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9/4/20, 9:06 PM
> Friends, welcome to a new gay dating site... > Please enjoy this lovely plant as a bonus gift!
9/4/20, 11:31 AM
> Despite it having no sex and featuring a woman, I really enjoyed Tully’s chapter. Though we spent so little time with her, I feel like your writing expertly illustrated her personality such that I can see her in other situations. > Tully is a big problem for me. I went through an internal battle about including a female cast member in what is, ultimately, a gay sex story. Obviously, she's an X-Files homage, so her presence makes sense. I just don't know what to do with her in the long run. We don't see her much in Book One, but she's definitely unraveling the mystery in Book Two. I think my issue with her is that she's too good to kill off... but we'll see what I do in the end. At some point -- according to the rules of storytelling -- she HAS to confront her former partner, Wolf Murdock. > There is only one criticism I have, though, that you described her as a dullard, and she seems neither slow nor stupid. > Me? Use a word wrong? Not possible! Hahaha -- I meant to say that I think of her as lacking excitement or personality, not that's she's stupid. Perhaps the actual word "dull"?
9/4/20, 11:16 AM
> Definitely like this vignette style of storytelling; it reminds me of the serial books in 17th and 18th Japan minus the ad pages. > Okay, that reference predates mine! I'm using a soap-opera/ team comic-book technique, leaving the reader at a small cliff-hanger at the end of each vignette. It's a page-turning technique. It's also the only way to manage what has become a huge cast! > Looking forward to seeing what you have in store for the army unit. > Me, too!
Gasuda
9/4/20, 7:37 AM
Great writing as always, absman420! I remember stumbling across the Pollination comic years ago, and I'm delighted to hear that you're continuing it. Despite it having no sex and featuring a woman, I really enjoyed Tully's chapter. Though we spent so little time with her, I feel like your writing expertly illustrated her personality such that I can see her in other situations. There is only one criticism I have, though, and that's that you described her as a dullard, and she seems neither slow nor stupid. Rather, I'd say she's just no-frills and to the point. That said, I'm looking forward to seeing more of this great story be re-posted. :]
9/4/20, 12:26 AM
Glad to see this back.
9/3/20, 11:38 PM
Definitely like this vignette style of storytelling; it reminds me of the serial books in 17th and 18th Japan minus the ad pages. Looking forward to seeing what you have in store for the army unit.
9/3/20, 4:18 PM
> Excited to see you reposting this in smaller chunks. > I know. However it got here in the first place -- I didn't originally post this story here -- they threw it up in one big chunk, nearly 80K words! It was a little daunting, so I wanted to make it more welcoming to the first time reader. Also, I've done a substantial amount of rewriting. > For now, the characters seem to have kept their original names, so I’m interested to see when that changes. > It could have with the Sheriff. Mark Lane is a person I know (knew) IRL -- the guy who inspired the story MILK MAN, as a matter of fact. That's actually the reason I decided to leave the Sheriff's name alone -- homage. I'll let you know who's real and who's not as we go along. W.B is also a real person, whose real name I don't know (someone I knew from the MGS site -- WBHulk -- who wrote a lot of fun Hulk-sex stories -- so I gave him a cameo in this). > I can’t wait to read the new chapters you’re writing. > There are nine sections of BOOK ONE -- I'll post a section a day -- and then I have four sections done of BOOK TWO -- I'll post them once a week. Hopefully, I can keep that schedule.
9/3/20, 3:42 PM
Excited to see you reposting this in smaller chunks. For now, the characters seem to have kept their original names, so I'm interested to see when that changes. I love re-reading this story that's gotten me off so many times, and I can't wait to read the new chapters you're writing.
8/23/20, 1:33 PM
Wow at first I was a little hard pressed to find enough time to dive into reading this story but you really didn't waste a word. Good world building, nice descriptions, good pacing ^.^ glad I found time finally Haha
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8/22/20, 3:45 AM
Hoping for oral in werewolf form.