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9/6/20, 10:22 AM
> I’m hoping Coach and his wrestling team get pollinated some time in this story. You know I appreciate your wrestling perspectives. > Heeheehee I have a life-long buddy (a wrestling coach) who always says to me, "Wrestling again? What is it with you?" And I'll say, "But it's so gay!" And his wife will say, "You two get a room!"
nycboot
9/6/20, 12:28 AM
Wow, absman420. You've really reworked a lot. The scene with the boys felt like a kind of filler in version 1, but here you've made it so much more integral to the plot. You've built up Tony's initial resistance so much that when he finally does get the plant it's much more significant. And the thread with Murdock and the old man is also revised in a way that I really like. I think I mentioned this long ago, but the main thing that "gets" me about this story (asides from being one of the hottest stories on this site) is that there is no sex. Sure the guys stick their dicks into the plant, but there's no sex. And yet it's one the most sexiest stories. I can't tell you how many times I've j/o thinking of various parts of the story.
9/6/20, 12:18 AM
Robby Ray Robby Ray Robby Ray (if you get the meaning, if not, no matter...and the original is Bobby Ray) What a fun series this is going to be. I so like Rubbersome's Pollination and can't wait to follow this journey. I'm hoping Coach and his wrestling team get pollinated some time in this story. You know I appreciate your wrestling perspectives.
9/5/20, 8:19 PM
> everything about this story leaves me wanting more > Don't worry -- it's barely gotten started.
Ozark
9/5/20, 5:22 PM
everything about this story leaves me wanting more. its so hot!
9/5/20, 3:36 PM
> If anything, her inclusion adds to the realism and gives the story meaningful conflict in her vying against the efforts of her now-rogue partner. > I think what's interesting is they all view her as a threat and she has no idea of that. > I’m definitely looking forward to more of her, and discovering what her ultimate fate will be. Will she be killed? Changed in a different way? > I don't think I'll kill her. @rubbrsome did some fun work on this story and used her as a featured character -- I liked what he did, though I don't think it's "canon". I had some fun with her in Book Two and want to see her some more, too. But I really don't know anybody's final fate yet.
Gasuda
9/5/20, 12:39 PM
Personally, I feel that the inclusion of a female character, when done right, is not a bad thing in a gay sex story. If anything, her inclusion adds to the realism and gives the story meaningful conflict in her vying against the efforts of her now-rogue partner. I'm definitely looking forward to more of her, and discovering what her ultimate fate will be. Will she be killed? Changed in a different way? Allowed to remain wholly human as the world is overtaken, thus providing us with an outside perspective to the very end? This story as a whole is tantalizing in it's possibilities, as well, and I'm looking forward to reading the rest!
9/5/20, 11:17 AM
> I remember first reading the OG Pollination (with Mike and Smitty) way, way, WAY back in the day. It’s as hot and creative now as it was then! > Thank you! This is still then, though. We get to the new stuff with Part 10 > I can’t wait to see in which directions Book II branches out! > Hahaha! Your pun allows you to stay in the game! One of the big things to happen between Book One and Book Two was Smartphones. When I originally wrote this, I think we were all using Motorola's and Blackberries. A phone was a phone, not a mini-computer. But it's a game-changer in terms of story-telling. Imagine those boys in Rural Indiana now -- they'd be making Tik Tok videos of their transformations and all over IG with before/during/after pics. That's one of the things I'm dealing with now, as I'm writing Book Two.
9/4/20, 11:39 PM
I'm so happy Pollination is back up! I remember first reading the OG Pollination (with Mike and Smitty) way, way, WAY back in the day. It's as hot and creative now as it was then! It's impressive that you can keep such a large cast organized over such a long story. I can't wait to see in which directions Book II branches out!
9/4/20, 9:40 PM
I'd like to remind everyone that when I wrote this I was just making it up as I went along, following threads (or branches, rather) that interested me and seeing where they went. I had no uber-plot in my head, really -- only the most vague of notions. With that in mind, Snake was never intended to become one of the main characters of this story. But in working with him, he quickly became one of my favorites and so his role has grown. (And I've known the whole time what he's going to Canada for -- which you'll see in Book Two.) Same with the rural Indiana boys. I got into the relationship between Danny and Chuckie, as well as the relationship between Tony Lenoldi and his Dad, and they soon became the central to that storyline. Watch as W.B. and Keith all but disappear from the narrative. I'm pretty good about holding together a large cast, but sometimes characters slip through.