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9/7/20, 2:37 PM
i always loved the part with the military. When this story first came out, i had a friend that I had a huge crush on join the army, and I always pictured him as the jarhead that gets transformed- that fantasy has gotten me off many times in the past, hopefully he will make an appearance in Book 2!
9/7/20, 11:15 AM
> are you planning on bringing back some characters from the og story such as Mike Milano ? > It has always been my intent to leave the Original Story pristine, as a complete stand-alone. I never wanted this story to be thought of as a sequel or continuation of the Original. Even as I'm gathering these characters together in Book Two, I've only played with the idea of a cameo -- but rejected it. Same reason.
Ozark
9/7/20, 5:12 AM
i loved this chapter so much and how all the stories tie in at the end. are you planning on bringing back some characters from the og story such as Mike Milano ?
nycboot
9/7/20, 12:04 AM
Yeah, the opening scene with Robbie Ray was just a grabber, right? It's irrelevant to the story...unless you plan to bring back air travel. (And if so, why not Mike Milano...)
9/6/20, 6:58 PM
> It’s a shame FLYING back to Kansas wasn’t an option for these big guys,unless you tweaked it from the original? > Nope -- no flying. At least, not if Tully was right and that's what killed Robbie Ray....?
EJG
9/6/20, 1:48 PM
It's a shame FLYING back to Kansas wasn't an option for these big guys,unless you tweaked it from the original?
EJG
9/6/20, 1:46 PM
'Buckle your seatbelt,Dorothy,'coz Kansas is NOT going bub-bye'
9/6/20, 1:01 PM
> Rereading it, I noticed just how short many of those scenes are. > And this chapter is the shortest in the whole series, too. > You’ve got a great way of giving us just enough tantalizing detail, then cutting away to get the reader imagine what’s happened (which can be even hotter than graphically depicting it). > That's old school horror movie technique -- if I don't show it to you, you have to imagine it yourself, which is ALWAYS infinitely greater/ worse than what would be shown. You're exactly right!
9/6/20, 12:15 PM
This chapter has some of my favorite scenes (like Tony and his father, plus Snake and the middle-aged bikers). Rereading it, I noticed just how short many of those scenes are. You've got a great way of giving us just enough tantalizing detail, then cutting away to get the reader imagine what's happened (which can be even hotter than graphically depicting it).
9/6/20, 10:33 AM
>I think I mentioned this long ago, but the main thing that “gets” me about this story... is that there is no sex. Sure the guys stick their dicks into the plant, but there’s no sex. > I hate to be the bearer of bad news: Book Two has sex. Sorry. > I can’t tell you how many times I’ve j/o thinking of various parts of the story > Mission Accomplished! Most of my stories begin as masturbation/ sexual fantasies of mine and I just develop the scenario. That they cause you to riff on my theme, or imagine you're a character as you j/o is exactly how I intend them. That makes me happy!