Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/12/17, 8:58 AM
Nice. Bittersweet and authentic
redbird
2/12/17, 5:37 AM
well worth the wait. great writing and development.
Anonymous
2/12/17, 4:45 AM
Wow . .what a great chapter..great work
Anonymous
2/12/17, 4:41 AM
I love this story
Marty
2/4/17, 6:04 AM
Wait a minute. Phillipe = horse lover. Equus = horse. Phil = Groundhog. Groundhog Day was yesterday. WTF?
Anonymous
1/29/17, 5:09 AM
Really good writing! You've definitely got your 80's down with all the details. The fact that Scotty can remember and compare his flashback night to his future life makes this all the more poignant.
sarah
1/29/17, 4:25 AM
One of my favorite story themes is when the protagonist has hits past altered. This usually happens in an instant, but in your story it paying out in real time. I love it!
1/28/17, 2:20 AM
Looks like Scott may end up with a very gay friendly future at this rate! Please continue!
Anonymous
1/28/17, 12:19 AM
Love this
1/27/17, 5:57 PM
Typo fixed. Ironic, because I've always been annoyed by the way Billy Joel pronounces the word "momento" in his song, "Souvenir". (By the way, you misspelled "misspelling".)