good dynamic character writing in a fun / interesting / weird theme. The over arching narrative tugs at something more profound about the male human condition and a man's 'sense of identity', then the sum of either chapter's parts. Hit all the basses for me :) I'm delighted for you, dude.
4/26/20, 10:18 PM
Please finish the story off if you could.
4/20/20, 4:58 AM
I hope you update this.
Anonymous
4/13/20, 12:50 AM
WHAT did I just get hard to?
swngbthways
4/12/20, 4:11 AM
I have to agree with what was said. A BRILLIANT piece of literature. It's transcendental. I think you NEED this published. ;)
Martin
4/7/20, 2:34 PM
What a great story! I have to admit, the name "Abe" turned me off right away, which was the reason it took so long for me to even start to read this. But man, was this a ride. You've got such a huge and wicked imagination. I'd love to be in your head, for real!
nycboot
4/6/20, 11:27 PM
Like John, once you get over the shock of the thing happening, you go with the flow. A very nice story. I hope there is a continuation. No mind control that I see, but...who knows....
4/6/20, 8:42 AM
Bravo!! I've read this twice now and have been moved to joyful tears each time. Masterfully done!
nycboot
4/1/20, 2:18 AM
Nothing to do with mind control but a real well-crafted idea for a story! One really empathizes with the plan and protagonist! Thank you!