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Anonymous
2/15/25, 11:33 AM
I just read this. I would love to see more!
Anonymous
2/15/25, 10:49 AM
Best series I've read so far. I guess it was very relatable to me. Great job!
2/13/25, 8:45 PM
Loving this story . Can’t wait to see what the reason for the dreams are 😊😊😊
2/12/25, 8:28 PM
Super hot
2/11/25, 3:01 AM
Raz is really having a difficult time. Having no control or peace as he becomes every horny camper boy's toy.
HypnoMutt
2/10/25, 1:36 PM
This entire chapter is the image of a fever dream, led by Mo's distorted awareness and carried out through the increasingly fragmented narrative and dialogue as you open a window on the pack's pre-baptism TF. I read this chapter during "the wolf's hour" in local time - between 3-4 AM - an appropriate liminal space where one day transforms to the next. I also appreciate the explication in the comments that penetrates the layers of your writing and expands our understanding of the motivations, influences and context that's driving these complex characters through a fast-paced scenario of instability and increasing threat. This is amazing and challenging work that pulls me in completely with every new post.

2/11/25, 2:27 AM
@[HypnoMutt](/user/show/10023035) I'm so pleased you are enjoying it. It's posts like these that really get me cranking out more chapters. Working on the next one presently.
2/9/25, 12:36 AM
Wow, a great chapter! Yousef is getting closer to our resident hocky bear. The primacy of the wolf over the man due to the full moon is presumably why he did not recognize his own father as one of the mondjugen. But I'm sure there will be some very awkward conversations come dawn... I wonder how wolves view the incestuous couplings that doubtless happened. Tom has gone AWOL... I wonder how the tragedy of not being able to reconcile with his daughter is going to impact his relationship with Larry. I want another perspective from inside Pete's mind... I'm curious to get a deeper work to see how different his enthrallment to Alpha Ruiz has made him. The thing about his eyes less bright is a little strange. Alphas seem to be having very high turn-over rates recently. Two assassinations... based on everybody's reactions, that seems extremely rare. What exactly is going on? And the Wolf King is going to be back soon, to collect his seer...