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9/3/20, 4:18 PM
> Excited to see you reposting this in smaller chunks. > I know. However it got here in the first place -- I didn't originally post this story here -- they threw it up in one big chunk, nearly 80K words! It was a little daunting, so I wanted to make it more welcoming to the first time reader. Also, I've done a substantial amount of rewriting. > For now, the characters seem to have kept their original names, so I’m interested to see when that changes. > It could have with the Sheriff. Mark Lane is a person I know (knew) IRL -- the guy who inspired the story MILK MAN, as a matter of fact. That's actually the reason I decided to leave the Sheriff's name alone -- homage. I'll let you know who's real and who's not as we go along. W.B is also a real person, whose real name I don't know (someone I knew from the MGS site -- WBHulk -- who wrote a lot of fun Hulk-sex stories -- so I gave him a cameo in this). > I can’t wait to read the new chapters you’re writing. > There are nine sections of BOOK ONE -- I'll post a section a day -- and then I have four sections done of BOOK TWO -- I'll post them once a week. Hopefully, I can keep that schedule.
9/3/20, 3:42 PM
Excited to see you reposting this in smaller chunks. For now, the characters seem to have kept their original names, so I'm interested to see when that changes. I love re-reading this story that's gotten me off so many times, and I can't wait to read the new chapters you're writing.
8/23/20, 1:33 PM
Wow at first I was a little hard pressed to find enough time to dive into reading this story but you really didn't waste a word. Good world building, nice descriptions, good pacing ^.^ glad I found time finally Haha
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8/22/20, 3:45 AM
Hoping for oral in werewolf form.
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8/21/20, 10:35 AM
I can't believe I missed this! What an interesting story - I really hope you keep writing!
8/19/20, 7:59 AM
really nice story !! will there be a second chapter ?
8/14/20, 5:47 PM
Sorry but this made no sense.
8/13/20, 8:11 AM
I just re-uploaded an edited copy to address the mighty need of spelling & grammar corrections 😅 I hope this will greatly improve the reading experience.
8/12/20, 8:47 AM
I really like this because it's an alien story. The werewolves look human, but they don't think like humans. They have different morays and folkways, different beliefs and outlooks then any human culture. Those in turn are motivated by their physiology, which doesn't function like humans. They need less sleep, consume more (and probably different kinds) of food, can eat raw meat, run faster and longer than humans and have different needs. Oh, and they don't seem to have women, making them a mono gender society. Add in the wolf spirits that live in their head and influence the way they think, including preventing them from committing sexual assualt and you have a culture completely unlike any human culture. And the army and Yates pretty much treat them as such. definitely looking forward to more.
8/11/20, 8:13 PM
I'm enjoying this story and the developing relationship between Aed and Tim. I look forward to where you take the story next.